While spending a week in Manehattan, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon encounter Babs Seed once again, the two hoping to avoid the same mistakes from their last meeting. However, when Silver Spoon does most of the talking and impresses Babs with how much she has changed, Diamond can't help but feel jealous of her friend. And when hiding her jealousy becomes a little too much for Diamond, she'll have to not only revisit Babs later in the day, but also explain to Silver Spoon how she's feeling.
Thanks to Snowybee for proofreading this story.
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Finally, I've been waiting for this one. Okay, now that's out of the way I can't say I have any real problems with this story aside from that fact that it feels a bit short, at least to me. You probably could expand on this universe a bit more. Anyways, great story! You know, I'm might do a chapter in my story Broken Diamond where that Diamond has her first meeting with that universe's Babs Seed... Dunno yet.
7272933 Yeah, I can definitely understand why you and others might find the story to be a bit on the short side. Expanding on a story's own universe a little more does sound like something to keep in mind for future stories, whether they're slice of life stories like this one or grand adventures. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for the comment!
7272943 You're welcome, and glad I could help.
I was gonna write a story like this! Except Diamond and Babs become pen pals. I sure hope I can still pull it off now that yours seems so similar.
7273126 That's definitely unexpected!
Despite the similarities, you're more than welcome to write that idea if you want. And knowing how talented of a writer you are, I know that you'd be able to do an excellent job on such a story. More Diamond, Silver, and Babs is always a good thing as far as I'm concerned. Anyway, thank you for taking a look at the story and for commenting. I appreciate it!
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Thanks. I'll definitely write it now.
Not a bad story, but I hope for drama's sake that Silvy, Di and Babs are a little more antagonistic towards each other if they meet up again in the show.
Still, your dialogue sounded like it came straight from the mouths of the characters and your use of descriptive prose was so impressive it felt like I was there, so yep... I liked it.
7274217 Yeah, I can definitely see the two sides being more antagonistic toward each other depending on the circumstances. Anyway, thank you for commenting and for checking out the story! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I guess they write stories for fimfiction?
7274681 Oops!
Thanks for catching that typo. I appreciate it!
Wow...this was an awesomely original idea! Keep it up!
7276918 I'll keep trying to do my best! Thank you for checking out the story and for the compliment!
Wow just wow love how you wrote diamond
7292886 Yeah, Diamond Tiara is definitely a fun character to write. And thank you for the comment and for checking out the story!
This was very lovely to read. Nicely written, well paced, and I love how you characterised Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon.
Thanks for the great read, Manaphy
7297332 You're welcome! And thank you for checking out the story. I appreciate it!
D'aww
No matter how many times I come back to this it warms my heart to read. I love Silver/Diamond/Babs stories.
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Thanks to you, I was inspired to make it a full-out series. Here's the link.
7470654 That's awesome! I'll be sure to check it out as soon as possible, and I hope it does well.
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Thanks! I hope you enjoy it!
These type of character never came to mind to me which makes me glad I read this!