Sassy Saddles tries to help prepare a new boutique for a large, jolly pony. However, Sassy's task soon becomes a struggle to avoid punching her client.
Thanks to WiseFireCracker and the parasprite for proofreading.
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6438816 You're welcome. I'm glad to hear the story brightened your day, and I hope things improve for you in the future!
That was truly amazing my friend! I've come to expect great things from you, but this was something else! I loved it all! You should do comedy more often (if you so desired) you're really good at it. Whoa Nelly was a hilarious character! Did you make her up yourself?
6438984 Whoa Nelly is the fat pony that appears at the end of "Canterlot Boutique". Her cutie mark has her own face on it, which partly inspired her characterization in this story. Anyway, thank you for reading it, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
6438992 I don't think I've seen that one yet, very nice use if her though. This was an amazing piece of work!
"Whoa Nelly"
Guess her parents couldn't say anything else when she came out.
6439512 Maybe so.
Anyway, thanks for looking at the story. I appreciate it.
Although I have a different name for her, this was awesome!
6440721 Yeah, she does go by many names. I just used the one Derpibooru uses. Anyway, thanks for looking at the story. I'm glad you found it enjoyable!
Hmm, I would've liked a different ending, to be honest. Like Nelly realizing she's going a little too far and feeling sorry for it. Kinda feel bad for her being portrayed as an obese idiot by so many people.
I can't believe I didn't see the comedy tag on this! This was really nicely done. It's written in your usual writing style, which I can tell by the formal punctuation and grammar, yet it fits the comedy category. Seems like you do have quite a knack for writing comedy, eh?
6817235 Yeah, it was something different from the usual genres I write for. It was fun working on this if I recall correctly, and I might dabble in a few more comedy stories in the future. Anyway, thank you for checking this story out. I appreciate it!