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leave the two Twilight's magic - leave the two, Twilight's magic
both guard scrambled - both guards scrambled
darkness left both she - darkness left, both she
sounded like when mid-orgasm - sounded like when in mid-orgasm
be anymore relaxed - be any more relaxed
if she was in - if she were in
some butter - some almond butter
stripy - stripey
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Ember has a ways to go before she feels and understands the power of friendship, but Gel is already helping her with that. I like the way you're developing that portion of the story arc so far.
I'd make a joke about Luna and Celestia going on vacation in the middle of a crisis, but when is Equestria not in the midst of one crisis or another. They could wait for a thousand moons and not get a better opportunity.
And more Zecorashy Hugger for a happy ending. Things are developing nicely so far, but I sense drama ahead.
7148924 There is drama ahead, of course. And yeah, trying to balance Ember learning the lessons of friendship without bludgeoning it all down to a 10min sequence... ohwait!
Zecora is the 'older mare' in the little threesome, but neither Shy nor Tree seem to mind having a more experienced partner, they are all, like, souls born to the wild, man...
Did you see, I even squeezed in a cake joke?
let's
Let's
let's
lets see... gel has first actual release, looses control of clones, and seems to be finding it harder to split.... is he starting to become a true biological life?!?!
and celestia would have noticed the green magic of her doppleganger. a spell exists to discise magic color. is that planned for this?
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"I say, the princess' magic seems a little on the... uh, green side today?" Cordially Invited nudged his companion.
Fancy Pants raised an eyebrow, his monocle balanced perfectly. "My dear chap, you didn't hear? She has a cold."
Wait. So... The Deer are just staying in the barn? Not gonna deal with them? At all?
7320880 Well, they don't trust them to set them loose again, and what else could they do? Twilight doesn't like venison and Gilda might, but she couldn't eat a whole one...