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Be careful what you wish for...
BDSM goo ponies and egg-laying changeling queens are one thing, but hammy role-play, Bonny? You go too far!
I sit here. Having just written 1400 words that make me cry.
It is the capstone. The end of this story. I thought I was done, I thought it was ended.
But it isn't. I realize how much I allude to in those 1400 words, of things having changed for the stranger, and I realize I am doing that thing I hate, where I use exposition, rather than just showing what happens. I am not going to shred those 1400 words, but I don't think I am ready to give them up yet.
My back is still sore, this pone needs to have a more relaxed afternoon, I will be back with full-on updates tomorrow, I hope
music changed and not - music changed, and not
slowly building, thrumming - slowly building thrumming
moved quicker but - moved faster, but --or-- moved more quickly, but
the report it built - the rapport it had built
how intimate into her - how intimately into her
Celestia took a deep breathe. - Celestia took a deep breath.
she wasn't quite sure - she hadn't been quite sure
flopped on her side - flopped onto her side
to stop from giggling - to stop herself from giggling
- Is this a euphemism for 'stop working'? If so, awesome, I learned something new again!
*****
Such a sweet denouement on the Tree Hugger/Vinyl Scratch storyline!
Princess Celestia's prank is slightly meaner spirited than her character usually allows, but it was clear that this particular pony had it coming. All over him.
Somehow, I doubt it.
7119106 It is a euphemism for 'stop thinking about the situation and just go with it'
Yes, her prank was a little meaner than usual, but she had tried subtle already, subtle hadn't worked. While the prank was a touch mean, it was also private, his peers didn't have to see it and he likely wouldn't say a word about it.
other's
Wow, you would think Lord Such would try to please the Princess at any cost :P
7120329 Damn boofheads aren't worthy of the princesses anyway. Where were they when any large conflict was happening, hiding in their safety deposit boxes?
La historia se separó del personaje principal, como dijo Homero Simpson déjalo mientras vas ganando