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Sweet!
Then Hope meets Chryssy and hugs happen!
Keep going! ;)
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Oh you don't need to keep telling me this... but thank you for commenting. A single comment is worth a hundred likes to me.
7256765 it's my signature, all first-time comments on chapters get it.
We like to think it as consistent encouragement over time.
:you got celestia pregnant? that's great!
:ok, wait a second. Celestia?
:Eh, whatever. We've got gender bender deer, parasitic pleasure plants, cuddly changelings, and a sexy version of a daring-do dungeon. We can handle getting a princess pregnant.
...
:OH NO! WE GOT CELESTIA PREGNANT! WHAT IF SHE DOESN"T WANT TO BE PREGNANT AND BANISHES US!
she wavered - she had wavered --or-- she was wavering
learn to better use of it - learn to better use of it
seemed to right together - seemed so right together
was warm and softness - was warmth and softness
as Applejack kissing him - as Applejack kissed him --or-- as Applejack began/started kissing him
I need you in me, Rara. - Ah need you in me, Rara.
three female voice - three female voices
now that she was it - now that she saw it
looked at Celestia in the eyes - looked at Celestia in the eyes
leaking down one though - leaking down one thigh
Rara moved off his - Rara moved off of his
*****
Looks like things are wrapped up for the most part with the changelings.
when... and sometimes why?
I hope that Chrissi's awe at being in a castle doesn't turn to jealousy. A small risk though, she seems more focused on being a good mother.
Pregnant Celestia! and for good measure, !
So much steamy action in the final act (or is that acts ) of this chapter! I hadn't ever considered an Applejack Celestia pairing before.
Those deer are in for a free meal if the group of lovers are still close when all the implications become clear.
7256942 It just came to me, in the last moment that it was about time Celestia got something she really wanted. Also, found a pronoun mistake while fixing those.
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Found one more.
amazing filling of the stallion, a real stallion and not just her sister or mate playing, ground - amazing feeling of the stallion, a real stallion and not just her sister or mate playing, as he ground
7257018 Cheers. These sunday afternoon chapters always seem to have a few mistakes more than usual, I normally want to write in the morning, when my brain is nice and fresh. Damn pathfinder taking up my day.
If anyone, it had to be AJ.
After all, imagine if it had been Pinkie.
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I dunno, I just can't picture an R63'ed Pinkie in AJ's place. She's always seemed so much of a female figure when you filter out the clowning around part-- which might explain her fetish for being on the receiving end of a pastry filler. Hmm, that would be a challenge to write, Pinkie as a mom (typically shipped with Al-, er, Cheese Sandwich). Would she keep being the hyper pony she is or tone it down for her foals? Also, cupcakes and soda does not make for proper nutrition for a growing child. Pinkie would also have to expand her culinary skills to include things beyond desserts and junk food. That said, Pinkie's kids would have EPIC birthdays.
Ah
'splainin'
Also, given the current state of the town, I think Pinkie might need to make some alterations to her welcome ritual.
Hi, welcome to Ponyville! Here's your invitation to your Welcome-to-Ponyville Party, and here's your invitation to the Post-Welcome-to-Ponyville-Party Orgy!
Quickened? What?
Celestia's pregnant now? What?
Applejack? What?
I'm confused? What?
7327579 To 'quicken' can mean to grant life, or for something that is beginning. Celestia is indeed now with foal, and by our favorite farm pony mare. If you think you are confused, try poor Applejack!
ch12-13
7256837 Don't forget THEM giant ants. (couldn't help it)
Query for 'D', I'm guessing Gel had assumed he needed to introduce himself here, it's a little unstated.'?
7327596 Those deer get everywhere, they cause the Quickening maybe?
And now for a little 'Sunny Apple'.
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OR
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7555131 Oh dear, I shall not spoil, but one of those links comes really close to the current plot.