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I think the comment last time about whether there could be more sex is partially valid, but part of what makes this story good is that it actually has a proper storyline. I wouldn't want you to compromise the story just to squeeze more clop scenes in.
The solution is of course to have the villain for the next arc be one that can create lots of sex scenes.
7519382 Heh, I think that reader was being sarcastic... I think. Hence Velvet's reply.
I do wonder about Gel. It's not really a question he could answer himself, rather it would take the author; is Gel's fluid nature genetic and able to be passed on to his children? The last arc had a new type of changeling that could assimilate other ponies through a forced transformation. Would this mean Gel's offspring would also exhibit that trait? Would that fluidic trait be halved (or more) for each generation or would it pop up at random, like the Cakes having a unicorn foal?
...or this is all too close to spoilers and the question cannot be answered?
7519512 The answer has already been given... somewhere in the story...
Okay, yeah, I can't see you wanting to reread all of this thing to find out that Winged Pattern has shown herself to have some of that gift...
Diamond dog laws are kinda bullshit honestly, they would probably be better off if they were actually invaded and taken over, might get a better government in charge.
7519817 Thanks, all fixed!
"As ruler of the Ponyville principality in the sovereign nation of Equestria, I hereby sentence you to sixty hours in the dildo-go-round!" *bangs gavel*
7519912 Joke's on you, the gavel is actually a double-ended dildo with a handle attached!
7519922 The pinnacle of Equestrian engineering.
Sparkle
"The
vamponies were, or vampony was,
"I have,"
I think Equestria needs a new law: All Equestrian citizens converted to another species retain all rights as Equestrian citizens. This overrides 207, paragraph 5.
They better watch their backs around Gruff and Elijah. The diamond dog looks the type to hold grudges, and the horse is either genuine in his hatred of "monsters" or he wants to see Equestria weakened, or perhaps even both. (Spoiler tag added in case my idle speculation proves true.)
If DIamond Dogs are in anyway related to canines, would a human have easier control over them if they were any good with canines normally?
Rover.
SIT.
7519946 Thanks for fixes, as always. Notice I slipped you into the "thank you" list? You have helped improve me, as a writer, it means a lot!
As for the speculation, I probably should have put up some exposition before this, explaining that for the most part Equestrian law is 'more of a guideline' in that Celestia manages such issues herself. I hate exposition, and this isn't going to be a big thing, or last much longer.
The international ramifications are, indeed, interesting. The Prince seems mostly hostile to the ponies of Equestria 'sullying' themselves with other races. As for the griffon, he played his cards very close to his chest for most of it, but ultimately got to find out where the other delegates' interests lie.
Ember is hot-headed, fiercely loyal, and completely intolerant of any friends of her friends getting hurt. Would she have gone further than words to defend Rarity? May we ever know?
7520058 I had not noticed I was on that list. It's nice to know my nitpicking is useful!
As for the Prince, he could just be a bigot, but I wouldn't be surprised if he had other/further ulterior motives. Time will tell.
This was a well paced chapter, and features my personal fave character Princess Celestia being a good mentor/parent to Twilight during a very trying day.
Also pretty much no typos worth mentioning
Best mental image ever. Did Twi mess up another spell?
Say, Gel, have you ever run into that guardstallion from the train on your first trip to Ponyville? I hope he's not holding a grudge.... or carrying a torch for you...
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7520420 Oh darn it, two 'feet' that shouldn't have been there. I blame Gruff and Ember!
Celestia tries to be a good teacher, but her student is growing in ways that she can no longer guide her. In this instance, however, she was able to help the filly she taught, if only by being there and approving.
Ha! Imagining Growl howling as he rode in the Gel plane. Nothing to hold on to, and a perfect view of just how high up you are!
Ponyville definitely does have a higher concentration of non p-ponies than other cities. Perhaps the delegates will witness for themselves the "raising" that has been done...
Too bad Gruff wasn't countersued,Twilight could have sentenced him to time in the local dungeon!
Keep going! ;)
7519473 I agree, probably, but sarcasm tends to lose something when written down. I thought it was probably sarcastic, but I felt it worth considering that it might not be.
7520917 Well, how about this. I promise that the next chapter will have PLENTY of crazy, perverted, sex in it. among other things
Heck, the next release (in about 12 hours from now) has some hot pony on vamp action.
King Gruff writes a law to validate his actions after events, please, NOT in any court in any verse would that stand.