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Read the first few chapters. While I really like the idea of a T-1000 style changeling created as a living superweapon, I find the execution somewhat lacking - particularly in the characterization department. Relationships and character development are a bit too fast paced. Also, Twilight seems remarkably calm about Gel basically raping her after they first meet.
7516737 Yeah, this story essentially began as a race-to-do-all-the-fetishes fic (which was more or less intentional). It's settled down a bit since then, now there's more plot than ever!
So the delegations are already arriving? Wow Celestia, poor form. It's a good thing this week's crazy has mostly passed, but by inviting more crazy....
The defensive system has been triggered! It's a good thing the Princess of Friendship was ready to prevent certain... disaster.
Keep going! ;)
7516737 By the pure definition of it? Probably. But Gel didn't know better at the time. Going in there was not a lot different, in his mind, to going in somepony's mouth, or ears.
Twilight, as you will find out if you give it a chance and read some more, was more than okay with the situation, if not a little unsure of her companion. Gel had, unknowingly, pushed a whole lot of buttons Twilight didn't even know were buttons.
I propose trial by combat.Rarity knows that Dog is going after her, and the arena is protected.
Death by a thousand shed fur needles.
Or by Rarity pulling all the dogs hairs out one by one, just very, very rapidly?
As for Vinyls system,having it be linked to the Castle as a crystal resonance amplifier would be OP even for the show.
Not compared to stuff Ive thought of though.
Vinyl uses Solar Bass Canon. Its a DisasterArea.
Remember, spay and neuter your diplomats!
the dragon was left - the unicorn was left - the former dragon was left
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I wonder who will wind up on trial?
Aw, Shiny, you just need to get to know Gel better. Given the themes of this story, you might end up getting under his fu... well, chitin? That makes the joke awkward, now.
Say, doesn't Rarity know martial arts? She should've given him a boot to the head.
7516737 Twilight in this story is one of those "quiet ones"; you know, those shy-seeming types who are catastrophically perverted when they think nobody is looking.
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Wouldn't that make Fluttershy the most extreme?
You know, we haven't seen much of her lately. Is she tied up somewhere?
...by her own hooves?
Then again, she's so loving and caring, she might be neck deep in some pile of tentacles for all we know, nursing an elder godling back to health. (She takes care of Equestria's animals, why not the unnatural ones too?)
by law we must hold a trial, not needed the SPCA offers free spay and neuter clinics all the time.
after the way he just treated Lady Rarity I say hand him his ball as a reminder to all the diplomats to keep a civil tong and to remember they must obey the laws of the land.
if it was me well I do like old time Texas justice.
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7517304 There was a slight hint there you might have missed, particularly in how the diamond dog talks.
7517088 Who indeed? Thanks for the fix!
7517540 Oooh, it's THAT diamond dog? I think rarity having escaped the kingdom is far, FAR less serious compared to that they transformed Rarity from a pony to a diamong dog and then raped her, that'd be enough to put just about every civilization on the planet against them because f it happened with Rarity then it could've happened with who knows how many others.
Oh and there's also that she is a highly respected national hero of equestria, which stacks the odds even more. Honestly I'm surprised the diamond dog was dumb enough to do this instead of thinking just a little bit over why doing it is practically saying to all other countries "hey, we can transform captured citizens of other countries into diamong dogs and we will always claim them as our own citizens in slavery conditions despite them having returned to their original country."
Heck, if there isn't some serious action as a result of this I'd be dissappointed.
7516737 It stumbles a little in the start but it gets better pretty quick.
7517949 It is not the same dog. This is a brash young king who has spent too long getting what he wants to stop at some nicely-brushed bitch.
7517945 Well, to be fair, there is plot in this, so yes, there could be more sex.
7517954 Oh, well still, that is probably a sign that perhaps diamond dog society is a tad bit out of bounds of what it should be. On the whole not taking no for an answer thing, not to mention implied slavery, whic seemed to be only the independent outliers doing it, but what he implied with what he said it sounds to be something done in official diamond dog territory as well, no way that'd fly, for long anyways.
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yep I am pretty sure I know who it is now that I stop to think about it.
Missing end-quote.
Can't help it, a sisterpository?