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Nice, Fluttershy Staring herself. Just be careful not to stare a true mirror...
Then again, Fluttershy should not be breaking and entering either.
Keep going! ;)
At least Fluttershy used the door. If she was really annoyed she would just use the wall like Snowflake.
I love Nuzzles so much!
Do you have names for all the species you're introducing in this story? I'd love to use some of them in my own! With permission, ofc.
7335071 Go for it. I haven't named them all yet, however. I do keep a tab open for the mlp wiki's 'afflictions and illnesses' page for inspiration. It points out, and I have noticed, a LOT of stuff in the MLP world uses mind control/hypnosis and there is a LOT of things that use emotional vampirism.
7335347 Yeah, I can't help it, Velvet is just too cute and into the couple for her to not start to fall for them.
Lifting up on her - Lifting up onto her
There was six - There were six
It really shouldn't - She really shouldn't
sweet relief camel - sweet relief came (But now I want to see what a sweet relief camel looks like...)
but her was lifted - but he was lifted
*****
It's really nice to see Nuzzles again, I missed the little guy! Maybe the local Fluttershy would feel differently if she gave him a chance too. Not to mention that I'm curious to see what happens if he nips a mare that's already lactating from natural causes.
He's such a simple creature with simple needs, but he's just so darn cute!
7335754 I am trying to not give any small character too much limelight, although I think the Sweet Relief Camel really does need some...
Pretty sure Lyra's magic is gold.
7335898 So it is... normally I check that, I guess I got a little carried away! whistles innocently
7336201 I am, it has a very good plot and I just seem to get sucked into the story (for various reasons )
I hope you don't mind me commenting a bunch, I'm not trying to spam, I just like your story
7336217 Oh no, I will not get upset at comments but you have to promise not to get mad when I keep replying to them.
There is a LOT of plot, and plenty of story too!
7336223 Dang it, I was gonna make the exact same pun, but I thought it was too corny
And why would I get mad? I love getting replies, makes me feel like the author really cares about feedback (I know that's not really the case, I know every author cares about feedback, but it just makes it feel more so).
7336253 Good, bad, or otherwise, always leave feedback. Authors love it. Even the bad, especially the bad. I had a reader point something out and my first reaction was to get angry that they thought I did something wrong. Then I reread what they wrote, found a second comment. I reread the chapter (was for another story) and sure enough, I had left a part overly ambiguous. Got it fixed and squared away nicely.
All feedback is good feedback, except those that just leave a thumbs down without commenting. Those ponies can rot in Tartarus!
7336267 I know a few ponies (whos names I will not mention) that if they see a story that is heavily disliked they just add to the dislike pile... I don't like that, I try to have them not do that but I cant really stop them
7336282 I have given up on them as a metric, mostly. When I look at them, I compare them to views. If only 41 ponies out of nearly 3000 didn't like the story, I did something right.
7336307 I like to think of that situation as "everybody has an opinion" and out of that many people at least one person will say "You're wrong"
7336312 Yeah, and there is the fact that a lot of people, despite this being mature rated and listing all the kinks they are likely to encounter, will say 'eww, a clopfic' and thumbs down and leave. I don't really care. I write for myself first and foremost. My patrons come a close second, however!
7336340 I believe a pony should write a story, like a clopfic, because they want to and because they like doing it. I've talked to some ponies who wrote a story and they practical said that by the time they were done with it it felt like a job and I thought that was terrible, ponies should enjoy what your doing, not feel like its tedious. Idk, maybe I'm just different for thinking that way...
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