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7073934 At this point? He looks just like a normal changeling, a little bigger though.
You think Muffins is brutal, you just wait till Sweetie arrives, or when Cupcakes starts, inquiring.
Twilight needs an assistant. things got far too messy back there, especially for what she is.
The reason theyre called the Secret Service, is because you are not supposed to know they even exist. If you do find out, its because something unpleasant has occured.
If Guardians of Harmony means Spike is going to be allowed to mature as well as grow, Gel is going to be singing the song of his people. Stealers Wheel, Stuck In The Middle With You?
7073951 Ah okay, I didn't realize his disguise had dropped.
I guess this also answers my unasked question of "what would happen if Tirek magic-nommed Gel while Twilight was wearing him", which I guess... would be somewhat gory?
Also... Muffins! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! *bounces like a spazzy Twilight*
an errant that - an errant one that
sipped at the dink - sipped at the drink
very particularly scent - very particular scent
and fight? Please
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It's cool how you're using the background characters to move the plot forward. Since there's so little known about them beyond their names you pretty much have cart blanche as long as you don't do serious damage to them. *
Owwww... alternate universe Derpy plays for keeps, not that this particular villain doesn't deserve it.
*edited to add: Erm... no pun intended at the time of posting.
7081002 Ah, all fixed. "Errant" trapped me because I have read a comic where it was used as a noun, tricky damn authors subverting my language
As for what Muffins did, she lied, very convincingly. Chest pain is always scary, to have a pony hit you there hard enough to feel sharp pain, well, I guess you would believe them. And yes, Muffins plays for keeps. She is a serious mare under her silly exterior. Watch any episode where a 'large fight' is shown and she will be there, fighting alongside the Wonderbolts, the Royal Guard, etc. For a simple mailmare, she certainly keeps the company of warriors when the bits are down.
After reading the description of this story I almost wrote it off... Im so glad I didn't
7101592 Great praise. Thank you for taking the gamble
I've been reading this story in small bits since the beginning of this month, and I got to say that it's great. For a clopfic, you've put great time and care to make a interesting story in it. Gel is a great character, and the romance between him and Twilight is cute as well as naughty. What you've done with the changlings so far is interesting, and I can't wait to see more about what happens to them. My only complaint is not enough of the other mane 6 so far.
On this chapter, I was a little sad Twilight got captured and turned into a mindless sex slave, but it really amps the hype to what will happen next. GONE FOR A MONTH?!? To be honest, I'm surprised the others ain't worried yet. But then we get the BEST thing ever.... Muffins (aka Derpy Hooves) to the rescue! Love it so far, and look forward to reading more.
7136234 Thanks! And I will point out, that in the show, characters tend to go missing or aren't seen for quite a length of time and, as somepony else already asked this, Spike did know they had gone off 'on an adventure'. The plot goes on and on, I am up to about six months in of story so far, which means halfway through to Chrysalis' release. There are ups, and downs. And as of latest tally, there is only one member of the mane-six untouched by Gel's careful self. Applejack. But don't worry, we will get to her.
Muffins continues to be a primary character and I promise she becomes every bit as awesome as she deserves.
I do warn, there is a plot that is pretty nasty and dark, it has a happyish ending, I promise.
The only problem I have to deal with is that which every such story has, power creep. Thankfully, in Equestria, there is always something with a crazy magic trick or such, to keep even the great Celestia from getting complacent.
FFS a month before the MAILMARE gets concerned? That's a gaping plot hole if I ever saw one...
Let me get this straight Muffins is Ditzy Doo aka Derpy Hooves? And you made her a secret agent. ~quad hug.
7161433 If you can come up with some other way for her to be in all the places and do all the things we see in the show, I would love to hear it
But seriously, that should be hoarse.
7214262 Fixed.
Gotta admit; not happy with how easily Twilight and Gel were subdued.
7314240 The pair of them both rely on magic as their main defense/offense. Without magic, Gel cannot shift and Twilight can't cast/use her horn. The parasprites in this feed off magic and use it to control their host. The stronger the magic, the faster they subdue. All that and, gosh darn it, they are not perfect and infallible, they can lose now and again.
I find it a bit weird that Spike reads a letter about a missing pony and then after Gel and Twilight go with no word to him that they're staying and after a month of them not coming back he does FUCKING NOTHING? Is he retarded? Seriously mate I find that a little weird.
SHE'S DERPY NOT MUFFIN.
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Her official name is Muffin and has been for quite a while. Jim Miller even confirmed it at WhinnyCity. In one or two countries her name has always been Muffin or Muffins.
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while Muffins might be trademarked now, her name will and always will be Derpy Hooves/Ditzy Doo by fans.
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So Derpy is derived from her full name and not her appearance or actions, but her nickname lent itself to a good cover story she has used ever since being a secret agent of Tia's like BonBon.