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It's like Easter every day, in Equestria.
Flutteryshy - Fluttershy
felt the shut as - felt the shunt? / shift? / shutdown? as
faded but, she smiled - faded, but she smiled
mood and despite - mood, and despite
so these delicious hooves - so those delicious hooves
she bored down - she bore down
*****
Applejack and Fluttershy have their moment to shine... and nobody is around to see it but the ants. Irony.
Nice bit of comedy with Gel being sent back to Ponyville to try, try again, and I can imagine how the trip to Canterlot will eventually play out.
Finally, the third act of the chapter required a great deal of scrutiny to make sure not a single typo escaped detection. Eeeyup, had to read it three or four times for the sake of thoroughness.
7127247 Poor Gel, he tried so hard to be the hero
'em
seen, and or seen and (not sure which)