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Yo dawg, we herd you liked plot, so we put a dash of plot in the plot while the plot being plotted was heading to being dashed.
Will Vinyl use any harmonious dissonance, or will she just be chorus skating.
7114625 Or will she learn to really appreciate the song Octavia is playing for her?
the flow which was - the flow, which was
solo-cellist, she - solo-cellist. She
warm feeling rising - warm feelings rising
in delight, she could - in delight. She could
strong, it grew - strong. It grew
not bad certainly and even - not bad certainly, and even
seductive juices and she - seductive juices, and she
enhanced song, each pony - enhanced song. Each pony
around it making - around it, making
looked around and smiled - looked around, then smiled
had given but Mellon - had given, but Mellon
headphones back and looked - headphones back, and looked
out okay she would - out okay, she would
its life, it knew - its life. It knew
hunt command it had - hunt command, it had
her eyes, she couldn't - her eyes. She couldn't
gave out and her - gave out, and her
opening causing her - opening caused her
and wet, she hadn't - and wet. She hadn't
any attention but she - any attention, but she
would do and it - would do, and it
cloud was all - cloud was, all
she was and it - she was. and It
a trigger and the - a trigger, and the
and burrowed and soon - and burrowed, and soon
it touched, it played - it touched; it played (semicolon! )
warm pleasure washed - warm pleasure that washed
and warmth and Dash - and warmth, and Dash
that this is exactly - that this was exactly
*****
Wow, I don't know what happened. I tried to be careful about suggesting commas, limiting it to pauses in completed thoughts, but... wow. Please let me know if you feel I went overboard and I'll let it lie in the future.
*****
Yes! Vinyl is coming! Er... to save the day, I mean. Seriously, if anypony can be said to move to her own beat, it would be Vinyl.
Yeah, there's a lot of that going on in this narrative.
Yikes, and now the third chapter is posted. I need to be up at 5AM, so It'll have to wait until tomorrow.
7115274 Ugh, a lot there. I am going to blame the pain in my back, grab some endone and try and chill. I hope I didn't futz up the next one this badly
Didn't Dash say they were married?
let's
And now there's a sex-toy with a magical AI.
Is this story even about Gel anymore? :(
7319678 Is My Little Pony always about ponies? Sometimes, it's about dragons. Gel will be back, fear not.
Dash, "Plot, what plot? Only plot at the moment that matters is my own!"