Fine Crime has been chosen by Celestia personally to undertake a job he has never wanted. Yet obvious curses can be hidden blessings, for Fine realizes his job is more than just to serve Celestia. He must find a way... to end her.
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It could've been better because it seemed rushed, but you already stated that it was. However it was well written in the fact that it added a lot of background to multiple ponies, background which was cloud-shaking. So it was important information that was slightly too rushed, if it had been too slow though it would've been painful to read.
Ugh what the hell Rainbow? That was just cruel and unreasonable. I guess in this story her element of loyalty never existed. Lightning is better off without her if Rainbow has that kind of attitude.
How the heck does this story still have only 65 upvotes?
So it just kinda clicked... since Luna dates the Mane Six in the events leading up to TvE, and the journals are set in 1007 CE, is she dating one Pony a year?
Edit: I just read the comments of the next chapter. Heh.
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If that were the case, it would be a curious and unplanned coincidence. However, I can say without even checking my timeline doc that this isn't the case.
But you're right about TvE taking place in C.Y. 1007, and I did extensive research in TvE to determine dates. Paying attention to the journals can, at times, reveal some insights. Not often, but it does happen. I've long considered going into TvE later and applying dates to the chapters so that future readers can align events, but I dunno.