Fine Crime has been chosen by Celestia personally to undertake a job he has never wanted. Yet obvious curses can be hidden blessings, for Fine realizes his job is more than just to serve Celestia. He must find a way... to end her.
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Hmmmm... as always you make an interesting premise for your book. So we are dealing with one of Daring Doo rivals now. Though for now he doesn't seem all that evil.
Also I have a hunch how he will enter the "order of shadows" I will tell you at the end of the book if my hunch was right to prevent spoilers for your fellow readers.
Good start, PA. I almost started tearing up myself at the team's extra discovery. Even when it's for this character in this timeline.
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Wow, really plowing through it, aren't ya? I hope you like what I've done with Caballeron. Honestly, I feel like I'm not giving him the treatment he deserves, at least not with the last few chapters, but I'm hoping to fix that with the coming chapters.
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While I appreciate the sentiment, there is no connection to No Heroes, except that this is set in an alternate timeline. nothing that happens in No Heroes happens in the Trixie vs. Equestria universe.
I've got plans to create a visual timeline using Visio, but first I gotta get Visio.