Fine Crime has been chosen by Celestia personally to undertake a job he has never wanted. Yet obvious curses can be hidden blessings, for Fine realizes his job is more than just to serve Celestia. He must find a way... to end her.
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Yeah, the formatting on that sequence made it a little difficult to follow. The spacing is kinda odd. Anyways, another good chapter! Will we ever get to see things from a perspective other than Fine's?
I'm not the best judge for the formatting on this one, being on my phone, but I think I get what you meant from it. I wonder how this going to affect Fine going forward with Celestia.
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Well, that was all intentional. I was trying to show how violently chaotic everything was being slammed into his head. As to your question, I shall repeat what I said in he Author's Notes of the very first chapter:
What this means (and I didn't properly sate) is that each book will be from the perspective of the character it is focused on. We've got two more Fine-centric chapters, then an intermission, then we move on to the next character.
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Yeah, I figured it would look funky on anything other than my computer, but in a way that actually improves upon my intentions.
I'm not really sure what you're saying here, but I am reasonably sure it'll be answered in the next chapter.
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Oh, I figured it would, or if not in the next chapter, there'd be elaboration on it somewhere in the fic. After all, he has to get to the point where he's at in TvE.
Oh woh! That's a twist. I always thought Fine Crime had found Celestia statue on his own. But now it seems evil Celestia just showed it to him.
Oh good god! I cleared out my cache and for the longest time I couldn't find this story in my bookshelf! But then I realized that I had to enable mature stories again. I thought for a while that you'd taken the entire story down!
But anyway, questions: I've always wondered this, but why do Luna and Nightmare Moon look so drastically different in your universe, while Celestia and Princess look so similar?
And I secondly: What's your plan after you finish Shadow Pony? (I'm guessing that'll be the first one finished.) Are you going to focus all of your attention on Order of Shadows or are you going to start on a new project?
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The subject of Nightmare Moon and Luna looking different will be addressed in-story eventually... or at least, it should be. It's one of the things I want to address, but due to the non-chronological nature of the overall story it may get lost in translation. Anyway, short answer: it's a matter of choice.
Shadow Pony is all but finished, I'm just waiting on the editor. I'm currently working on an entry for a contest, which has to be released before the 15th (I may or may not seek editors for it, still on the fence). Once that's done I intend to start work on my three Halloween-centric stories to add to my Sweet to Eat compilation in October. Once I finally finish all of that (while still working on Order of Shadows, of course) I'll start on the first direct sequel to No Heroes: Beyond the Everfree.
Dear god this is so beautifully twisted. ;)