A circus has come to Ponyville. Twilight and friends go to the circus to have a good time. What they didn't expect was to befriend a creature that was the sideshow attraction for the circus and was treated as a slave by the owner of the circus. The girls take it upon themselves to help the human adjust to life in Equestria.
WARNING: May contain human pony shipping. If do not want, leave now. Yes 'do not want' was intentional. Rated teen for language.
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interesting.
i like this so far pleas go on
sorry i meant please go on
If has shipping, needs romance tag
While the intro was interesting and unique, I can't feel that it doesn't have much of a plot to it. It seems that it would end sooner than we think.
Yay, another HiE? Fantastic! I have nothing bad to say on that matter!
Any specific band this Nathan guy from? Also, ringmaster bro a dumbass.
it would have been funny if after beating on the ringmaster he tossed him in the same cage he was stuck in now that would be adding insalt to injury.
Favoriting because the main character has the same first name as me! XD
adding to watch list as this look interesting
That pony enslaved you!
you understand that right?
He took your freedom! He locked you in a cage against your will.
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RIP HIS GUTS OUT AND EAT THEM!!!
and don't apologize for it!
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Cool story so far. The whole shipping thing with the mane 6 is a little cliché, but I'm willing ta look past it.
Yep, subtle.
Nathan's reactions to his situation break my suspension of disbelief. He's kidnapped, but making no attempts to escape? And "you tricked me"; who would describe it that way?
The way he's currently written "Nathan" is not a character. He's a convenient source of exposition.
4343430 just because she offered to let him stay at his house doesn't automatically mean he's going to ship with Fluttershy. It could! Or it could not. Let's not jump to conclusions here.
4355535 I dislike being blunt, but if you look at his character and Robo's previous fics, you'll see it's pretty obvious where this is going. Seriously, that had the subtlety of a freight train.
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4355535 SPOILER WARNING: I'm not shipping the human with Fluttershy, and it will be with just one of the mane six. So I'm a sucker for writing a bit of romance in my fics.....don't judge me.
4356084 I'm not, also... I just lost five bits. Buck my life!
oh god you added Fluffle Puff.
yes!
If Fluffles is in this, wouldn't Chryssi and Dan also?
4492789 Not in my version they aren't.
4492905 Not even Chryssi???
I demand and approve of Nathan-Fluffle ship. Make it happen. ;)
4492974 Sorry, but it wouldn't fit the story. Besides, the only thing that bugged me about the Fluffle Puff series, mind you it's a small thing with me so not a big deal, is why Chyrsalis was there in the first place. She tried to take over Equestria, why is she living with Twilight Sparkle. Okay, there are two things, how did Dan end up in Equestria too, and why is he also staying with Twilight. that's really my only quam with the Fluffle Puff series, but how funny they are makes up for that.
4493104 Chryssalis is there because supposedly Twi is reforming her and since Fluffle is staying with the princess and the whole unlimited source of love energy thing just ended up working out for her.
Will she be dancing on rainbows
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Mm, I could see it with a comedy tag, though I don't it really needs it just yet. Bit more humor and it would though. It's sorta like the story isn't sure if it wants to be comedy or serious...
I've been waiting for this forever. You do not disappoint my good sir!
I just pictured Fluffle Puff and I want to snuggle with her. She's so adorable that it's almost criminal.
Good story, but this line in Chapter 2 just sounds wrong:
Nathan eyed the food at first. He decided to try the hayfries first. He picked one up and took a bite. “Hmm, not bad, tastes like French fries.”
I'm not trying to be mean, but did you fail biology class? It certainly seems that way. The human body can't process hay. Unless he becomes violently ill in a later chapter, this makes no sense.
Just a couple things
His name was (Goustauve) Le (Grange.) [Gustav] [Grand]
like the story.
Lol. We all know what he ended up thinking after the "dating a pony part" but I'd prefer not to go there right now lol. Thanks for the amazing story and keep up the good work!
very entertaining story and very cute, even with the (not-so) subtle
reference to bestiality. I suppose it could work. good job and keep
it up.
5076152 Technically, as long as it is masticateded well enough to pass through the digestive system, a human could safely eat hay, although not much nutrition would be derived from it. Grass is not suitable for the human diet. Although young wheat or rhy sprouts are very sweet and edible.
4348127 just finished reading the first chapter and I have to agree. He should be livid and Celestia should be having her guards take the ringmaster into custody.
anymore?
Like the Holocaust. (There's one picture that made me feel queasy.)
7501578 nuclear weapons also fall into this category.