A human of great power has found his way to Equestria, whether it be fate or coincidence, he is now in a strange magical land of talking ponies. He finds the peace he has been searching for after being called a monster and hated on earth, but his peace will not come easily. There is a terrible threat on the horizon that he will have to face if he wishes to keep the new life he finds.
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Seems interesting
Yup it does sound interesting. allthough i do not like the classic go to ponyville storyline :/.
But perhaps you can make something of it :)
"The suited man then turned and slammed the door of his black van in anger. “SHIT!”
The winged human found himself falling through a tunnel of light colors, like a rainbow, they swirled around him as he sailed through."
You might want to put something in between those two sentences in order to notify the reader of the scene changing.
2761924 Right, thanks for the advice.
Name: Carbon
Race:unicorn
Coat: black
Mane: black with gunmetal grey highlights
Speciality:throwing weapons (tomahawks, knives, shurikens, etc)
2778081Nice OC, what rank would you like him to have in the Ponyville guard? Your choice. Some pony like that could be the captain of the Ponyville branch guard, but again, your choice. Also, what's his personality like?
2778180 Hmmm. Lets go with 2nd LT. His mark could be a neon blue cross hair over a red skull. And he could be dating Octavia. Please?
2779865 2nd Lt it is, as for relationships,I wasn't planning on any, but I'll see what I can do.
Name: Pyro
Rank: Corporal
Race: unicorn
Coat: Russian Red Camo (Caused by birth defect like Stunner)
http://devon.chrisob.com/Camouflage/Red%20camo%2001.jpg
Mane: Ash grey with a red strip
Specialty: Fire based attacks
Mark: Red star
(Dating Pinkie Pie and Stunner's older brother)
Name: Fuse
Rank: Master Sgt.
Race: Earth
Coat: Olive Drab
Mane: Black
Specialty: Explosives and EOD (Explosive Ordinance Disposal)
Mark: EOD Crab
http://www.bomb-tech.com/store/images/uploads/ProductCrab.jpg
(Could be dating Vinyl Scratch )
Name: Stunner
Rank: Pvt.
Race: Pegasus
Coat: Russian Blue Camo (caused by birth defect)
http://www.ten90six.com/images/Blank-Square-Blue-Camo.jpg
Mane: Black with light blue edge
Specialty: Recon/ Airstrikes/ Pararescue ops
Mark: White Star and the Airforce Pararescue motto and insignia on the right front leg (That Others May Live)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:United_States_Air_Force_Pararescue_Emblem_%22That_Others_May_Live%22.jpg
(Could be dating Rainbow Dash and Pyro's younger brother)
Name: Shadow Fang
Rank: 1st Lt
Race: Earth
Coat: White (turns black when turned into a wolf)
Mane: Black
Specialty: Commando
Mark: Black Bodark Insignia(Not located on flank, it's on his shoulder. When the mark glows red he's about to turn into the wolf) http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/167/d/f/bodark_turn_around_by_karyss_concept-d53ofld.jpg
P.S All OCs are male
2780025 I don't need too many, your OC's sound awesome
but I don't need so many for what I planned, just a couple guards for Charles to interact with, I can use like one or two others of the OC's you've submitted though.
Thanks.
2780025 Also, I will need advice on the chain of command thing as I am not familiar with it, I know that captain is higher ranking, but what's after that and down. Thanks.
2780305 I'll see if I could find you a chain of command. Just let me finish my breakfast
2780315 http://www.usmilitariaforum.com/uploads//monthly_02_2008/post-837-1203551280.jpg
2781107 Thanks for the info,
I appreciate it.
2781174 anytime. feel free to contact my if you need ideas for an oc
You make a decision on who your gonna use?
So are you just using Carbon or the whole squad?
2787571 I may use a few of them, not the whole squad though, too many. I already have quite a few submissions from another site I have this story posted on. So far, you are the only one on this site that made OC submissions.
MOAR
if you could please
2787666 Of course, this story is going to be way more than just three chapters. SO OK!
More is on the way. 
Yay
2787611 I also updated my OCs. My suggestion: Use the OCs as not only for the Ponyville guard, but also other branches across Equestria. Like my squad can be the Ponyville branch, then add up the others to make another branch/unit/squad/whatever, then make a squad of OCs for another city and so on and so forth.
I have a question can you make a story about a werewolf in equestria that would be awesome
2787835 Sorry, but I don't think I could do that.
K
2787835 my oc does that.
Can i submit an oc?
Awww hell yeah!
P.S his eyes are augmented through surgery since his 3 monhs in torture involved eye damage (http://finalwordongaming.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/deus-ex-human-revolution-robot-eyes.jpg?w=150) they can switch between night vision, thermal, and sonar
2795179 I suppose I could use another private, so sure, what you got.
2795207 I'm afraid something like that is too high tech for the world my story takes place in, I suppose I could say magic for that though.
2797060 true... but try to keep the vision modes and PTSD
2795262 Name:Black cloud
rank:private
species:thestral(bat pony)
Age:25
Colour: mane:thunderckoud gray with streaks of white and blue like lightning, mane is a afro style.
Body: grey fur with blue streaks down his legs.
tail: same as mane
Cutie mark:a full moon surrounded by clouds,(stereotypical werewolf moon)
Skills:demolition and genius,
Personality: he is a pyromaniac and quite smart, he develops his own explosives and a unicorn helped him make a flamethrower on his fore hooves. hard to make friends with and is quite mute, kinda looks up to charles and feels the same feelings as him as he was cast out of his home for accidentally setting town hall ablaze, looks up to charles as a hero in his eyes.
2797060 ok 3 things:
1- if Carbon's eyes are replaced and have the vision modes there are Some drawbacks:
Night vision (eyes glow green): requires some light
Thermal (eyes glow red or purple, your call): distorts vision into 'fish eyed lens'
Sonar (eyes glow light blue): can't move while active because it distorts the image
2- can 2LT Shadow Fang (the borrowed Stalliongrad soldier) make an appearance please?
3- do you need a medic?
2797505 I can do that.
It is pretty cool. 
Also, I suppose I could use a medic, as long as it's not another flyer, in case you hadn't noticed, I've got plenty of those in the Ponyville guard.
2797475 Does he have the slited irises? Also, is the town hall your talking about the Ponyville Town hall, or is it the town he's from, if so, what is the town's name?
2797982 alrighty:
Name: Stunner
Rank: Specialist
Race: Unicorn
Coat: Russian Blue Camo (caused by birth defect)http://www.ten90six.com/images/Blank-Square-Blue-Camo.jpeg
Mane: Black with light blue edge
Specialty: Recon/ Airstrikes/ Pararescue(can create glider based wings/transform into ravens/control birds (your choice)
Mark: White Star and the Airforce Pararescue motto and insignia tattooed to the right front leg (That Others May Live) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:United_States_Air_Force_Pararescue_Emblem_%22That_Others_May_Live%22.jpg(Dating Fluttershy and Pyro's younger brother)
Bio: The younger brother of Pyro by 3 years. He is a fun, happy and competitive pony. But when some one needs to be rescued or on call, he becomes very serious and has been known to rush into the open battlefield to save someone when there are injured. Because of his love and respect for his big brother Pyro, he to enlisted into the military, just under a different branch. He passed Airforce BT and became a member of to Airforce Pararescue unit.
Armor: light armor for speed and maneuverability
Name: Shadow Fang
Rank: 1st Lt
Race: Earth
Coat: White (turns black when turned into a wolf)
Mane: Black
Specialty: Commando
Mark: Black Bodark Insignia (Not located on flank, it's on his shoulder. When the mark glows red he's about to turn into the wolf) http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/167/d/f/bodark_turn_around_by_karyss_concept-d53ofld.jpg
Bio: Not much is known about 1st Lt. Fang other then the fact that he is a loaned soldier from the Stalliongrad (he speaks with a thick Russian accent) branch and that he was experimented on for super soldier projects (Codenamed: Project Titan X), hence his Bodark mark on his shoulder that allows his to turn into a werewolf for an unlimited amount of time at the cost of fatigue and philological damage. From the feedback of the unit: he is a cold hearted, antisocial, pony due to his PTSD caused by when he lost every member of his unit and was later captured and tortured for info for 4 months before the fellow members of his SF unit (Spetsnaz) saved him. He has been a emotional wreck since then. He also disagrees with how his CO 2LT Carbon manages and trains his squad (Spetsnaz pushed their troops to the breaking point and their training is so extreme that no other SF will tolerated it due to the high number of fatalities in training).
Armor : a blue and black dragon's scale armor (issued from Stalliongrad)
Do you also want the older brother to or write him of as KIA?
2798155 I think it would be best to write him off as KIA, I'm still getting OC submissions and If I use anymore, I don't think I'll be able to keep track of them all.