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This is the story of two aliens from another planet who try to make a home for themselves on Equestria, at the same time, they share in the adventures of the main six. How long can they keep their origins a secret though?
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Meh. I guess it's ok? I'm into military or romance, not aliens. Sorry.
Nice
Awesome, please make more
Nova x twilight OTP
3327233 Um, what is OTP for?
3327377
one true pairing
Awesome!
Holy snap! This is WAY better than I thought it would be.! (Which was good before!)
I love this story, it's the best
Good story so far. Not to nit-pick here, but it's "chic, unique and magnifique", not shiek.
This isn't bad. Grammar is OK, spelling is OK. My only problem is that every chapter is almost exactly like the episode off which it is based. Sometimes, it seems the only difference is that Nova says someone else's lines. I'm sure things will be mixed up a bit when Nova & co. are inevitably revealed, but until then... It's kinda boring. I nevertheless look forward to more.Viel Glück.
You need to drop everything and work on this story please I might be being impatient but I need more of this story it is the only thing that can tide me over till the 23rd please write more please
I spoke too soon the last time I checked the story was almost 50 minutes ago but keep posting
Ehem. So, I guess that since season 1 have 26 episodes, this will also have 26 episodes before moving on to season 2 and another 26 before moving on to season 3.
Well it's good I guess but I just hope that his problem is dealt with soon.
3460071 I'm not sure I get what you mean by problem. If you mean that this story is one episode short for season one, that's because I didn't have Nova and Starburst show up during the Nightmare Moon incident. After that, I will do all the other episodes up to the end of season three.
3460394 ehm, just ....the alien problem the main character is having.
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Right, looking back, I realize I misread your previous comment. As for when the problem is resolved, that would be spoilers.
3462547 Affirmative.
I'm Really Glad That Worked out in the End, Now I Hope Nova can Help Pinkie with Her Birthday... I Hope!
Awesome Story BTW.
1 BIGChapter, and
1 Big Chapter!!!
BTW, Awesome Story!!
yay
3592722 So first you used Pinkie Pie, I take it your going to start using Fluttershy now?
Hello my good sir, this story is awesome
. NO, more than awesome, this amazing. This is the best story I've ever read. Finally Nova told them the truth 
, and this new element thing, you are a genius, a great brain even Einstein would envy. Really dude keep it up. I can't wait the next adventure. Oh and by the way you have a fan now buddy, you really deserve it. 
3593312 Thank you for your kind words. I hope you enjoy my other works.
This was the best chapter yet it was the perfect way to end a season but now im only worried that you will make us wait for a year for the next season premire
3595877 I'll try not to, I'll update this as much as possible while working on my other two stories.
Holy moly, you made it again. So many feels
, seriously dude you have a great work here, again. C'mon bro give me a hand. 
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3598716 While don't have an image like that, high five right back at ya!
Thanks.
updatessss!!!
3598766 i'm glad you like it, i'm drawing in the paint and upload the net
This was an amazing addition to the story you did an amazing job for the short amount of time that passed and I cant wait to read more even if it takes a while
OH crap
i think we all know what that means. this is gonna be goood
I Love this Story!
This is Getting Good.
The Story is Awesome!!!
Comments? What are those?
So many people comment on your story its unreal.
A good story if not my favorite for following the actual show so close.
Nova: Mom, i found something odd.
Starla: What is that, honey?
Nova: I don't know, something title i guess.
Starla: Oh, it's quite nice. I like the colors.
Nova: Mom, it's not nice. This is weird. It's floating in the air around me. BY THE STARS, GET OFF ME YOU LITTLE...
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3771851 Nice, very funny.
i found a error here