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I was wondering truthfuly on what happened to u. Now after reading the author note i hope that nothing permanent happened. Also if anything is to go from this story u have recovered completely.
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Not completely fine, but good enough.
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Good on u then. If u ever need time to rest its fine to take the time.
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Now to wait until the poll has enough votes to write the next chap.
Good to have you back
In 10 hours the poll closes and I will start writing the next chap.
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Good to see you back sleepy! I hope you are doing better and I can’t wait to see how this turns out! Tho, you MIGHT need more than 10h for the poll or else you will have to come up with a Hybrid! I would say give it two days at minimum.
Also is this gonna be a Semi-CYOA fic? That would be awesome!
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Yes semi CYOA, every now and then, I will make a poll and let the readers decide.
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Don’t see many of these types of fics, and the ones I do are dead or otherwise take to long to update.
These polls are absolutely amazing! Love that element of really involving the reader. Can't wait to see where this goes
The next chap will have a poll... so be ready?
Not a bad start have to see where this goes
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Yes, also have in mind he thinks all of this is a dream, so he's in for a rude awakening.
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keep it up~!!
I've never enjoyed a fic in this kind of format, but this seems pretty good so far (minus some grammar mistakes).
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Be sure to point them out, im trying to improve my grammar along the way. Using Grammarly to lower the amount of mistakes and such.
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And by this kind of format? You mean CYOA? Just need clarification, because this won’t be a CYOA in its entirety, more like a semi CYOA, a few polls every now and then.
Will there be no sex?
Well, it's not fun at all!
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The last part joke meant he would probably have no fingertips.
Cuss most beings in Equestria don't have them.
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What does fingers have to do with it? Even if he has hooves, he still has natural instincts.
No bat-pone option?
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Is a path for the pony characters, they are subraces, meaning you could start as a pegasi, but turn into a bat pony by doing a quest or praying to Luna or something.
Must be suck to edit that font tho..
I mean editing font take more time than write it
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It does take some time, but it looks cool doesn't it?
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Well, yes it is..
Can't lie there..
Honestly great to see your back. I alway thought the way you used pictures and formatted your game system was super cool and interesting.
If you read in ultradark mode (the mode i never leave) then you can hardly see the images
I gave this advice on another "Gamer" story and I wanted to give it here to.
I like what I see about chapter 1 and 2 in your story.
I've read allot of GAMER fic's of many kinds from many different series. and I wanted to give some advice with what I've read works pretty well.
The GAMER system is a really exciting mechanic that makes a story fun to read. Much like playing games its fun to see the main characters(MC) efforts rewarded for hard work. But here is where ALLOT of GAMER fic's go wrong.
If the MC gets allot of power really fast and with what (to the readers) seems like little effort then people get turned off from reading more.
Its fine to have the MC weak to start with... Hell its fine to keep him weak for a long time and make him have to work his ASS of to get stronger (you'd be surprised how many people prefer a story with a weak MC over a strong one), its all about the struggle, we want an MC that has to fight to get where he wants to go.
Also I recommend NOT to write in the numbers like damage, EXP or mana usage unless the MC specifically goes looking for them (we want to read this story from the MC's point of view), or when its dramatically necessary. As much as people love GAMER fic's, nobody really likes reading every numerical update.
Finally, the GAMER system is supposed to add and support the main story and plot, not the other way around, you should never focus on the system so much that it feels like there is more UI descriptions than actual story going on.
there you go, that's the basics, I hope you do well and make an awesome story!
Getting an editor to help with the grammar even more!
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Fancy meeting you here
I like this story so far Keep it up
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...more!!!
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Just started reading, not bad so far.
Watch should be capitalized
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Thanks, fixed the error!
I'm really loving this story, keep up the good work.
good job starting to shape out
Loving this. How do you embed your pictures? It shows through discord but I can't find out how to do it
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I put them on discord, then I click them, and when in the browser I inspect them, and copy the image link.
Haven't heard anything in a while, hope you're doing okay :)
hope this story doesn't die my friend, i really love the dialoge and plot development going on right now.
Isso e bom continue por favor.
You ever considered saying map and try it. You got the power of the gamer consider making up a system like map or shop but all com prices to balance the system for map prices whell you need to ask the citizens for map or ask where you are to add it to your map then the shop/store every thing or no you know item is their but you need money and coins the prices is dependent on value of the item. Money or coins thing of system mob drop loots, money, coins and rare items.
You ever considered saying map and try it. You got the power of the gamer consider making up a system like map or shop but all com prices to balance the system for map prices whell you need to ask the citizens for map or ask where you are to add it to your map then the shop/store every thing or no you know item is their but you need money and coins the prices is dependent on value of the item. Money or coins thing of system mob drop loots, money, coins and rare items.
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Hope you're doing well, haven't heard much from this story.
Massive thanks for this tip, as well. Its helped me loads with my own story
Interesting story so far, would like to see where it goes from here.