Chaotic Harmony, Book 1
Blue Frost is a pony, now. He remembers being a human, but with little else, he must make his way in the world of Equestria and find where he belongs. With the town of Ponyville opening its arms to this new pegasus, Blue forges forward into a life he never thought possible. Laughs, loves, and loss await.
Official remake of my first big series "I Left My World for Ponies?!". While there will be similar plot points, this will be a fresh take on the original story after my years of growing as a reader and a writer.
Chapters (4)
I never did read the original, but I will say that this chapter was an AMAZING start. I sure am interested in Blue Frost's future journey in the land of Equestria. Keep it going mate. I'm truly hyped up for more!
I loved the original, even saved it before it was taken down for later re-reads, I await this with baited breath
This is definitely interesting. I can't wait for all of the ... "creative" ways to use Pegasus' magic because even with plot-convenient amnesia, there is one thing that will never change about humans it's our very, very bloody and violent mind.
~Guess who's back, back again?~
~DJ's back, tell a friend~
Man, it is good to see you back. I read your original story when it first came out and was sad to see it go. Curious to see where you take this one.
Very interesting!
Could swear your oc is familar but cant remember from where
Interesting so far, I am looking forward to seeing more of this story, keep it up.
This is amazing! I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Can't wait for him to introduce himself along with your upcoming chapters, and remember:
Keep your dreams alive. Understand that achieving anything requires faith and belief in yourself, vision, hard work, determination, and dedication. Remember all things are possible for those who believe.
Here's a song that will make you do whatever it takes. Enjoy!
https://youtu.be/HcNcOnIkQQU?si=hRzrTteAucUFuuNT
Nicely done! I noticed something odd
whats with the ? And ! Over each other? You got that a few times here
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It’s a personal choice. I just like the symbol more so I have it set automatically in my writing.
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Okay, just wondered
Holy hell, the HiEtP protagonist that wants to return to Earth, with a common sense?!
Okay, I'm sold.
Smart one, this one. Lets hope that checklist also has math on it.
Look like Blue is going to learn everything in Equestria and Twilight is going to tell him about Ponyville. Also, I'm looking forward to seeing Blue flying with Rainbow Dash I want to see him training with her on how to use his wings.
Here's a song that will make you natural. Enjoy!
https://youtu.be/V5M2WZiAy6k?si=Jok85tyoYjGxjBj9
Moar plez
I don't know about you, but I always have extra pasta, so I have to do it per serving, or the pasta will go bad sooner, so I will say blue is right.
Lovely idea! Though, is there something missing?
what does he comment to cause twilight's reply?
Blue with the hair-trigger on food presentation. Twilight with the family standard stubborn.
Neat addition with Nyx.
So far so good on this new chapter, can't wait see Blue on his flight training it's going to be so great to see him flying.
Here's a song that will make you a believer. Enjoy!
https://youtu.be/Ru7ffOoSN4U?si=YA61CV18zRXZW62k
Nicely done
This is great!
I've had it both ways.
Sauce the noodles, it's better that way. Serving only you always end up with dry noodles.
I’m glad they found a compromise to The Great Saucy Dilemma.
What will Blue do next? “You’re my boy, Blue!” -Frank the Tank.