• Member Since 25th Oct, 2013
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Unusually Delusional


I write stories about things

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An episodic short story collection about... well, read the title.

You are Tom, a human in Equestria through some vaguely-defined plot device... But that's not important, you're a human in a land of pastel talking ponies, this ain't rocket science. You make a bit of a hubbub about Equestria through your bizarre and inexplicable difference from typical equine nature - including an oddly-obsessive mint-colored pony with a harp for a Cutie Mark.

Attention becomes so great that you find yourself a guest of the Royal Family at Canterlot Castle. Celestia is nice enough, tries to make you feel comfortable despite the oddity of the situation. Luna, however, is just a pleasantly-enigmatic being. Always aloof, what few times you interact are in polite company and she has an odd air of archaism to her.

You want to get to know her more. She provides you the means one memorable night, launching you on a bizarre quest...

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 17 )

This sounds weird as all hell and completely random, so I'm going to read it and hope for the best. What's the worst that could happen?

Auuu
how...adorable?,..cute?
well this is definitely very good
probably my only complaint so far is the main characters name (Anon)
but it's a nit pick
hope to see more mate:pinkiehappy:

This story is surprisingly very sweet and cute along with the tickling antics, I really enjoy it and I hope to see more from you in time.

3934072 While it pains me to admit it, I feel I should come clean and admit that this is a cross-posting from a regular contribution of mine to threads on the /mlp/ board of 4chan, thus the "Anon" name and the first-person narrative. That said, I took pains to write it in a true prose format, rather than the simple D&D-esque "greentext" style (although admittedly, this was also because greentexts aren't allowed on FIMFiction).

3938565
Wow really?
Well either way it does not detract from how good this story is.
To say what i really enjoyed from this writing is, funnily enough, Anon.
Anon is a nice guy, though he can be overwhelmed with his desires, he does have limits and is not depraved.
He knows when enough is enough; as well, he does have his shy moments.
Where was this going again?
Well just a reiterating that this is a good story.
Thank you. :pinkiesmile:

3938565 I find it rather impressive that you were able to turn those green texts into something like this. Your writing is really good. :heart::yay:

I need the next chapter please I can't live without its in my dreams joking but not bout bout the need for another chapter

Update please? :fluttershysad:

It's funny because you can tell what Tom really means,

WE FRIENDSHIP NOW!!
Oh my god no lollollmaolollmao and he’s not even tickling me why!?!?!

Oh my god, I want a tom

Oh my god I soooo need a tom now.

When is the next chapter coming? I’d really like to see Twilight get some.

10780511
the last chapter was 8 years ago, ABANDONED STORY!

11464074
now that was a unexpected reply! I thought you just read it because of me pinging you but apparently you went further than i thought:ajsmug: Anyway If a story is several years old without a continuation, cancellation or a mention by the author, the chances of it being dead is very high to guaranteed. Greetings from Germany! And Have a good ride into 2023, because i will tomorrow, especially with the new Firecrackers we just got:pinkiehappy:

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