When reciting a spell, twins Mabel and Dipper are transported to an alternate universe- where everyone is a - pony?!
In the town of Ponyville, the twins meet the Mane 6- Applejack, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Twilight. Although things may always seem nearly perfect in the peaceful place called Ponyville... they aren't. Tensions begin to rise when somepony has some "feelings" for somepony else. But it will all be okay in the end... right?
ALSO THIS WAS CREATED MY ME AND pinecest235!!!!!!!!! SO YEAH... :D
EDIT: CREATED BY ME AND PINECEST11, NOT PINECEST 235!
Chapters (20)
pinecest235's new USERNAME IS pinecest11!!!!!! JSYK
YAY! OMG THX LINDA PONY!
PS GREAT STORY (WE) MADE
Dipper and Twily shipping = spot on! Great JOB!
Yes! Love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a bit short maybe for one site but i have to say i like it and start reading the second site right now^^
why it is going shorter and shorter?
4086753 pinecest11 is posting Part 2 soon!
well i like the idea but this is a bit to short and maybo to fast with the story. I still like it.
oh i hate this when this happen in stories, but i think they should be able to come back if they want
i have to say good story but i don´t really understand why the only thing they could do is to go back to thiere world. Well i have to say i find it always kind of sad if friends go differend ways in animes ect. like this.
I hope there would be maybe a second storie and more Twilight and Dipper lovestory :)
ps: if you make another story please don´t let it and so soon.
4086926 They could go back whenever they wanted, cuz they have the spell. But they probably need a few days/months/however long to get back to normal again before going back, u no? but parts 1, 2, and 3 are already written, so idk if i can make them longer.... Sorry! And thanks
4087325 i hope it don´t sound mean or something, but im not sure that my english is that perfekt.
I think i was only excited about the storie, it was really fun to read and it´s always more fun for me to read other stuff than think about a storie myself.
i think it´s because i don´t spoiler myself^^ I start maybe an own story but i try not to use other ideas deliberate :)
i want to ask again is there a second story with him and Twilight? I don´t know where to look is there anything ready yet?
4238812 Sorry, I told my friend she could post the next part, but I guess she's been really busy. I'll continue to nag her until she does
IT SOUNDS SO MEAN. HOW CAN YOU BE SO MEAN!?
...JUST KIDDING!
I don't care if your English isn't that good (your words, not mine
)! It's not mean at all, at least not to me. And if you do write your own story, I can't wait to read it!
4238943 well ok thx. I try to make my own story already more or less is just write something and try do decide wich kind of story i want to try first.
Let´s say i have a few ideas and try to decide wich is mature at most. I know yet a bit better who hard it can be to make progress in a good story. I think i just have to find my style.
4241214 Yea. One of the hardest things (in my opinion) about being an author is about finding what style works best for yourself. Romance? Adventure? Tragedy? I'm still trying to figure it out for myself. But yea. Just write different types and see what works best for you! I'm excited to see what your style/stories turn out to be
POWER OF DA EGGHEADS!!!
well that just happen.And to say this damn it mabel
you do not mess with at lest half of the things in that journal. You shuld know that remember bill.Oh is bill going to come if so then hell yes 
still too short but keep it up. luv it
have a mustache
I think this is a good idea for a stirs, but you made Dipper and Twilight fall in love to fast
lonely comment...
Either way good job so far compared to the other gravity falls crossovers I've read before.
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EGGHEADS ASSEMBLE!
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I agree. This story was far too rushed.
Let me guess... clover?
You coulda written all of it in one long chapter. But it's your story anyway.
Falling off a cliff of emotions...
...and a couch.
Pat pat.
Well that happened.
Yay! Ponyville at last.
That was incredibly too short for anypony. Even Rainbow Dash would find this too short.
This needs to be longer and Twi shouldn't be so chill about this.
Nice...If you like short stories.
DIPPER!
I could barely focus because I was distracted by Dipper slipping down the stairs.
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