• Member Since 19th Jun, 2013
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twilight517828


i have no idea what to post on here. i found my old acount after 4 years. I cringed and dleteded most of my fanfics. I will be posting storys here and don't be shy about pming me anyway word count bye

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Dipper wakes from another nightmare and Mabel seeing her twin is sad like her she joins him but what if the bottomless pit isn't so bottomless? what will Stan do to find the kid's gone? and why are all the Stancake's gone?.
P.S has some sad themes to it and that last question was random also I might add a bonus chapter leave a comment on what you think.
Another one of my gravity falls remix story probably going to suck but hay It's still up.
Idea from the cake devil
look him up relay awesome.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 21 )

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Haven't read yet, but you might need some commas and capitalization in your summary. A grammatically incorrect summary can be really of putting to some people.

That being said, commencing read.

Comment posted by twilight517828 deleted Dec 23rd, 2013

Let it be said that not even ponies can break apart siblings for long.

You kind of have a LOT of spelling errors, but the fanfic's still good :twilightsheepish:

Your grammar is killing me. You need HELP!

WHY DO ALL THESE GRAVITY FALLS CROSSOVER WRITERS SUCK SO MUCH AT WRITING!?!??

Many errors.

I suggest an editor.

Like seriously.

Go get one.

Now.

You really need one.

So go.

You may stop reading now.

Why are you sill reading this?

I said go didn't I?

So go.

Find one.

Okay you really need help following orders/suggestions.

Why are you still here.

Geez if you won't go find an editor the least you could do is go outside.

It's nice out there.

Who knows maybe the oxygen could help you.

Or your brain at least.

Yea go out side get some fresh air.

You need it.

You're still here?!

Just go look for an editor or go outside.

It's that's simple.

*sigh*

Whatever I'll be clicking "next" now.

Goodbye.







now I know that there is something definitely wrong with you...

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So many grammar mistakes! Even capitalization! You learn that simple stuff in like grade 1!!!!! How old are you?! I get most bronies are adults. But if you are an adult, good luck in life.

Get. It. FIXED!

YOUR CHARACTERS ARE SO OFF!

That's it?

That was terrible.

Why...Why...Why...I give up on you. :facehoof:

F**K
EVEN LISTENING TO A FNAF RAP BATTLE BY JT MACHINIMA COULDNT HELP THIS[youtube=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=bTCvOi0O5vc]

GO DIPPIN SAUSE

welp... WHAT DA HELL DID I JUST READ :rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp:

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first I was 13-14 year old and secondly I was still new to writing fanfics. :facehoof: But hey I bet you had perfect grammar and AMAZING story's at the age of 13-14. :unsuresweetie:
pretty sure most fanfics written by 13-14 year olds are pretty terrible. So I would say I did a semi good job for my age :twilightsmile:

(P.S I am sorry it took so long to reply I have not been on here for a long time and have only recently considered joining the fandom again)

(P.P.S don't take this as an attack more explaining why it sucks so much. so have a good day)

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