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Clover Skies


I'm just your average pony thinking of an above average short bio! (And that's the best cat in the world, my little Moose).

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This story is a sequel to Part 1: My Little Falls~ A GF and MLP Crossover


Mabel and Dipper Pines were elated about their thirteenth birthday party. All of their friends would be their! There would also be food, music, and much, much more. But when the Mane Six come to Gravity Falls... by mistake, they happen to reunite with their old friends. But when a mysterious curse takes over one of the Mane Six, will the 8 friends break the curse?

Chapters (20)
Comments ( 60 )

I don´t care how good this maybe is written, i just get used to it, that there is more to read in each chapter.
PS: I vote for Twilight and Dipper:twilightsmile:

well i think there is a bit overreacting, at least i don´t understand really why he seems to lost complete the interest on Twilight, but i continue reading first.

I don´t want to sound it that bad, but i have to say, that this is really not long enough for a own chapter. I still somehow like this like befor.
It´s really just to short i think and thats won´t go out of my mind right now.

I Promis to read it o the end first befor i make my final rating, i just want to say something here and there.
I don´t really understand wy Twilight is know like the main evil in the little Story, and i thougth Dipper would realized, that he is better with Twiligth, since he loved her earlier and knows now, that Wendy had a date.

Well i thought i would have a Twillight love Dipper and Dipper love Twilight Story again but it´s ok. It was to short for me and a bit to fast with the thing that happen. I still like it somehow but i like the first one more. I give you an thumb up.

4247933 Thanks for all the constructive criticism! Personally, I liked the first one more too!keep in mind that I wrote this with someone else too, so it wasn't all me!

And yeah! Dipper x Twilight!!!!!!! Can't wait to read yours :pinkiehappy:

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Sometimes i don´t like to give critism but thanks that you seems to understand it just right.
Well i know^^ I don´t really want to blame you. I don´t remember all thing of the other story, but i just remember to be more happy with the other one.
Well i am eagerly try to write something and it seems i found something to write but the first chapter would be just a project besides, maybe if it seems hat they like the first one or maybe the chapters, than i make more. I am just curious if my grammar work out, i am probably not good with complicating sentence but i already try to learn more english words

This story people are a bit ooc...its grate.:pinkiehappy:.

“So, um, I hear you’re- AHHH!”Dipper completely lost it and charged at Jake, filled with jealousy and rage.

Me::rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::rainbowwild::raritystarry::twilightsmile::scootangel::trollestia::twistnerd:

4271812 Yep! There's only 3 parts.

When are you gonna write the next book?

You were right! That was REALLY of character!

happy birthday I guess? Though this is far off from what really happened :rainbowwild:

TWILIGHT YOU LOVE STRUCK IDIOT! :twilightoops:

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Yea. The first two were made in like 2014 so...

Now I just need Discord and Sans. That way we got some god-like creatures (except sandy)

Sans, make Dipper have a bad time. So does for Twi, I thought friendship is magic.

Ok Sans, false alarm. Unless Bill comes out just yell chug.

If Bill comes, remember to yell chug.

7160069 If it is, just tell chug all over again. :rainbowlaugh:

I can't help but drink large amounts of water all day.

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1 So it is Bill and Discord, JUST YELL CHUG!

2 I'm following you because you're a fan of Gravity Falls. And it just ended this year. :fluttershysad:

Oh, we got jealous Twilight. :twilightblush:

What happened there at the end? :rainbowhuh:

*Clears throat* THE DRAMA HAS BEEN DOUBLED!

Dipper! If you thought that Twilight was mad before, then you haven't seen anything yet. :twilightangry2:

Dipper just lost any chance he had with Twilight...



...And to live.

It is time to see how Twilight is feeling.

I feel so bad for Twilight. I mean come on Dipper. :pinkiesad2:

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