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Undyne Devotion


Wow. I feel SO loved here. / Drop Some Vibes & Keep the Ko-fi Warm.

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My name is Elliot I was left alone at a Fantasy Con where I found a stranger with a guidebook, now I'm stuck in Equestria as Elora from Avalar helping a small purple dragon find his destiny.

Why does that sound so familiar?

Spyro Crossover. TG/TF/Displaced Fic. Single Displaced Character Story status, might change in the future.


Made Popular On 7/29/18

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 87 )

not bad, you have my attention.

Let me guess. The pairing is between Spike and the OC?

Phew! And I thought I was the only one who constantly saw Spyro references in Mlp.

You might want to include a status message in your story's description about if or if not you'll be meeting other displaced. By including said status, other people won't bother you about it if you're not readdy or if you don't plan to allowing other Displaced.

Will this story have any spoilers from the Spyro game Elora appears in?

Seems like it will be interesting

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A few for Spyro two Ripto's Rage, but most will be filler for her backstory.

She's a bit of a mysterious character but I think I've pieced some things together.

Not that spyro is like super story heavy to start with lol.

HHHHHHHHHHUUUUUMMMMMMMMHHHHHHHHHHMMMMMM, a new story that could be interesting, have a follow for now, maybe a like later, or could even lead to a fav, lets see how this turns out.

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I'll get the popcorn and the BBQ ribs

SOMEONE GET THE SODA! :pinkiehappy:

Normally I hate the guide stuff in stories, but instead of having a godly guide, he is the guide this time which makes it slightly more interessting. I just hope the possible knowledge about everything (guidebook) isn't getting annoying or taking the fun out of certain stuff.

I think I would also like it more if the story has to adapt to the new appearing Spyro world and not if this is an already existing Spyro Version of Equestria.

Well it wasn't so bad this time, normally I hate this traditionally first and often long "merchant" chapter. I often like it if they try something new for this. However I only start judging the story after a few chapters to give you some time to build the world or whatever.

Since I don't see any good way to do it after getting so many bad examples, I also hope that his friends aren't joining him and that if the characters they were appear there for some reason that they are the real once.

Then again different characters could act in the same role, but maybe it's easier to make us liking them if we know them already.

I have always been a fan of Elora so this looks interesting. I can't wait to see more.

Ignore TechnoNerd, the guy's trying to milk a joke that isn't going very well for him considering his currently low like/dislike ratio.

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Alright, both it is then. Should I bring some Vodka and Rum too?

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hhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmm FUCK IT LET'S GET WASTED!! SO BOTH!!

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Wonderful, 1 full bottle of each for the both of us. Hahahahahahahahahaha.

Waiting, one of my greatest foes.

... I forget the name of the level, but it was in Gateway to Glimmer and had those wierd tiki-head things.

The end of this chapter is a reference to it.

so the key to taming a Timberwolf is... removing their tail? :rainbowhuh: When did they become part Saiyan?

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Oh dang! I remember that! Thought the end scene seemed familiar...

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:rainbowkiss: So happy you caght the idol springs ref!:heart:

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That wolf knew he caused the whole uproar in the forest, once he saw his friends defeated.

He was like...ehhhh I better just make friends.:rainbowlaugh:

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Sorry been moving to a new place, my life is a total mess atm.:raritydespair:

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Smart dog, hope he and the filly are reoccurring characters in this story. Would be fun to see what they get up to.:rainbowlaugh:

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They do make another appearence later in Everfree Night: though not as a main character but side characters.

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understandable. They are kinda like the peanut gallery, They watch all the chaos going on around them than react and comment on it.

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Yeah, well, my childhood was pretty much entirely consistent of Crash, Spyro and Banjo-Kazooie.



It brings me so much joy to see the 90's styles of games making such an enormous comeback.

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I'd love to see Banjo and Kazooie to come back with something great...like a Threeie!

Not another Nutz and bolts fiasco.:ajbemused:

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It reached its 20th anniversary last month and Rare added a Bear an Bird figurehrad to Sea of Thieves, announced a statue from some website (over $400 USD though) and announced plans to release a totaku figure, and even gave a silhouette tease of it.
Who knows... Maybe they'll jump on the remaster-train and do Banjo-Kazooie.

Probably not for a while thougj, because they're focusing most of thier resources towards SoT right now, but maybe in a few years.

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One can always hope. I'm excited for spyro soooo bad!

Those games were my childhood lol.

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Yep.
I was born in '94. Those games molded me into the slightly strange and N-Sane person I am today.



Makes you feel old, though, knowing that the last of the 90's kids became adults last year.

Yay a Breeziee, I actually wanted a Breeziee story for a moment, let's see if she maybe tags along with the group.

Nice, while I hope they still noticed that she was putting up a good fight and our main char is maybe going to scold Spike for potential bragging, I like it so far.
It seems that with some training even Elora could get stronger, I guess what I was fearing is, that in the next chapter everyone including the "high and mighty Spike":scootangel:, would treat her like a weak creature but so far it looks like she isn't completely weak.

Not sure if I asked that question already, but will she have some sort of magic?

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Sunny will play a Sparx like role in the story for Elora.

Yes Elora will gain a few magic spells from the book later on, such as a healing spell, a spell of swiftness and a few more. Nothing overpowered but will compliment Spike's more in your face abilities.

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Lol maybe so, but at least we had the reign of games,people are still looking to continue today.:rainbowlaugh:

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That should be enough, knowing she will be some sort of supporter makes that okay already, I'm just glad that she maybe can help herself in a few situations and maybe one or two baddies.

Nice work on this, great action scenes.

Good work and i cant wait to read the nixt chapter.
But for my taste is (he/she...?) Elora WAY to calm for this situation.

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That gets explained throughout the story, If I could move the story along a bit quicker. But I'm between moving atm.

Glad you're having fun reading.

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I'm going to shoot for an update sometime tomorrow.:twilightsmile:

Half of me like this story but another half makes me mad that Spike was abused.

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Well stick around, we get to see Spike be a badass next chapter.:moustache:

That picture lookds good to, but I maybe prefer the otehjr one. Both have something nice.

“Oh! Twilight’s Castle…”

I forgot what you told me about it, but I hope she isn't using to much of that knowledge.
I think I would have like it if she wasn't a fan.

“I hate to interrupt, but word is coming that The Everfree is going out of control!” Starlight bit her lower lip, the sound of screaming from outside the window filling the air of the room.

They should have gotten one calmer chapter, no need to rush with the adventure.
This always feels odd if they are interrupted this way.
They come back from a fightz, say hello and then somewhere else, someone is eaten by a monster.
I like it that they went without her first even if they aren't really allowed to tell her to stay there I think, good thing she wasn't listening. That way it felt less uhhmm typicall and rushed with the fight.

“Don’t you dare!” He tried to speak up as I galloped at top speed down the hall, vanishing with my breezie friend out of view.

and for whatever reason Spike is going to be as fast as her isn't he?, I think he should catch up later. I get it that he is the hero here, but he still needs training and Speed can still be something that's her thing.

Well it should be fine as long as you aren't planning to put adventure after adventure after adventure without showing anything else. I'M not good with words here at least not in english, but I think there shouldn't be non stop problems happening every single day there. It's more about what is going to happen in the future than what you are doing at the moment.


Overall, I have to say that I really like this story and only wish for it to get close to something I could call perfect.

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