So I've been a big fan of Legend of Zelda ever since I was a young boy with my favorite in the series being Twilight Princess. My younger brother Mike knowing this got me a copy of Hyrule Warriors Legends from a garage sale. Now I'm a teenager again which is fine but to make matters worse I'm the Twilight Princess herself. Now all I have to do is make sure no one but my roommate Sunset know's the truth... and I just know it's going to suck when they find out!
Sex tag is for innuendo's and some suggestive scenes.
tags will change as necessary.
Edit: as of 10/28/18 this story is now being edited by TheUltimateBrony-Class-S
Edit: ... Featured 9/27/21... By Din everyone! I was NOT expecting that! I... I don't know what to say but... Thank you all so much!
Edit: and on 11/10/21? Again thank you everyone! I am so glad to know this story is enjoyed by so many people!
Edit: on 12/9/21 mere minutes after an update ... Thank you SO much everyone.
Yay! It's up!
Keeping track on this one.
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Thanks. Hope ya enjoy it!
FFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKK YYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA MIDNA IS HOT AS FUCK!!
Nothing in this stood out. Swap out the franchise, and this is any one of the thousand clones like it.
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Glad you enjoyed the chapter and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Interesting...I've seen one story that featured the Imp-form of Midna, Now I'm seeing one that has both forms and is in the EQG world. I'm tempted to see more and what'll happen next.
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Well I hope you stick around, see where it goes and enjoy the story.
Nice start, and curious were it will go, cause Midna is my fave Zelda character.
PS.:
You're = you are
Your = the *** of you
'Face it' or 'Fact is' ?
PPS.:
all italic
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With sunset and midna getting into the shenanigans Celestia probably will go what is my school gone to?
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but for now not much has happened.
Once things pick up probably
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I thought as much still show me more also if we could get some roommate shinanigans between sunset and midna beyond the teasing that be great. You know like video game rivalries and what not.
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I was planning on the video game rivalry. Might show a little of that in the next chapter.
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Cool
So the MC arrived around the same time as Sunset, and kept her from becoming a total bitch, awesome. And this time, she's only passing through the mirror to say "Hi" and nothing else.
Clearly nothing bad will happen
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I know right?
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Yup, absolutely nothing
Will all the sex be female on female?
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I currently don't have plans to add that yet, that's not to say I won't add it but I want to get a little farther along before thinking about that
Well...That's foreboding...
I wonder how others will react to finding out Midna's true identity? some will be understanding, some will treat her different and others will probably pester her into obvious reasons...
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They know something of that there can be no question but I half expect zant to force midna to reveal herself sooner than she wants to.
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Foreboding was the feeling I was going for with that line actually, glad it worked.
Funny, I would have pinned Pinkie for a Kirby main. Pink, happy, and far too powerful for being what he is.
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true, and she does like playing as Kirby but she also like doing mind games as Duck Hunt
midna in a skimpy sleep wear *imagines it and starts drooling*
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Settle down there Shadow. You're coming on a little to strong there
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NEVER!! I'LL HAVE MY LEWD THOUGHTS!!
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Well I tried
A suggestion, put your thoughts in italics without " " marks. If you hadn't had the literary decency to note that the character is thinking, I would've thought she was thinking aloud.
'The Twilight'? That can only mean Twilight Princess is coming out here. Shit part of me had hoped that it wouldn't be created here. Ok, deep breath Midna. Sunset made...well tricked me into that promise so at least the girls will know, but what if.... Midna thought trying to calm down as her thoughts kept going in circles.
You could even put in bold too, to make the lines 'pop', if you feel that readers can't tell thought from the rest of the story.
'The Twilight'? That can only mean Twilight Princess is coming out here. Shit part of me had hoped that it wouldn't be created here. Ok, deep breath Midna. Sunset made...well tricked me into that promise so at least the girls will know, but what if....'* Midna thought trying to calm down as her thoughts kept going in circles.
*Edit: you might want to at least put ' at the ends to show where the thoughts finish
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Thank's for the advice. I'll keep it in mind from now on
Just thought of something. Midna's presence meant Sunset never became the Queen Bitch from canon. Meaning she never ruled CHS with an iron fist. MEANING ANON-A-MISS CANT HAPPEN, OR AT LEAST IF IT DOES SUNSET CAN'T BE SUSPECT #1!!!
Praise the power of the Twilight!
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Yup, I toyed with the idea of Midna arriving during the Anon-A-Miss story but considering I hate that story I dropped the idea.
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Hey dude sorry for sounding impatient but I was wondering when will chapter 3 be released?
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You'll be happy to hear that chapter 3 is a little over half way done, so hopefully it'll come soon
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That's great to hear. As a fellow legend of Zelda and MLP fan I half to say your doing a great job on this story keep up the good work.
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One can’t rush quality take all the time you need
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Will do. I'm also looking forward to ......................................................
Standard female AI: "We at Mattchilly productions are sorry. The previous statement has been censored due to spoilers."
ooohhh nice
Ooh, another 'villain' as a long time friend, the sudden, brief flash of miss cheese puff herself and some background story for Trixie's character building. Flutter's as a Zelda fan, I guess it might justify if she too has anime character pics hanging around her room like a certain pony counterpart.
If I had to guess that she's trying to earn a lot of money for a dress for the "Fall Formal".
Seems that a certain Siren is either spying or following Midna & Sunset.
IT'S ALIVE PRAISE BE TO FAN FICTION JESUS!!
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.... *shrugs* ahh well. hope you enjoy the chapter.
Really? that's all you have to say about this chapter? Just "Thank you it's back."? nothing about Lemon Zest, or Trixie or even about how Sunset somehow turned the tables and messed with Midna?
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That's a good theory about why Trixie has so many jobs, who knows. maybe you'll learn the reason why Trixie has so many jobs for in a few chapters.
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I've never heard Adagio called that.
Honestly I kinda forgot about all of Fluttershy's anime pics, now I need to figure out how to work that in. also "miss cheese puff"
Nether man is blond one has black hair the other red not blond
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HOW DID I MISS THAT?! Thanks for pointing that out. I'll fix it asap
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No problem
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to answer your questions yes i did enjoy it
and i got my camera to record fluttershy's swarming over midna XD
Way to go man i can't wait for the next chapter to come out, oh and i saw the twili following Sunset and Midna Saturday evening well played but i gotta ask how are you going to work the Fall formal into the story if Sunset is already good before the first movie even starts?
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Me: Well that's simple,what I'm planning for the Fall Formal is BLANK, BLANK, BLANK, and BLANK
standard female AI: We at...... SPAAACE......... we must...... science.... *sparks fly out of the speaker*
Me: .... damn it Twilight I thought we fixed that AI!
Twilight: We did! I don't know what's going on!
Sunburst: Oh sorry I spilled some water on that thing half an hour ago.... That wasn't important was it?
Me/Twilight: SUNBURST!!!!!