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There’s more to the magic of friendship than meets the eye!

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This story is a sequel to A Tale of a Loving Sister


After being adopted by trial, Chase Tucker is now enjoying his life with his new big sister, Sunset Shimmer. Join him as he embarks on a new magically family-thrilled adventure.

This story also stars the returning cast, and new characters including Flurry Heart, Starlight Glimmer, Lightning Dust, Gloriosa Daisy, Timber Spruce, and Princesses Twilight, Luna, Celestia and Cadence.

This also stars El Macho from Despicable Me 2, but with a different plot twist.

Chapters (30)
Comments ( 96 )

At this rate, Estella might as well get a death sentence.

Yeah... I think Rainbow Dash took it a little too fa on that scary story.

“Shhhhhh! Don’t you wanna get busted? He’ll hear us!” Sunset said. “Sorry, darling,” Rarity said, until eventually, they made it out of the vent and then went towards the car, until Eduardo came out and then heard them hide, then flipped out 8 knives in each hand, “AHA! I HAVE YOU NOW!” Suddenly, he was ran over by their car. The girls saw Spike driving, “Sorry, he was getting on my nerves.” Twilight rolled her eyes and held him in her arms.

That last part reminded me of the end of this video:

Please tell me that Starlight was still there, and she told Sunset that Flurry's Equestrian counterpart was the first naturally born alicorn.

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Starlight was there, but she wanted to keep some of the Equestria stuff a secret

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Well, she could of told Sunset. And just Sunset.

Well this just went loco.

You are mad. First Home alone reference, Then Despicable me 2 reference and now Harry Potter reference. You sir/ma'am are mad.

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Is that a good thing or a bad thing. I’m also a sir.

Comment posted by Dinomite123 deleted Aug 9th, 2020

awesome story cant wait for the next chapter my first day was rough too

running really fast? Rainbow's power.

i have a sneaking suspicion chase is gonna end up with ALL the Main 7's powers

my theory on chase ending up with all of the main 7's powers still holds, they can just be supplemented by the Electro-Ball move because why not.

cant wait for more!

awesome chapter cant wait for the next chapter those music links are dead

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You mean they’re not available or they work

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Try searching for it on YouTube instead, in case if you read this chapter

awesome i bet chase woulud hear kairi's theme when he think on his crush :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lg7n8-rU1tMawesome chapter cant wait for volume 3 of this story keep up the great work:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

I have two questions
1. Does Chase still have his powers?
2. Will this series have a part 3?

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No, the stone was destroyed meaning his powers were drained and yes there will be a volume 3 but I’m planning on doing a “Better Together” short story collection.

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Will Chase be getting permanent powers like the Mane 7 in part 3?

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No. I already told you before. When the stone’s destroyed, its magic’s gone too.

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That’s not what I meant. I meant, will Chase find a different source of equestrian magic?

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If you decide to have Chase gain powers again, what will they be?

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I don’t know. Right now, I’ve got nothing. It was just a reference to Harry Potter but with the magic thing from “Twilight’s Kingdom.”

“You little varmint! You lied to us! We thought you were our friend!” Applejack said.

What did he lie about?

“If any of you are new, my name is Gloriosa Daisy. And this is my brother, Timber Spruce. We’re going to be your counselors for this trip and this time, nothing that happened last time will occur again.”

Well, that sucks

Cadence watched her husband leave to do his job and then worked on hers: watching over the students and babysitting Sunset’s brother/her step-nephew.

Then what’s sunset?

She cleared her throat and then began her story, “So every night, during the light of the full moon, when the woods get extremely foggy and when no living soul comes out, something drastic happens for people who visit the woods. Every night, they hear screaming of some kind of wailing soul.” Chase started shaking nervously, then Sunset comforted him by pressing him on her torso and hugging him softly, then Rainbow Dash continued, “And when people see this mysterious figure, it starts to haunt your soul like a nightmare in your head that never stops. But when it gets closer, it reveals itself with slashing claws, tendrils, big fangs, and creepy eyes. It’s no other than the... GHOST OF THE EVERFREE!” The students started screaming, including Chase, then Sunset shushed him as he started crying. “Sorry, buddy. I was messing around,” Rainbow Dash said.

I feel like this is going to be important soon.

“No, sweetie. The ghost’s isn’t gonna get you. There’s no such thing as a ghost of Everfree. It’s just a urban legend. You know, a fairytale,” Sunset said.

Yea sunset, just like Gaia Everfree, right?

I honestly didn’t know they were in sleeping bags.

“Don’t worry, Chase. The ghost is not real,” Sunset said.

Keep saying that, sunset.

Chase scooted over to Rarity and laid his head on her belly, then Rarity placed one hand on his hair and her other arm around his shoulders, until Fluttershy embraced her arm on the sleeping child’s back.

Aren’t they in bunk bed’s?

Sunset got him a small fishing rod and put some bread onto the hook.

Bread?

Also, why didn’t sunset talk to twilight sooner about everything that happened?

I thought the girls were already seniors. Also, does this take place before or after they go to Everfree? And, is Chase and his friends gonna be the new main 6 or 7?

After Chase finished his drink and went back to sleep, he then soft thunder rumbling, and then heard spooky noises and felt cold from the wind, until a dark shadowy figure crawled out from his closet and slithered into a king cobra, then formed a huge clawed hand that tried to grab him.

You mean heard?

The final flashback showed him doing a skydiving stunt, “He died doing the greatest stunt in the most macho way possible! Jumping off an airplane while riding a shark, with 250 pounds of dynamite strapped to his chest! Into the mount of an active volcano!” When his body touched the lava, the volcano exploded and created a huge cloud of ash. “It was epic!”

I’m curious to know what he expected.

“Yes!” Rainbow Dash said. Sunset thought for a moment, “This may sound ridiculous, but do you think he might have something to do with Equestrian magic?”

What made her think that?

“Because I’m telling you, if anybody in the town has anything involved with evil magic...” She then pointed at Eduardo entering his restaurant, “It’s him!”

How?
Also, is it necessary to put him in the story?

“Can I lay on it?” Chase asked. “Mmhmm,” she replied, then she lifted him up and placed him on the couch, until he crawled over, laid down on her belly and gave her a warm hug.

I’ll be honest and say I’m not an expert, but isn’t that dangerous?

Meanwhile, Sunset and the girls went towards the entrance of Eduardo’s restaurant after they parked their car. They snuck towards a wall and then Rainbow Dash checked for any guards, “Okay, we’re clear.” They then quietly snuck towards the door and Sunset found out that the door was locked. “It’s locked,” she said. “Great. How’re we gonna get inside?” Rainbow Dash asked. “I may have something in my makeup bag that can pick the lock,” Rarity said, as she looked through her purse and found a small pin, then Twilight used her telekinetic magic to pick through the lock, until the door opened. “Well, that was easy,” Twilight said, after she pushed her glasses up a little. Then, they entered the restaurant and looked around for clues, until Rainbow Dash made sure the door was shut and the blinds were shut.

They trying to get into a restaurant or a facility?

Rainbow Dash then laughed, “A chicken? Some guard dog that is! What’s the worst thing that can possibly happen?”

She f*cked up when she said that.

Sunset shrugged her shoulders and smirked, then she placed her hand on her hip, “Well, at least it can’t get any worse.” Suddenly, the chicken leaped onto Sunset and started pecking her face with his beak until Sunset moved around the restaurant making a mess, “AGH! Get it off of me! Get it off of me! Get it off of me!”

Not gonna lie, sunset deserved that, because your never supposed to say that.

“Is everyone okay?” Applejack asked. The girls nodded, until they got confused about the chicken. “I just don’t get it. What caused this creature to act this way?” Fluttershy asked. “I don’t know, but that was a close call,” Applejack said. “You said it,” Rainbow Dash replied. “That pollo was loco!” Pinkie Pie said, until the girls made stern looks. “What?”

Thanks pinkie

“I don’t understand. If Eduardo’s not the culprit, then who is?” Sunset asked pacing around thinking.

How did they even come to that conclusion?

Comment posted by Pete100 deleted Aug 17th, 2020

“Looks like you’ve made some company, but I’m glad you never forgot about me,” Lightning Dust said, until she saw Chase hiding himself behind Sunset’s legs for comfort. “Who’s that over there? Is he your son?” Sunset looked down and patted Chase’s head gently, “He’s actually my brother. This is Chase. Sorry about this, by the way. He’s kinda shy around new people.” Chase slowly walked over and hugged Lightning Dust.

Am I the only one who thinks Chase might be Bipolar?

When Chase got outside quietly, he saw something glowing in the backyard. He went towards it and saw a glowing gemstone. He kneeled down and picked it up. When he touched it, he suddenly began to feel the energy from the stone flow through him. When he came down, he suddenly began shaking, then he went back inside and saw Sunset reading her book, “SUNSET!” Sunset jolted and saw Chase covered in soot. “Chase, what happened to you? You’re all filthy,” Sunset asked. “Have you been playing with the stove?” Chase shook his head, then showed her the stone.

1. When did he get lifted up? 2. Is he even big enough to reach the stove? And 3. He must have gotten a rabbit foot from one of the angels, because he’s too lucky.

Eventually, she decided to write a note in her journal to Princess Twilight about this.

Now you wanna start telling twilight what happened as soon as it happens?

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Not trying to be rude or anything, but are you saying that you have a problem with my story?

The next morning, Sunset woke up and went to check on Chase again, until she saw him sleeping calmly. After she realized he was fine, Sunset went downstairs for breakfast, until she saw her journal pulsing and buzzing. After she opened it, a message from Princess Twilight came through.

How is it that anytime twilight sends a message sunset is there?

“Well, that’s good,” Sunset said. “Anyways, I’m gonna be busy with something personal, so since I’m not gonna be available, could you take Chase to that store and help him pick out some clothes?”

What’s personal?

‘I should probably get him some cute pajamas and shirts based on the stuff he likes, and maybe make him some as well for his birthday,’ she thought to herself.

I was gonna ask how they knew his birthday, but then I realized sunset had his birth certificate, and probably told the others.

“By the way, there’s something I need to show you guys,” Sunset said, then she took out the stone from her pocket and showed it to them. The girls gasped, then Sunset started to explain, “Chase found this in our backyard last night and he said its energy bonded with him. I wrote to Princess Twilight about it and she said that it’s something called “The Sorcerer’s Stone.” I believe we’re dealing with Equestrian magic once again. I know we were hoping to kick that off the bucket list, but I don’t think Chase might be able to control its magic.”

I don’t think talking about the stone in front of the other kids is a good idea.

“Is it true, Chase? Are ya really cursed?” Seamus asked. Chase nodded, then he began to cry, when he looked at his locket and saw the picture of his parents. “Are those your mommy and daddy?” Melody asked. “Mmhmm. This was my mother’s locket, but she placed the picture inside it for me,” Chase said. “Don’t worry, bruh,” Seamus said. “They ain’t goin’ nowhere from you. They still with ya.” Chase smiled and hugged Seamus, until he hugged Chase back, “I promise.”

And, that’s why. And, why did he look at the locket? Also, We don’t know if that’s 100% true or not.

Sunset then began to think about something, ‘I just hope Princess Twilight really likes him.’

Why is she so worried about if they like him or not?

After Sunset stood up, she was a unicorn with her mane the same color as her hair, and her cutie mark was the same sun symbol. “SUNSET!” a voice appeared. She saw a lavender alicorn with navy blue mane with two streaks colored pink and purple. Her cutie mark was a magenta star.

Pink and purple?

Another pony came in, but she was a unicorn who had pale light grayish lavender fur, moderate purple curled mane with light purple and pale light grayish aquamarine streaks, modern Persian blue eyes, and a cutie mark showing a purple and white glimmering star with a aquamarine borealis. “Hey, Sunset,” she said. “If you don’t know me, I’m Starlight Glimmer.”

Light purple and pale light grayish aquamarine?

Also, I thought sunset already told him about her past.

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Of course not, it’s one of my favorites. I just get confused about some of the things that happen in the story.

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It’s just my first time doing these sort of things. I’m really trying my best.

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Don’t worry, I understand what that’s like. I suggest probably asking someone experienced.

“It’s also fun to imagine something that they want to do.” Starlight then understood.

I still do that to this very day.

“Chase, don’t worry. I’ll write to Princess Twilight about this,” Sunset said.

About what?

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