[Dark] [Alternating Perspectives] [Displaced]
A strange creature has been living in the Everfree Forest for over seven hundred years. He lived there to keep hidden from the ponies, knowing that he could be considered a threat if he got out in public. He instead lived his life alone, because that's what he felt was better.
One thousand years after her banishment and two years after her return, Princess Luna tries to hide her most shocking secret from everypony. A secret so profound, that if they knew the truth about her... She doesn't even want to know what would happen.
Unknown to the two of them, they are closer than they expect, for they lost each other a long time ago. But they are about to reunite, while a new evil will rise to conquer their new world.
Rated Teen because of language.
Gore tag because of blood. Very big amounts of blood.
Drama tag because of... OMG, THE FEELS!!!
Alt, Universe: This story happens after the end of Season four, but events of Season Five will be slightly altered by the main character.
Let me guess: It's a human.
Hero. Tails need a chance In the spotlight instead of having to go as a sidekick.
Plus I don't see him as a Merc.
I like it cant wait for more.
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Shadow: One vote for Hero! Next week I'll start the next chapter, and the mission with more votes will be chosen. Please note that almost every chapter before a mission will have a decision. The only ones that won't have are missions where Tails has no choice but to do what's necessary. That said, thank you guys for your comments!
pretty good for now :)
Hero mission
Dark mission
hero or neutral
Shadow: Alright guys, the poll for the next chapter's mission is closed and the final standings are:
Hero: 4 votes
Neutral: 2 votes
Dark: 1 vote
Hero Mission it is! Will start on the next chapter and try to post it as soon as I'm finished. See you all then!
Amazing I also love tails, please do more
More please.
MORE NOW!!!!
😡
And knowing tia (the ever idiot that she is) she’s been helping fund his “research and tech advancements”
Where's tails?
...................... AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
MORE PLEASE!!!
WE DEMAND MORE OF THIS!
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Hey we share the same pic
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It's a cool dragon, insn't it?
Tails and the Mane 6 meet the Nazis
You got me crying right off the bat
this story is the best
I just realized something in this story tales is a over 800 years old... HOW!?
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My headcannon is that the continuos exposure to the radiation of the Chaos Emeralds has affected Tails body, slowing down his aging until it stopped entirely.
But don't make any mistakes! Tails is not Immortal, he can still be killed. He is merely Ageless.
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I know the difference between immortality and being ageless
I hope someone pickup than phone? Because I FUCKING CALLED IT!
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Actually...this would explain knuckles....
Father and Daughter reunited at last!
This Displaced fic is VERY interesting. I wonder what will happen next. Oh & I vote for the "Hero" path for the next mission where a decision has to be made.
Lost interest the moment you added another member from sonic -_-
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Sorry that this is not what you were looking for. But hey, there's plenty other Displaced fics for you to look through. I'm happy that you at least took a look at this fic, I worked really hard, took countless hours and a lot of rewriting drafts until I settled on this, so thanks anyway! Hope you take a look at my other stories too.
Yo, I love Sonic! Great job, liked and followed.
Sunny, cara, não sabia que essa era sua também, você realmente tem um trabalho massa, mas esse final não deveria ter vindo antes do final de Metal Madness? Porque a filha dele ainda estava na jaula e eles não se reencontram, ao contrário do final de Metal Madness
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Esse é o final neutro, porque fiz uma votaçāo pra missāo do Metal Madness, e a vencedora foi a missāo de Heroi. Isso é só o que teria acontecido se ele tivesse decidido permanecer neutro na sua missāo. A historia em si ainda continua.
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Poderia ter posto ao menos dentro do capítulo entre parenteses: alternate ending, ou algo assim, tem gente que entende que é alternativo mas tem muitos que se perdem
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E eu ainda estou esperando mais daquela maravilha de fic que se chama: The Start of a New Journey
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E nāo se preocupe, eu já estou trabalhando no proximo capitulo. Nāo tenho uma data especifica pra postar ainda.
Ah sim, obrigado por me lembrar. Eu sabia que tinha esquecido alguma coisa no capitulo.
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Ok, Estou boa parte do final da tarde/noite aí pra ajudar, a partir da 5:30 da tarde mais ou menos
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Você consegue me encontrar mais é on no Discord e no jogo Warframe
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Agora, acabou der dar 11 da noite, eu vou amassar a palha.
Valeu amigo.
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De boas, tenho que ir também, qualquer coisa me manda um privado que quando der eu respondo
Interesting. But why did his daughter die, again?
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Didn't you read the prologue?
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I mean, why did you, the writer, choose to add that to the story?
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Even though I have some successful stories, I'm still not that good a writer.
To be honest with you, it was an idea I had for a while now. You know that idea you have, that no matter what you do, will keep teasing you in the back of your head, until you write it down? I frikin' dreamt with it. I dunno if it's an original concept, but I find it interesting. Also, about the alternative ending. I started thinking "What if...?", and you know where that usually leads. In the alternative ending, Tails and Luna never met properly, they only saw each other in passing sometimes, so they never had time to recognize each other. And, with Eggman's death, the other threats decided it wasn't worth the risk trying to go after Equestria. So basically, the alternative ending is partially non canon to the fic. Hope that cleared things up, and don't be afraid to ask anything.
Could use some more meat, a bit more work on grammar, and some parts didn't make sense, like how the Crusaders said they were lost yet suddenly knew how to exit the forest after talking with the Lone Fox. All in all, just try to slow down with your writing, really think about each piece you write. There were bits in there that could've used an extra word to show that the fillies were acknowledging and actually heard what the Fox said, and that could've been solved and made into a proper conversation with a bit more thought put into it.
Also, I'm very sorry if any of that came out as rude, I'm just not certain how else to word what I'm trying to say.
This whole chapter clashes somewhat with the dark and slow feel of the previous ones. They NEED more meat, more explanations, even if they're a bit vague. Because at this point, it feels like the transitions are almost nonexistent.
Are you going to release a new chapter anytime soon?
Actually, if YOU weren’t an asshole and pulled a fucking GUN!!! then no one would’ve died, ya bloody asshole!