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Moonshine The Brony


Just another brony who wants to share his stories with the world!

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The Changelings are growing in power. The Elements are losing power. When a strange event leaves Equestria with a potential replacement for one of the Elements, they must get around one small detail. This replacement? He's not local, if you catch my drift.

This is a crossover between MLP and the Megaman/Rockman franchise starring Zero and the Cyber Elf from Megaman Zero 4.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 48 )

What is this based off. I'm also finding it hard to follow the story line and the dialogue is a little scratchy. Ill leave my opinion for later chapters.

>>FireDancer

Thanks for your feedback! The first chapter was a little rough, mostly because I was having trouble bridging together the two franchises. This is a crossover with the Megaman Zero and Megaman X branches. Believe it or not, but this was the revision of a previous ( and might I add FAILED) attempt. But anyway, sorry if it's confusing. I'll try better in the future!

3176039I take it you like it? (And don't call me sir, I'm probably younger than most of you!)

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Yeah, I'm 14. Oh well, doesn't matter. The important thing is that I do a good job at my fanfics. If you've got any suggestions for future crossovers, then let me know!

(P.S. Awesome Profile Pic!)

If you guys (and gals) have any questions, complaints, or just any plain old suggestions, I'm pretty open-minded. I might be able to work ideas into the fanfic. Thanks for reading!:twilightsmile:

All I have to say is keep going!!!

I think it would make sense that Zero's Buster Cannon can both fire in a charge shot mode or full-auto. After all, for the most part, couldn't that buster cannons fire as fast as you mashed the button?

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True, but didn't it only shoot 3 at a time? Or was that the old ones?

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I believe that was the older Megaman titles. I certainly recall no such mention of a fire rate limitation.

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Maybe you're right. Time to go and play the entire series again! I do know that on ZX the three shot limit applied though, and that's one of the newest ones... Oh well. I'll find out today.

3183888 it was 3 shots, but with the second or third hacker upgrade on croire(the cyber elf in Z4), you could shoot 4 shots.

in anycase, its good to see another Zero fic on here!

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Yeah, you're right. But I do remember that if younwere close enough to an enemy or the side of the screen you could pretty much shoot as much as you wanted.

By the way, I know that the default name was Criore, but I got the name Charite from either Hirondelle, Cerveau, or Ciel... (Can't remember which one!)

Glad to see that it's getting a positive response! I was debating whether I should go through with this, but obviously I chose the right choice!

Just finished the first chapter, and by looking at just what I've read, this looks like a pretty good story right now. Keep working, I'd love to see more :pinkiehappy:

I like it! Another! *smashes teacup* :pinkiehappy:

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Working on it right now! Soooo glad the weekend's here!

Yeah, I would seriously like more of this. Also, nice work on the Shout Out.

Hate to say it guys, but you'll have to wait for the update... I forgot to save the Word Document I was working on... Stupid me. It sucks even more because I had a good 5 chapters on it that I was going to post, but my laptop ran out of power and lost the file... Sometimes technology's a blessing, sometimes its a burden. I'd appreciate a little patience for the upcoming chapters. I promise you that they'll be good!

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:pinkiegasp:Oops! I got too focused on Zero and completely forgot about Charite! I should probably go back and fix/add some parts of the story to better make sense! Thanks a lot for telling me! I probably never would have noticed otherwise... :facehoof:

Wait a second...

"and that is Flash Sentry," the orange Unicorn raised a hoof in a wave.

Flash Sentry is a Pegasus...

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Sorry! I was pretty tired last night so I probably messed up a few times! I'll just go back and fi them, and you guys just pretend it disn't happen!

From Everfree Forest and Crystal Empire really far...Wonder why all of them go to Empire not Canterot...It's much have special event in soon.

And yeah...Idea of Charite (Or Croire I guess.) became Unicorn made me want to draw her!!

This is Charite Pony in my style (Maybe she is Alicorn not Unicorn now, hehehe) :twilightsheepish:

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This... This is... I don't even know what to say! This is almost exactly how I envisioned Charite as a Unicorn when I first started, sace for the blue in her hooves and the golden part around her horn!

This might be asking too much, but would you possibly be interested in doing cover art for future stories? The best I can do is a somewhat decent Luna in black and white and shade it a little... One of the reasons I chose to do a fanfic over art or music!

As for Canterlot... Go back and read Adapting to Change (I think). It would make sense that if they wanted to keep Zero a secret from Celestia (who would do ANYTHING to protect her little ponies) then Shining Armor would go to the place where he not only knew best, but also had his wife, who is a Princess herself, and thus privy to special priveleges such as privacy.

But yes, something will happen, but I can't tell you what... (Sigma/Weil may or may not have anything to do with it, trying to decide what should happen first.) Should Weil find Canterlot before or after the...
Oops! Almost gave it away! You'll just have to wait!

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Megaman is my first crush when I'm childhood. It's one I love so much...The first game I play and love! So I draw this not just for you. But for my love too!

And about your future stories...I Can't promise I will draw it when you made that stories...Because this is a first time I draw arts for story here...and I do it for Magaman...l draw it from my want...Never think to draw for request before...

But...maybe...if your future stories make me interesting it to much...I may draw it. :twilightsmile:

Oh...And I just think maybe that special event much be something about Somba. Never though about Sigma or Wile. :twilightsheepish:

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I understand, I usually just do things because I want to. As for Sigma/Weil... you'll just have to wait and see!

I want to see what is attacking the Crystal Empire. I also want to see the Oh Crap face(s) mae by the fools who are attacking when they see just what Zero is capable of at full tilt.

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What I have in mind will make the Oh Crap moment better than what you probably have in mind. Apart from Zero, I'd be scared of Shining Armor since they hurt his wife!

Really fast event...How Cadance got wounded when she just bring Zero to meet luna. :twilightoops:

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When Luna nodded towards Cadance (is it really spelled Cadence???) and she close the door, I meant that she left the room to leave the two alone; I never said what she did from then on. If she did leave the room, them she could have gone out somewhere and them gotten injured.

Need more Line spacing. between Interlocutor. :facehoof:

And Zero....Do you want to find your own cutie mark with us? :unsuresweetie:

Oh rooster teeths, "Red vs Blue". Thou art an amazing series.

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Did I fix the problems from before?
It's great when I can fix things to make you guys like this more.

I've seen some mistakes thrown through here and there. Nothing major but It would be much better to understand if fixed.

So new weapon, or did he get the Homing Torpedo?

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A modified version, as he doesn't have an arm-mounted buster anymore. You'll see the effects in a later chapter!

Sorry I haven't updated in a while! I've been busy with schoolwork lately and just haven't had the time to update this one!

Anyway, its almost Nightmare Night, so get the costumes and candy ready! I hope you all have a great Nightmare Night!

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You guys should post a picturw of your costumes if you do decide to dress up!

I look forward to the next chapter

How about Geo Stelar from MegaMan Starforce as the new Element of Magic He is incredibly smart and focused for his age you can find more about him at the megaman wikia and it isn't stupid

YEAS!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy: I AM READY FOR SEASON FOUR CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE APPLEJACK EPISODES

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Yeah, I know. Remebered it after I wrote it, but you can blame that on Megaman 8, which I've been playing a lot lately.


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Yeahhh, but I wouldn't call it magic. Plus, I kind if want to get the stories to have as diverse of characters possible and stay away from using the same game franchises, even if they're a spin-off series. Sorry!

Wait, how could the hydra have bled out if the Z-Sword is a laser? Because it is a laser, the nature of it would instantly cauterize any wound an enemy would sustain, so it would be physically impossible for the hydra to bleed out unless... a wizard did it.:facehoof:

...how can stallions change pants when they're not wearing any? You know what? F*** it, I'm not even going to bother anymore with the logic issues, because YOU can deal with them yourself :3 :pinkiecrazy:

I'd like to suggest maybe adding Vile to your story, because he was always my favorite Megaman villain, and I'm sure others would appreciate it too.
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The first chapter ending with the author note makes seance about Loyalty for Zero which now that I think about it he could be the second wielder of the Element of Loyalty. :pinkiesmile:

Wonder if this will continue?

Crossovers with MegaMan are cool to see


Wonder if you will do anything with Spike?

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