Pretty good, all in all. Didn't give it a thorough run through, but grammar and spelling looks ok.

Haven't played Fallout myself yet, but the story still makes sense.

Looking forward to more.

From what I've seen so far: Yes, it is "any good". Or rather, it seems to be terrific so far. Your Lone Wanderer reminds me of my own: cybernetic enhancements up the wazoo.

Actually, I found your author's note quite interesting: "Just an FYI, in this story the Wanderer and the Courier are the same character, so he has much awesome. On another note, a lot of the equipment he is using is made up. Personally if you ask me, if you give a character 10 INT, along with 100 in all the respective skills, then dump them in a place like Big MT and Zeta for a few years, they will be able to unleash much SCIENCE!"

I have had both of these ideas myself, though admittedly separately. I considered writing a fic where the two are the same character somehow, and another where the two are separate characters but meet and ultimately work together to exploit the wonders of Big MT and Zeta. I even eventually toyed with the idea of somehow sending the two to Equestria (though in my case it was FO:E's Equestria, though the aliens were still involved). Unfortunately, I am actually a terrible writer, so these just remained little story ideas in my mind (which you seem to have read somehow. Creepy).

I am ecstatic to see these ideas actually coming to life, as it where. Judging from the quality of your writing so far, I have no doubt you will be able to do them far more justice than I would have, were I to have actually put the effort into doing so. Can I mention again how creepy it is that you seem to have read my mind and mashed three of my ideas together?

Anyway, from what I have read it seems to be an excellent start to an excellent story, and I hope to see updates in the relatively near future.

Ye it is good keep it going.

Gimmie brohoof and keep it going. Oh btw FIMFiction also works on the Wii (Thanks Nintendo!)

Actually that was pretty good im looking forward to reading more of it keep up the great work ^^

It's got some promise, keep writing and see how it goes.

Tracking and Email-tracking. Keep up the good work!

I usually don't care for Fallout crossovers, but I think this is written well enough to warrant being Tracked and Liked. So that's just what I'm going to do.

As a prereader, I claim this quarry for my own. Seriously, I will preread for you if you need a prereader, mainly because this story is awesome, and a level 100 Wander/Courier with all perks and max stats makes my head want to explode with the awesomeness, and I want to make sure that this story does not slowly die out. Also, I hope that he has good Karma, and preferably he will not kill the everything. Tracked, and take my thumbs. Good show!

Oh wow. I didn't expect to get such good feedback from the people who read this! Thank you all for the encouragement people!

Being told my stuff is nice makes me all like...

>>245929245929 and FYI, the character I was basing my wanderer off of is really like...level 58 maybe? I modded the crap out of my game. And really? You would preread it?

FYI I started on the new chap a bit ago, it's sitting at about 1k words.

>>248315248315 Yes, I would preread it. Level 58? What. I hope he has no reason to attack them... they would be DEAD.

so... does he have the wild wasteland perk?

>>248532248532 The original Fallout 3 didn't have a Wild wasteland perk/trait. It was on, forever.

And it didn't make you waste a trait point because you want to have a bit of fun in your game (I blame obsidian for being haters...)

Also, this is....INTERESTING.

*Tracks*

>>248532248532 Well, he is in a universe in which Pinkie Pie exists, so I guess yeah.

Incredible.

28/0 thumbs? Niiiiiiiice...

I would love to see this continued. It is absolutely enthralling, and it combines two things I find perfect: ponies and Fallout. Please make a second chapter, as that would be very amazing of you

A great story. Tracked, defiantly one of the better HiE fallout crossovers i have been reading.

  Being a fallout crossover i expect violence, but I agree with Frost and hope your wanderer has very good karma. From the sound of your character it seems like he could thank his way out of most situations but be able to put up a fight when its called for.

My guess is he isn't the only one who survived the crash...

good. good.

Continue.

No First For You! Honestly, why does everyone want to be first? Also, YOU FOALS, CMC...

This is really good I like this fic a lot this is so awesome

*continues reading*

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  Not as I had planned...

Great chapter here's hoping that the abomination's dont make it to ponyvill or anywhere else

Not an abomination! Ya gods what happens if they get to ponyville? Somepony must stop them! Oh yeah, the wanderer... My bad, he has this under control...right?

awesome story!

Your an abomination!

No not really, good chapter. And I vote that the wanderer/courier's name is Toasty. Just, Toasty.

About 6K words in 2 days LIKE A BAWS!

Time to kick some ass!! This is good!

Very good so far I like it overall

I am very much enjoying this

Cant wait till The Wanderer gets to see the natives if he thinks that sentient mayo would be weird then i can only imagine his reaction to sentient equines

I actually have been wanting to read a Fallout/MLP crossover done this way. On account that I'm too lazy to write one myself.

Anyway, this is terrific.

Improvement list: Write faster, without reducing quality. (38/0 is very impressive, Young Padawan)

wanderer seems built like my character max everything unique gear and waltz through the wasteland like the god of war, i can see him helping ponyville deal with the aliens and abominations but i'm worried that after all things calm down he just wont be able to fit in too much fighting for too long has to get to a guy. but hey 6 very special ponies might be able to teach him what friendship can be and give him a home so he doesn't have to wander any longer.and a piboy makes it all complete!

Well, I'm not sure how I feel about this. On one hand, I'm impressed with the writing and the fact that you're using both the add-ons for fallout 3 and some references to New Vegas (the latter of which I have yet to play, unfortunately), and on the other hand, I'm slightly jealous as I was not the only one with the idea to write a Fallout/MLP HiE crossover fic, and that this one may turn out better than mine, if it hasn't already.

That aside, this is really good. I'll look forward to more as I work on my own.

You're doing quite well in my opinion. The story's proceeding at a good pace, instead of rushing into things, and you clearly put a lot of effort into it. I can't wait to see more.

On another note, I'd like to give you a word of warning. I've seen it done too many times before, and I don't want to see it done now. You need to remember that regardless of how powerful The Wanderer is he can't instantly annihilate all threats around him, nor are all the ponies necessarily weaker than him. You haven't really made this mistake yet, but I felt the need to give you this advice just to be safe. You're already doing good by ruining his kickass armor and seperating him from his equipment, and I realize those things will be fixed in time. Just, remember to keep The Wanderer in check.

That all said, I'm really enjoying this story.

"...and they were after him."

Somehow, music you'd find in a cheesy action movie started playing in my head.

Well, this is... amazing. Holy shit. The humor, the pacing, the way the character's feel, it's just...

Wow.

ME GUSTA.  Next Chapter!

Freaking brilliant! Ah, I can't wait to see what happens

Awesome

Nice story so far, i am definetly looking forward to the next chapter now. I do love a good first contact situation.

Flippen sweet

>>332673332673  Dang you beat me to saying it /)  Also Explodium That was fricken awesome great job im looking forward to more keep it up ^^, And i support the romance tag Twilight's going to go wide eyed trying to look over his tec

He does deserve some lovin', but if you do pair him with somepony... Just make him a pony then.

It's... weird for a human to be paired with a pony. Just saying.

Just saying.

I don't mind a romance tag. Since you saying there would only be affection, and not clop, it would be more apt to say its just like he has a really bad-ass pet.

And, uh... What do you need from a prereader? Because if its just reading over and finding mistakes you may have missed I may be able to do it. Just, shoot me a PM if you need me too!

If you want I can preread

This is great! Was hopping he would be out of the ship and run into the Mane 6 by now though.

I don't really object to the romance tag. Go for it.

D'awwwwww.  That scene with the Wanderer and Applebloom was WAY too cute.  I can't wait for him to meet the others.  Great chapter!

I'm fine with shipping human/pony. But don't listen to Urdreth! Don't turn him into a pony! Very good chapter. Looking forward to more interaction between the wanderer and the ponies.

>>333149333149 I agree with you.

Please no ponification!

>>333230333230

*brohoof*

>>333256333256 brohoof

To be honest, I'm surprised Applebloom didn't notice more of resemblance between the Wanderer and the abominations. Then again, she is a child. Regardless, this first meeting was handled well. Though, I imagine it'll be awkward between him and other ponies when they seem him carrying Applebloom.

BENDY STRAWS!!! nice doctor who reference... right?

>>333988333988 Actually I've never watched Doctor Who.

Are you disappoint?

Most writers I've seen (about three) who use two languages in one space who translate them tend to put arrows to show the words being translated. Example: "<“Don’t worry, little fella, I won’t hurt you…”>" This is just something I think would make it easier to read. Also, no objections to romance tag here. Just... it might make you look less weird to others if Wanderer tries to resist these feelings. But hay, I don't know. I don't have the vision or ideas you do. Do whatever. Imma watch ponies now. So far, you seem to update a little while before I can watch the newest episode on Youtube. I uh... feel the need to watch it in HD. Can't be helped.

Woah jeez, I'm pretty sure this is the longest Fimfic comment I've ever written... Sorry.

I must say, I approve, whole thing is very well written thus far.

Will we see teching out, teaching them pones how to SCIENCE later?

Romance?

Yah, I'd go for that, clop or not, like the sweetness either way.

If you're not decided, I vote Fluttershy, she seems like a match for a pure good wanderer, yours comes off as a pure mix strength and benevolence, think she'd like that.

I think she'd also be the one who'd ultimately find accepting the things his life's circumstance forced him to do easiest.

Second language barrier I've seen in as many fics today.

Objection, IDK in my opinion he seems too much like a badass for that... Like a Lone Wolf kinda dude.

I vote for going for the romance tag, as long as it's with either Twilight or Rainbow.

romance tag ftw.

also, i'm decent at prereading, i'd be willing to do it.

BRILLIANT!

Romance is good as long as it's not clop.

Good story, I'd be willing to preread for you.

Ummm...slight problem here...I think I just shat a ton of bricks...yup.This fiction made me shit a ton of bricks.What I'm trying to say is,

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Please continue this story it is incredibly entertaining!

i only understand the basics since i never bought the DLC.

And thus, something actually happens. I was about to give up on this one.

Romance tag would be.......interesting. Of the mane 6 most likely, for friendship and beyond would be Dash or AJ. All could work, with Pinkie being the "I don't know, but it could work somehow", but I don't want to spend a lot of time saying for the rest, unless it becomes important.

OH GOD YES

(Applejack because Twilight would care more about the technology than him, and Luna...well, im just not really into [mostly] fanon characters I guess :/ )

Amazing chapter, and the best part...besides of course the actual chapter, was that "Urplot" line.

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This made my day!  

please a  chapter soon even if it is short

When I saw this I squealed with excitement! Nice chapter!

Stay frosty!

~Hazard~

*Spotted*

Twilight: What?

*Ducks behind cover*

Twilight: Must have just been my imagination.

You, sir, just made my day! Right down to the letter, too... Reminds me of this.

EDIT: Also, Wandererxnobody. For now...

Urplot, Marecury, Saddleurn...

THESE PUNS ARE KILLING ME!

Oh, and for the whole pairing thing? Yeah, I'd say Twi' too.

Great chapter, looking forward to the next one!

one sided wanderer/pinkie

I would say no shipping to be honest.

Loving the story, keep up the good work.

Pairing: Twi or Luna

Heh, loving this story so far. And I definitely like how the first(second?) contact was done.

As for the whole choice thing

Wanderer x Luna : lets rock the boat a bit

LUNA! LUNA NOW!

Actually, given this chapter Rainbow seems a better match than Twilight.

14,000 words, you bastard. I love you! And now all that everypony/human has met, all the good sh*t happens! Can't wait for that.

Oh, and if I had to choose between any of those pairings, I'd have to go for either Applejack or Twilight. My reason for this is that any feelings Applejack has for Wanderer would make sense seeing as he saved and protected a member of her family.  And for Twilight, it's a bit obvious. He's filled with scientific knowledge! She'd probably see him as a knew project or something and then... stuff happens and they fall madly in love!(?)

So yeah. For me, either WandererXApplejack or WandererXTwilight

Wander x luna.

LUNA!!

Wanderer X Twilight,

But would prefer no shipping what so ever :3

I say it should be Twilight. But Applejack seems fine too.

And BTW you just made my day

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My vote is Wanderer x Twilight and/or Applejack.

But more like friendshipping, than actual shipping.

He has an INT score of 10 after all, and a science skill of 100, so they'll be like peas in a pod amiright? But he's already earned some brownie points with AJ for saving Applebloom, or when she eventually learns how he saved her. Plus it's been reiterated so many times in the story just how darned helpful he is to everyone he meets, but gets no thanks for the trouble. And he seems to be the easygoing type, so I'd imagine they would get on pretty well.

Oh... and you're a horrible person for stopping the chapter where you did. Damn you to hell!

all the way!

Cliffhanger lol!

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Hmm id say if it come to it Wanderer x Applejack would work the best also we know that Twilights going to be all over his armor and pipboy , Hmm also even with his pipboy im sure Fluttershy is going to obsess over his cuts ^^

I knew what you were doing.  I knew they were going to meet, things would go well, and then there would be a distant shriek.  I knew that and yet I still read it, still enjoyed it, and damn the cliffhanger!

Great story.  Looking forward to more.

As for a shipping vote, Luna will always be my favorite, so why not, Wanderer x Luna.

I vote Wanderer x Luna

Twi for the pairing

Wanderer x twilight

I choose WanderXLyra because she is all about the humans

THREESOME WITH LYRA BON BON AND THE WANDER

HELL YEAH!!!! I cracked up at "That one asshole" part. But as for who to ship, either Rainbow (I mean come on, the biggest badass in the Wasteland with the biggest badflank in Equestria? It just makes sense!) or Twi (after all, the Wanderer has 100 Science and 10 Intelligence, they would get along perfectly.)

*sees that this updated*

HOLY SHIT FUCK YES!!

As for the paring.......my vote........LUNA

Luna best pony

>>399773399773 I just talked to you on the Dovah files

Small site ey

>>399780399780

Small site

I vote for Wanderer: xLuna, or xApplejack ;p