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Ugly-Duckling123


I'm a girl living in Ashley, New Milton. Loved mlp ever since it started showing and got to learn about these fanfic in October 2013. (Also I have dyslexia, so if I make mistakes sorry)

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After a storm, Diamond Tiara's house is left without power. Being the friendly family that they the Apple's invite her to stay at the farm until her house is fixed.

Note : Same story, just been split up

Chapters (19)
Comments ( 30 )

Maybe I'm missing something. But unless you wanted to create a portmanteau of "rich" and "bitch" which I'll admit only works when written down, you might think of rewriting the title.

A little of spelling problems with cheerilee and soarin but pretty good so ill give you 9 pinkameanas: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy:

Before I decide wiether to or not to, do a sequel to this.... can you tell why or why not you like or dislike this story....

Oh and please give me some ideas for the next one....

I like the story but there are quite a few spelling errors. Still FlutterMac is my second fave shipping. Nice story!

This was a decent story.
Well done.

I loved this story because it was uneconomic It made me cry:fluttercry: it made me smile :pinkiesmile: it made me derp :derpytongue2: in the end it was one of the best sorty I had ever heard


Naxt story opening futtershy getting pregnet :twilightblush: a fuw sens later Appleseed dies or not Big Mac find out he is going to be a dad to not one but two but at the. Wedding of :yay::eeyup: fluttershy. Gose in to laber

Not bad but why does Macs ears keep turning pink? Shouldn't his cheeks be doing that? 4/5 yups
:eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup:
4025135 Hi

4060317 because guys don't blush.... :scootangel:

Pretty good story. And Diamond learned a pretty good lesson. like and fav.
:yay::heart::eeyup:

Ok I've got a second one going, but i'm stuck.... all I'm saying is

Mac's getting Shy something for their five year-versary
Apple Blooms got a broken leg
and i want something to happen to Honey... but i cant think of anything...

So can you help please.... :applecry:

You could do much better.

I think you mean to say "intrude" instead of intruded. Past tenses and all that. Love the new format of the story though.

So, everytime a storm knocks somepony rich or fancy in Ponyville, might be a sign of a new friendship coming up

But... don't horses usually eat more when their pregnant...?
Well, If Nutmeg was in with a stallion AJ should have suspected.
If Nutmeg was acting strange to AJ, it's not surprising, horses' temperaments often change when their pregnant

"Um... Can you teach me riding lessons?" Fluttershy asked blushing.

This should be some like 'Can you teach me how to ride?' or 'Could you give me riding lessons?'

Good ending. I did notice a few mistakes here and there, but overall it was good :ajsmug:
Also, :eeyup: + :fluttershyouch: = :heart:

6079554
Why are you censoring the word "pregnant"? There is no need.

8069430 I think back then that was for spoilers, but fairly obvious from the other parts of the comment I guess.

8069569
That's true.

7563284
You're welcome :twilightsmile:

My only thought on this chapter matches up with Scootaloo, sufffffferrr biiiiiiitch, at the approaching of Diamondbloom, I love this ship

Comment posted by BeastBrony deleted Jun 5th, 2020
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