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Locomotion


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A derailment at Ponyville Engine Sheds means that Locomotion has the day off, so he decides to spend it with Apple Bloom and Sweetie-Belle. While hanging out at Sugarcube Corner, the two fillies tell him the tale of how Fluttershy and Big Macintosh first met, and how the Cutie Mark Crusaders, having nearly ruined everything for the two ponies with the whole Hearts and Hooves day fiasco, tried to make amends for it all...

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So... 4 down votes and zero comments yet. I'm taking that people gave it down votes due to it being a FlutterMac?:ajbemused:

3851700 I should certainly hope not. If anything, it could be more down to the whole story not being up yet.

3853067 Well, there always seems to be a group of people who immediately attack FlutterMacs the minute they are published. So you'll see a FlutterMac in the new stories that has several down votes right away. It's like they are trying to stop people from reading them.

3853073 :rainbowdetermined2: Well, I'm not gonna let that bother me. That Fluttermac story is here to stay whether they like it or not!

3853089 Good on ya! That's how a true author should react! You got yourself a follower!

Another brilliant and cleaver story Locomotion :twilightsmile: keep up the good work

“Ah'm so sorry...if Ah'd only known that...Ah might've...”

“Not yo' fault,” said Big Macintosh solemnly

Well... actually... in this specific case, yes, it WAS her fault. :applecry:

4745190 I guess Big Macintosh was only saying that in a half-hearted effort to make Apple Bloom feel a little less ashamed of herself. Besides, she wasn't exactly to know that she'd potentially ruined his and Fluttershy's relationship, in fairness. :twilightblush:

3851700 How dare they?? Fluttermac Ship is Best Fluttership! :eeyup::heart::yay:

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I know, right? It's bad enough that the CMC's characterisations had suffered in that episode, but Big Mac paired up with a completely different pony to Fluttershy? And portrayed well out of character himself to boot? That's just wrong.

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Glad you liked it. It's really touching to see others show support for those two as a pairing.

The name of this story is the name of a episode of Ninjago

This sounds like it's not going to turn out as expected...exactly the way CMC plans should go.

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