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After all of Fluttershy's help to the Ponytones, Big Macintosh wants to find a way to thank her. So he takes her out for dinner, it's the least he can do, right?

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It's a nice story but it seems to fast forward a lot...

3979413 Truth be told, I was writing this with a deadline. When I have the time I'm gonna rewrite it and make it better. Pinkie Promise.

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A deadline you say? Well okay then I'll fave it and wait then...

Aw... That's so sweet! I have always supported the idea that Big Mac and Fluttershy are childhood sweethearts! :yay::heart::eeyup:

This story could use a little more past tense. For example, I've edited this for you:

Big Mac smiled after her and after a few minutes, she had actually left. The moment she was out of sight, Applejack was galloping towards Big Mac, yelling his name. Big Mac halted in his tracks and gulped when he saw his sister's expression.
"Just what in tarnation do ya think you're doin'?" she inquired, staring him down despite being shorter than him.
"Well, I'm thinkin' that I'm gonna have to find a nice suit for when I take Fluttershy out for dinner tomorrow night." said Big Mac, trying not to tremble under his sister's gaze.

Meanwhile, this is a cute aftermath of "Filli Vanilli!" :twilightsmile:

3978398 I take it you're a member of the FlutterMac fan club. :raritywink:

4212632 Come on Darth, you know me. Yeah I'm a fan of it. I have some pairings that agree with people, and some that do not. It is a really cute couple.

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