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Big Mac is a simple farm pony who wants nothing but to work and care for his family. But things change when Cheerilee wants to get back together with him and Fluttershy confesses her feelings for him on the exact same day.
Now Big Mac is stuck in the middle and Applejack has to put up with all the craziness (as usual).
A collaboration between myself and Joy Stick
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My money is on Cheerilee.
Poor Mac... you know this is the kind of story that a curve ball would be used in regards to the romance.
I look forward to more- rarely do I see a good triangle comedy. And the setup was well executed, though a bit rushed.
I do however- have one concern. Have you guys counted how many comas there are in some of these? Not that they not placed correctly, but some of these sentences after you read them are a mouthful. I counted eight comas in one long sentence. This was the paragraph where Fluttershy explained why she wanted a speacial some pony.
If you could break those up into seperate sentences, you can also add a bit more into each point.
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Commas! Gosh darn Commas!
Fixing it.
huehuehuehueh
Not bad, honestly not bad at all, though Big Mac and Flutter's seem really OOC for some reason. A grown stallion does not need to be reading a mare's ditry (spelled that wrong) even if it is his sister's. You done pretty cool so far, I'll be waiting for more, my money is on Fluttershy
Im rooting for Mac to get it on with Fluttershy.
Pretty good so far, You should try to do more descriptions and longer conversations between charters including the charters thoughts to make the story longer. I'v noticed that the stories with longer chapters and more descriptions are the ones with the highest ratings and views.
A very nice premise, I will follow this one. Not too many grammar or spelling issues, but I have to agree that this chapter is very rushed. You could definitely spend a lot more time building up their feelings before jumping into the wackiness.
Also, why exactly did Big Mac and Cheerilee break up? I didn't understand that part. It might have been better just to have Cheerilee remember the time her students tried to hook her up and think "hey maybe they were onto something!"
Even with jokes, this is still a shipping story, all the usual rules apply. Just with almost everypony being dumber or crazier than normal, for the laughs.
I like it so far :D can't wait for part two
Huehuehue
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Really good chapter, I'm liking the build up so far,
i'm still rooting for Fluttershy.
Oh gods, I lost it when Granny Smith said those words, really good chapter, a few errors but nothing major, very much enjoy this story, poor Fluttershy, seems like she could use a drink and a smoke right now
Ohhhh...I'm one for Rarimac and Rainbow Tosh
Impressive
Heartaches by number, 1 2 3
It's as easy to learn as your A B C...
Oohhh I'm for CheeriMac
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2523355 MacDash
2527919 Either or works for me, long as Mac is not with Twilight he's free to be with anyone he wishes in my eyes
2528138 Why no TwiMac love
?
2528144 Just does not work and a famer and very smart mare, kind of bucked up to think of such, I personally am just not a fan
Though I have yet to see Big Mac and Pinkie Pie shipping.
2528174 Not that much either. I'm more of a FlutterMac or MacDash fan myself, though, I've read about two TwiMac ship fics.
I like almost any M/F ships, excluding incest fics; and two random others.
2528187 I'm a really big fan of both pairings myself though in all honestly it'd everyone's option on what they like and dislike, I shall NEVER read a Spike/Rarity story, period but as said before that's MY option, you know? I would read any romantic pairing save Twilight/Celestia, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Big Macintosh and of course Spike/Rarity.
So besides five pairings I'm very open minded and agreeable with many pairings and I read some odd pairings that some people very much make work
2528557 Crack Ships FTW
Big Mac is a player
Go mac go
My money still is on CheeriMac. So I'm expecting Flutters and Cheers to duke it out before this is over, and for some reason Mac ending up with neither one of them
You just haaaaaaaaddddd to fucking ask that question didn't you Mac?
2543117 He gonna get assaulted
2543994 With heavy emphasis on the "ass" segment......
Mac I'm sorry there is no try, there is only do.....and fuck up royal and you my friend have fucked up royal......
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What are you talking about?
2544087 He walked into a pitfall he created. He was hoping to get a way from flings like that. It's case of "I keep trying to get out, but they keep pulling me back in!"
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He's always getting himself into flings like this.
He wants to get away from that and have a stable relationship, but he just can't bring himself to turn down a mare because he doesn't want to see them sad.
Now he's having a fling with Cheerilee.
2544197 So buy them a coffee or something Mac! I love the guy but regarding his thought process, I'm gonna have to quote Foghorn Leghorn on this one....:
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Unfortunately, most of the mares he meet don't want coffee.
That sounds like something Applejack would say.
Epona and Concordia... Mac is in deep doodoo.
Dis gon be good
Time for another shipping war because shit just got real.
IT IS ON!!!! CHEERLIE IS GOING DOWN!!!
Being it BITCH!!!! Sorry, I'm very pumped now
Get your STALLION, FLUTTER'S
Cheer's seems like a btich though and Flutter's could use a bit more of a jealous edge but loved it all the same
This is gonna get interesting
What an epic chapter. The conclusion shall be amazing. Wonder who will win.
For some reason, I think neither....
Dammit Mac, the buck is wrong with your libido?
(LOL Lyra isn't completely
for Bon Bon)
I REALLY cannot wait to see what happens next.
My reaction to the end 24.media.tumblr.com/bc44db728fb24463ddd3e4f11b9e434b/tumblr_miwcfiETJt1rmgso1o1_250.gif
2561814 You are kinda correct
Why am I now thinking
?
OH GODS!!!!! A war is going to break out now
Poor Lyra, shit, that male is a PIMP!!!
Hmmm...wonder what the deal is with Pinkie, though Fluttershy must be SO HEART BROKEN
Shit....this is so depressing, but it happens, amazing job here
Wow. You write big mac like he's a gigantic asshole. Don't like the character?
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I DO like Big Mac.
He's not an asshole...he's just really, really flawed.
Emotional response:
Yes there were feels but why is Fluttershy settling for less! Mac feels like a worthless manwhore and she does nothing to tell him otherwise!? What's the matter with her!?!?!
Objective response:
I'm interested to see who Fluttershy finds and if he can really give her the same feels that Mac did. And I wonder if Mac will go spiraling into depression after this.
See you in a week for all the answers! I hope.
So Pinkie is Mac's dream mare huh?
STOP IT MAN! STOP ASKING THAT FUCKING QUESTION!
Nothing good comes of it and you keep asking the same damn question! Your supposed to say "Huh. Well that sucks. Good luck with that." And be on your merry fucking way! The word 'no' is obviously not part of your vocabulary. God damn........
Ok so not CheeriMac... PinkieMac?
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She wants to make Big Mac happy.
And she is not settling for less...if Mac doesn't want her, then she'll respect his decision and fulfill his wish for her.
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Yes she is...only Mac doesn't know that yet.
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You heard what Applejack said...when it comes to mares; he's an extreme doormat.
He's been taught growing up to never say "That sucks" and then move on his marry way. He's been taught to always ask ponies if there's anyway he could help them.
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There was never going to be CheeriMac.
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Hard to tell in the beginning, and it's a good thing I didn't add this to the CheeriMac group
2583185 Oh, never mind. I see where this one's going...