I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.
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After some convicing from his sister Applejack and Granny, Smith Big Macintosh decides to take a day off from working in the fields.
He goes to Sugarcube Corner where he unintentionally attracts the attention of a certain pink pony, and Applejack finds out.
Now the pink party pony must find a way to prove her affections for Ponyvillie's mare magnet, who isn't even aware of a crush.
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Pretty good
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this is great! wish there were more, though.
One nitpick... I really can't believe that Big Mac wouldn't have heard of Sugarcube Corner before or that he would never had met Pinkie, Ponyville isn't a large town to begin with and Big Mac isn't a newcomer to town. Other than that... you got a foundation of a shipfic, for a ship that needs some more fics done for it.
In the Name of Her Serene Majesty Celestia Everfree,
Celestia's Paladin: For Honor and Duty, For the Sun and Moon
I've noticed a pick up in Pinkintosh shipping and I'm all for it. Fluttermac and Twimac have been done to death, plus the whole opposites attract thing.
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I wouldn't say that TwiMac as been done to death, since it is very much overshadowed by FlutterMac. But seeing one of the other parings done well is always enjoyable.
PinkiMac. Its true.
Complete? This looks more like a start.
One day, in the quaint town of 'Ponyvillie'.
The end.
A lot of unneeded text takes from the story, very uneventful too.
YOU WILL ADD MOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!
not bad, i wish this wasn't complete and you could make another chapter though.
well done
Wait...that's it?
It's good. Real good. But it's complete already!?
Gotta admit, kinda boring. Nothing really happened and nothing was resolved. It really feels like a start to a story than a stand-alone. Without Big Mac finding out about Pinkie's crush there's no conflict. But the writing's coherent and the idea is not an out-of-left-field kind of plot, so it's good there.
Hahahaha Big Mac a fillies colt epicness so BRING ON SOME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
I agree with the some moments. MOAR
I admit that I liked the sheer simplicity of this story. While it's a stretch to say that Big Mac never went to Sugar Cube Corner or met Pinkie Pie, this is not my story and it makes yours what it is. It felt cute, not overdone, and makes the readers want more because of how abruptly it comes to an end...I like it.
Hello everyone I have gone back and revised some things in the story and I am now waiting for comments on how to expand this story, if you have any ideas please let me know, there are no wrong answers.
Hey everyone here's part 2 of the revised edition of the story for your viewing pleasure.
sweet
1037750 alright message me if you need any help
I like how this sounds so far keep it up
Well here it is, for your viewing pleasure I present to you "Big Macintosh's Day Off Part 3"
Thank you all for sending in your ideas even if I didn't get as many as I would have liked, I hope this was worth the wait.
Lastly see if you can spot the reference I slipped into this part, I hinted at in my one of my earlier blogs.
"A peck on the check"?
1448929 Will fix that, thanks for pointing it out.
I loved this fic.
The end was a little too....well...sudden.
But I really enjoyed it.
1756666 Did you spot the reference?
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Reference? What reference?
1756970 Never mind I thought I made it obvious.
Quick little note here, for all of you who saw "Sleepless in Ponyvillie" you will know that Scootaloo lost her scooter in that episode.
Since she has it in this fanfic just in case you might be wondering this fic takes place BEFORE the events of that episode.
The scooter itself is not enough to warrant an alternative universe tag.
There are quite a few spelling errors ("Ponyvillie", "evantually" to name a few) and some missing words ("and she had also taken to raising Apple Bloom [who] was only a baby at the time")
What do you think?
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This is a cute fic and I'd love to read it but the spelling errors are too difficult to get past. Please find an editor or even a good spellcheck program and fix it up.
More please.
Cons: Punctuation problems, few minor spelling errors, you caught a case of the "lavender unicorn syndrome" for a second, couple of run on sentences
Pros: Made me feel as if I was watching an episode in my head, which means I can visualize your story; Character personalities were pretty good (although rainbow dash's seemed more harsh than usual to me. Could be somewhat biased), settings were described well, story structures nice, very adorable story!
Off to "Like Cousins"
Well, it looks like PinkieMac just got a shot in the arm thanks to "Pinkie Apple Pie". I suppose I called it with this. Even the writers think PinkieMac could work. And no, this ship is not incest. Pinkie Pie isn't related by blood.
4061268 I never knew such a story existed when I wrote this. I swear it.
OMG You Misspelled sugar cube so comically Suga rcube oh and then when AJ said it towards the end sugar ube! i know it wasn't intentional but still it was awsome.
you are no good at writing dialogue for Pinkie! where's the emotion, the irrational concerns, the tenancy to make up words on a whim!?!
PS.
the okie dokie lokie felt a bit forced
the dialogue before the announcement of Pinkie's love seemed to force all the ponies to speak just for the sake of it. the suspension of disbelief from twilight gave me a suspension of disbelief given her personality. The whole your love has inspired me to find my true love thing was so unnecessary, i understand what you were going for with that but in the end it holds no weight because there was no established conflict in twilight at the time. twilight's speech pattern was completely off during that love inspiration line oh when pinkie said "i'm so glad to hear that"; who responds to heartfelt admiration like that?