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Ugly-Duckling123


I'm a girl living in Ashley, New Milton. Loved mlp ever since it started showing and got to learn about these fanfic in October 2013. (Also I have dyslexia, so if I make mistakes sorry)

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After betting each other they have the tougher job, Rainbow and Twilight spend a week doing the others (Twi on weather, Rainbow working the library)

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This actually sounds more like an episode idea.

Comment posted by Ugly-Duckling123 deleted Feb 1st, 2014

3881371 Well, as Pinkie says, they should repeat what it was like in 'Magical Mystery Cure'

Thank you to every-pony who favors this story :pinkiehappy: :yay:

Pretty good story

3881371 Exactly what I was thinking haha

It was a great story keep up the good work.:twilightsmile:

While the story is interesting there are quite a few spelling errors and even some missing words. Besides that, it's Thunderlane, not Thunder-Lane.

Also, I am a bit unsure who you mean beside Time Turner and Flitter.

On one hoof you spelled Cloud Chaser as if it would be the black pegasus stallions name, while on the other hoof you mention Flitter, sister of the greyish-blue pegasus mare Cloudchaser.

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