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in fics and a episode I think the ponies ate eggs
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that's fine, my story is not for everypony, and I appreciate your honesty
3501012 Could be more slowepaced indeed, but it is a good story. Although I wonder if it is selfinsert? The personality of the main character seems complex, and it also seems like some dreams or wishes one may have... I'm overthinking it, good story, try making a slower paced reboot or something like that to bring out its full potential.
Oh boy, here we go...
"their", not "there".
"quite", not "quiet".
Wait wait wait wait,Your saying that the person who has the skill and instinct to absolutly wreck the shit of the creature quite literally known as a Man-eater......Is a Vegetarian............God DAMNIT......You do realise that if you dont have access to enough protein and other such nutrients,Your gonna be healing from injuries pretty bloody slow,Frankly,He can kick a manticores arse,He'd have no issue just hunting,And honestly,Seeing as how he's a HiE protag and is thus bound to get hurt often,He might very well need the extra bit of healing factor that a proper diet can entail
3668347 That's why I eat MUCH rice. Pure protein (or nearly pure) also rice is very tasty
M'kay. I'm honestly surprised that the dude didn't have a vagina. He's such a fucking wimp!
I'm not a fan of instant romance but this story is still pretty good,and everyone who's whining about how weak the human protagonist is needs to realise that humans are a an extreamly weak species not the domenet powerhouses to many make believe we are.In fact out of our
artificial socity we are the weakest most incable creatures in exsistence,without our technology beating something like a mantacore is shear
dumb luck even with weapons.
I agree that the romance developed rapidly, but this is not a bad fic. Frankly my only problem is you took the easy way out with the omnivore bit. Honestly that is normally the biggest problem i have HIE fics, they either completly ignore the social differences an omnivore would have in a herbivore society, or they accept it too readily. I am not asking they shun him, but i would like there to be one where everyone has to adapt to his meat eating. Otherwise, i think that too many HIE fics do the overly freaking out thing. I mean, would any of YOU freak out if you woke up in equestria? As for this being self-insert, if it is, so what? Why not make it self-insert?
uhm, how does one taste with his or hers throat?
4105034 Oh my, only woman know that taste.
4829091 or gay men
5396746 Or a 14 year old that had a terribly aimed clopping shot.
Enough said
ok i cant take any more. Im sorry, i tried, this seems like a really good story but i cant fucking stand the main character. this is a dude that can obviously fight well since he has both a bo staff and sais yet he is such a fucking wimp. and the fact that this is literally the second day they met and he's already getting head. Yeah nope that doesn't fly with me especially since this is fluttershy we are talking about here even if this was love at first sight im pretty sure she wouldn't be doing this the second day.
i might seem like a bitch for having this opinion but i have the policy don't like don't read, and im sorry but i don't like.
Ok The only good thing about this is that it is a draft
From what i have read the proper part 1 is far better, so your improving
6130352 i have to agree, while the story is pretty good its FAR too rushed. relationships like that are fine but try to span them over maybe 20-30 chapters. that way the characters can get to know eachother. Oh and next time try to make 'clop' scenes optional. not all of us want to read stuff like that...
(Berleezy voive) Dammmmnnn 2 days in and he already getting head from Fluttershy Yo Chillllllll slow this train down Usain Bolt
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Not even 2 days about 26 hours I'd say
Humans cannot function at 100% capacity without many nutrients commonly found in meats. To name a few are vitamin b12, creatine, carnosine, vitamin d3, DHA, heme iron (iron found only in meat, much more efficiently absorbed than plant based iron by an exponential amount), and taurine. All these are just a few nutrients that unless such dietary supplement medications exist in Equestria, will cause deficiencies and equate to reduced bodily function and eventual sickness.
Just a pet peeve of mine where people believe that being omnivores means we can subsist on either plant or animal products, rather than the truth of which we need both in order for our bodies to function at their peak, though I will admit we don't need much meat compared to plants.