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Just a few things that I feel like I should clear up. First, the reason that I gave Spike a harem was because I needed somepony else to have a herd besides me, and just because he has a herd doesn't mean that they are doing intimate things like I'm doing with my herd. In our world, some people are in relationships such as that, and they are only 12-14, but that doesn't mean that they are having sex, it just means that they are going out with each other. The most intimate thing that I imagine them doing is just giving each other light kisses or pecks on the cheek, not full blown intercourse.
Yes, I do admit that I did rush this story, and in hindsight, I should have made things a little bit (or a lot) slower then they were, but as my first, I am still happy with the results (positive like/dislike). as for the adventure tag, I have been working on that for a while, I just wanted to set the scene for it to appear. I promise that it will first show itself after the Heart's Warming Eve special, and I promise you, shit will be blowing up. With that said, I am debating if I should put in a 'slice of life' tag in it as well, since it does take a while for the adventure to begin.
All in all, I'm not complaining that you don't like my story. upset, a little, but that won't make me stop from finishing this story. As long as one person is enjoying my story, then I will continue to write, and even though that you didn't like this one, it's people like you that help me to create a better story for the next time I write.
So, with all of that said, I'm sorry that the story wasn't to your liking, but at the same time, I'm not going to make drastic changes due to the comments of one person, no matter how honest they are (That doesn't mean that I don't listen, for I will take the advice for the next time I write). However, if you do continue to read my story, and you do find that spark that you were looking for, then that will make me one happy writer. At the same time, I can't force someone to like the things that I write. Overall, thank you for taking the time out of your life to try out my story, even if you didn't like it.
Drakalian
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I do…and then I forgot. I'll figure something out
3668798 you got a bolter?
3668867
Fine, you can borrow mine (hands out dragon shaped bolter) JUST DON'T DAMAGE IT!
3668998 dose getting it soaked in blood count?
3669023
As long as you clean it afterwards
Also, you might want to save it until chapter 23. Just saying.
3669312 dude I read it and well did you see my comment?
3675009
(pops out of partially destroyed bunker) Sorry, what were you trying to say? I hid as soon as I saw the massive explosion
3675668 Hey Drak I'm still traped in here and could swear that you said the flopping bunker would hold up!
3815224 oh, did I cause the explosion? I do that sometimes.
Here! Have another! BWAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!!
KRAKABOOOOOMMM!!!!
So when is he going to die? He's had WAY too much secks, just saiyan.
http://i.imgur.com/TwlVP5Q.jpg
Blueblood got Derpy fired...
Hey blueblood do you want to die a horrible horrible painful death?
BLUEBLOOD shall have every bone in his body shattered for getting ditzy fired
Me: We should be calling him Blue now.
You: Why?
Me: Cause I'm gonna cut off his Balls.