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I do have to agree, I did rush this story, but for my first time, I am still quiet proud of it. Also, this is a self insert, the only difference in this is the name, and I hope that all you guys will still enjoy it even if it is a self insert.
*slow clap*
I feel that have to ask where is Trixie, I'm disappointed by the surprising lack of her up to this point. She is the first pony he meets and you put her on the bus after only two or three chapters and Drak has yet to wonder where she ran off to . I hope you bring her back soon she was one of the thing that attracted me to the story. Despite my compliant I really like the story, it's not the best but there is good effort put into writing this. I would to see where you go with Drak lost memories and his fighting skills.
Ahem.Falcon PAWNCH!
3668746 Just when I reread this chapter and think of it, I find this comment... Probs to you, you got that faster than me.
Ok I gonna have to point this out apparently,Pony is their race while Earth pony,Pegasus,and Unicorn are tribes not races.
3804109 WRONG your just saying black people are white
Oh, now I see what you're doing wrong. You're using "thy" as "the", even though it means "you".
Whelp, ima stick to my guns and say your Elizabethan English sucks.
3804109 pony is species as Pegasus ect. Are race. Like humans and black or white.