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Moar. Now. Right now.
3909376
I'm sorry to say, but if you don't like the story still after reading that much, then I suggest reading something else. Once again, I'm sorry.
3914338
I have to agree with you, and I plan on fixing it later when I'm able to.
3910461
Meh, no hard feelings. Still, deleting comments without even trying to refute any of the points? Can you honestly look at some of the things happening to the main character (I've just completely lost count of all the mares in his herd) and say that this story is able to restrain itself? It feels like any female in this story might as well be a trophy for the main character, because that's pretty much all they amount to right now.
It'd be a nice change to see him interact with another character without the conversation following an incredibly predictable script. Not only that, but some of what he's done has introduced some plot holes right now. For example, he's with Luna and Celestia, the most powerful magic users in Equestria as well as the rulers. So, where are they right now? Now, I get the problem with this; if you added them in, then this plot just wouldn't have happened (because either princess would be more than enough to deal with this). The problem is that you can't just ignore them at places where having them would make sense. Otherwise it ruins SoD. Basically, the only way to avoid that problem is to give an incredibly good reason as to why they couldn't be there to help, and so far I haven't noticed one.
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I do listen to your comments, and I do agree with mot of the things that you say. I just deleted your earlier comments because...well, they were all pure negative. I don't mean to say that they weren't good, I just mean that after a few of them they kind of got under my skin a bit. I know it's a silly thing to say, especially when I should have a thick skin for this stuff if I'm going to write, I should expect some negative feedback, but still...I know, not the best excuse, or even a good one. Anyways, as my first story, I'm still happy with how the majority turned out...even with the few (or many, in a few people's cases) holes in my story. So, with that said, and sorry for deleting your previous comments, and I'll keep this one on. With that said, thanks for taking your time to read my story, even if it wasn't to your satisfaction.
Drakalian
I like the story an can't wait for more chapaters.