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A three-times, martial arts, master is now the guardian of Dinky Doo!
Only badassery could possibly ensue!
Reminded me of
, but in a wrong way
Also, ponies are not supposed to have hymens, hymens don't go pop and I've read women say that cervix penetration is painful as fuck.
Edit: after some info from a certain individual on the channel I retract the cervix part, looks like it works that way for ponies, along with flared stallionhoods.
Pinkie uses the 4th wall!!!
No one can tell when one uses the 4th wall, but Pinkie LIVES it.
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How could you have just realised that?
Welp, that's as far as I can make myself read.
My previous criticisms stand and some issues seem to become, if anything, more pronounced as he story progresses. Incessant blushing, constant stuttering, crying for almost anything even remotely upsetting and fluctuating grammar. Add to that Drak being as dense as lead when it comes to sexual innuendo, repetitive situations and increasingly unnatural interactions between the characters.
Maybe I have been spoiled by some of the stellar stories to be found on fimfiction, but the point where it becomes a chore to read is the point at which I stop.
Best of luck with your future writing endeavors, practice makes perfect.
where are you blueballs?
Good, goooooood........