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OMG!!
Hot dog!
That was hot, no better way to say that!
ok, enough dilly-dally that was HOT is the best way i can simulate the "exploration" part
Ignoring the clop component (not easy to do, btw, and that is in no way a complaint) I adore this chapter, especially the end of it, when twilight finally comes to the realization that she's started down a path that has consequences she hasn't even dreamed of. That last line always gets me
"She’s jabbing at something in the pan like it needs to die, quickly."
"Twilight stares at the…food."
"I’m actually kind of amazed. It’s like some kind of epic tragedy on a plate."
can hardly wait to read the rest tomorrow. Nigh fellow Bronies.
I was sent here by a Youtube comment. Im glad I came.
P.S. That wasn't meant to be dirty.
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why the sudden change in writing format?
I GOT A BONER
"She can feel her friends chest rising against her back." -
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Nice twist at the end, I love it!
So I'm just reading along, minding my business while listening to my iPod on shuffle and right here ""Later. Look." Dash gestures up with her hooves." this song comes on
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OJjz_NKIBkE
making the whole scene even better. I highly suggest reading that part with this music playing.
Ah yeah, was just reminded this has the semi-despised wing/horngasms in it xP Ah well, it's just a small notch compared to most other stories as earth ponies actually do get "something" at least. And again, was reminded on that technically most every "god" should be "goddess", but that's nitpicking. Can say it's sadly dropped a bit in enjoyment the second time around, mostly since I've managed to refine and find out what exactly I like in clopfics, this one is still quite a few grades above most mind you. I've just got a desire for ones I can relate to better preference and experience/description wise heh
Lets see, the revision of the scene was rather good, Dash's insecurity felt a tad bit odd, but was still decent. If I recall, you made her a bit more aggressive this time around hehe. She seemed to last shorter/wanted less though then I recalled... but it's sorta made up for in the morning, so that's also cakes hehe. Ah, was reminded of the "...crap" moment in the mirror, was as amusing as before
I like that Rainbow Dash cares what her friends think of her, even in this context. That's a very sweet moment and spot-on characterization on both sides.
"Welcome to Rainbow Dash's Pimp Palace! Come on in," Dash says, beckoning her inside.
I laughed so hard - mostly because I imagined it with a voice crack!
great work; keep it up. can't wait to finish this.
Oh my gosh. Favorite chapter so far, by far. I'm a sucker for Dashie, in all of her cloppie goodness. I'll be looking forward to reading how Twilight gets herself out of this mess.
You don't sound like you've moved on.
Stop encouraging her, Dash. She's bad enough about this on her own.
How did that time limit get popularized, anyway? Three days is the canonical constraint on the wings spell, not the cloudwalking spell. You'd think somebody would have called whoever started this on that misconception.
Apparently this fandom needs more detail Nazis.
Well, when you put it like that, not in a million years.
I remember that story . . . it was funny, but it should have been shorter, I think.
No. She's just choosing to claim "best at cooking badly" rather than "best at cooking well."
Possibly because she doesn't think any amount of charisma could sell her claiming to be a good cook.
Do you ever stop bragging about how awesome your life is? Celestia, I don't know how anypony takes it!
Always.
What, did you think Luna has to resort to her imagination when she chooses to clop?
Like you wish it wasn't just one night?
Well, sucks to be you. Twi's breaking all the hearts now.
I'm pretty sure it has literally been over a year, at least, since I last thought of this video. And now the streak is broken, so suddenly.
Sometimes, it is really hard to teach you lessons subtly.
Did Tia never teach you about not overestimating your understanding of a subject? I mean, I wasn't under the illusion that you were perfect at it, but I was hoping you could do better than this. You wouldn't be at all ready if the the assignment were merely to learn about sex. And it wasn't.
You'd better hope Luna doesn't tell her sister what a terrible student you are.
Rarely does one see such a perfect example of "sophomoric."
Did you know my OTP is Rainbow Sparkle? Well, why would you? I only recently started admitting it to myself. But now you know, and so now of course you would expect that this chapter is my favorite so far. It would be a very logical assumption. It would also be wrong. I found this chapter to be merely average, as chapters of this story go. A Rainbow Sparkle chapter was supposed to mean that my aversion got the chapter off. But it didn't. I didn't even know it was possible for Rainbow Sparkle to not lower my standards. It's never happened before, so far as I could tell.
That is my complaint for the chapter.
Ooh, wow, that was intense, and I don't just mean the sex.
Okay, I haven't even finished the chapter or read the comments, so I may be rehashing old conversations, but I can't help myself...
Seriously, is there anyone anywhere who didn't see this coming?
*deafening silence*
S'what I thought. Nicely done on the reveal, though :)