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I like this one. :3
Erm, let's put it this way
I wonder what Spike'll say if he hears of this...
29277 words cannot describe the lols... At 4am. DAMN YOU FUNNY COMMENTS!!!
"The coils of mane fall around her face in a mess, and she whips her head side to side. "
I WHIP MY HAIR BACK AND FORTH I WHIP MY HAIR BACK AND FORTH.
39431
Your nick. Priceless
possibly the only clopfic i find is worth reading, balances innocence destroying sex scenes with a good storyline. well done.......i think
Fun between friends my @$$!
Why can I not stop reading this?
23614 :wheres my shotgun?
Going beautifully
My favourite chapter.
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WHYYYYYYY!
This shouldn't be so good to read...
RIP Twilight's innocence.
Yeah, I bet that bed feels "warm", you dirty mare you!
Awesome
Right, 4 parts in, and it's about as good as I recalled, personal taste and anatomy preference has changed a nudge, but still enjoyable. (in one of the chapters, it says "helping hand", might should be "hoof", might have been mentioned before though.)
Would have preferred the "anatomical law" on the genital color, but Rarity is really that weird grey zone, seeing how she'd have a white/grey package, making the technical flesh-colored inner part of the vagina "stick out" much more.
GODDAMN this is GOOD.
No, boner.
Stay down, boner.
Bad boner.
Heh. I like the varying definitions of sex- it's an irritating issue but a real one- and the part where Twilight has a Rarity mustache. xD
This story is very good.
39431 Oh Lawdy!
First time, and with too! Dayum, gurl, Twilight's got GAME <--- game face!
[Spoilers!!!!!!!!!!!][This comment contains spoilers. Do not read unless you have read the whole fanfic or don't care about spoilers and want to know who Twilight ends up with in the end]
This mini-relationship and the considerably longer (and by that I mean their entire lives ) relationship with Cheerilee are my favorites. Those two couples just....... Work.
Cheerilee
Curse them for not having a Cheerilee icon!
I'm going to take a shot in the dark here: Some outcome like this was always Luna's objective. Twilight is, after all, mortal; Luna is immortal. For an immortal, to love a mortal is an invitation to eventual pain. It would be far better for Twilight to find another mortal to love. If Twilight's infatuation can survive this 'experimentation', then Luna can see if she's worth the eventual and inevitable agony of separation. If not, then Luna has solved two problems with one little bit of misdirection.
She's as cunning as her sister, really!
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really? where that come from? its just a cute little mental picture.
Alright. You've convinced me. "Fave"
And Spike secretly recorded the whole thing...
Well, that certainly was sexy. Twilight seems to be a fast learner. I can't wait to see what other shenanigans ensue with other characters.
One of the best fan fics ive ever read. Cant stop reading!!
And was it really necessary to let Rarity have her way?
Also, I don't see how she expects you to stop flinching while having things applied to your face.
She probably did that on purpose. After all, while Dash may struggle with authenticity, Rarity left it behind so long ago that you can't even directly observe its absence. But a Mid-Atlantic accent is never natural, and the behavior of a proper lady is almost as universally merely affected (in both cases, particularly when one has parents like Rarity's). So Rarity can't not know what she is. She chose it.
See? Even Rarity agrees this whole exercise was stupid. She probably just insisted in an attempt to feel less jealous of how she requires makeup and you don't.
Has nopony ever explained to you how gilding the lily is a bad thing?
. . . it's you, Twilight. Or maybe Dash. Can you imagine her in makeup? I shudder just to think of it.
Well, in this case you might be right. Nudity being the norm certainly does not rule out sexy undressing, but normal undressing would not be sexy in general. There are clothes that cannot be taken off in anything but a sexy manner, of course, but most of those are not appropriate wear for a proper lady out on a date.
So you enjoyed it, then.
Sure, just go ahead and brag. Tact and not making others jealous are silly concepts.
(Don't mind him. He's just bitter because he's bad at masturbation, and he's in a bit of a snit since our argument about whether to read this story. He lost.)
Who's being facetious? Twi was just offering the strongest form of promise known to ponykind. Nopony breaks a Pinkie swear.
Though perhaps Rarity is uncomfortable with the idea of bringing in Pinkie as an enforcer, even if Pinkie never need know what the secret was, or possibly even that a swear was made until there was threat of it being broken. I mean, it's not clear whether she senses Pinkie swears being made, or only swears in danger of being violated.
How much you wanna bet Sweetie's going to be by tomorrow, and they're going to have to make something up to explain why Twi slept over?
There is a fair chance that I am going to be ending every comment with a complaint about being here. Because, while this is a fine scene, it is not my scene, and I just don't belong here. But I'm too stubborn to abandon a story if I've started reading it for a purpose. I will complete this story, even if it kills me, and I will probably do it whining every step of the way. Complaining to myself is not really very satisfying, you see, even if it is myself who is to blame.
>juice box
>I'm nervous and I'm not even going
sleeples, stahp, I can't, she's too perfect .-.
You know what I realized in reading this chapter? This is the first piece of erotic ponyfic where I have not skipped over the sex. It was incredibly rewarding and I'm starting to see why this story is so highly praised.
Oh god, this isn't going to backfire horribly AT ALL
or what manner of junk you will be getting (hint hint). innuendo hint hint.
lol everything went wrong
Yeah... you don't need to put it in your letter to Luna.
I mean, she could probably figure it out just by watching your dreams later.