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Awww.... That ending was so sweet.
Friendship is magic, but family runs deeper than that.
is Jesus
epic chapter!
It appears trolling runs in the royal families blood huh?
40888 Dammit now i can picture big mac being voiced by Morgan freeman
Reading for the third time because of the epicness. I mean two chapters in a clop fic without a sex scene? Genius.
Anyway I really liked Twilight's mental gymnastics when she was arguing with AJ. It was like Calm down Twi... Calm down...Calm... YOU BITCH WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE!!! Epic. You must write another story.
I noticed that a lot of chapters end with Twilight or some other pony falling asleep. is that incidence or is there a reason?
68783 Indeed
Subtle Halo reference with the chapter title?
Great chapter! I usually read only ones that comprise sex, but I started reading all ones recently and I really enjoyed this one. It's full of emotions. I had tears in my eyes at some moments.
Just reading this now, Not finished yet, but I find it funny that we now know that Twilight has a brother.
Dang Cannon destroying our fannon
Great story so far
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“I never had any little brothers or sisters.” Twilight says.
any little brothers or sisters.
little brothers or sisters
LITTLE
FANON REMAINS INTACT
GOOD DAY
*reads letter*,,,,,,,,
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FUCK YOU BITCH. YOU AIN'T WORTH IT.
We all know twilight is going to drop Luna. It is inevitable
It's interesting to note that Twilight is still canonically correct despite Shining Armor. She says she never had a little brother or sister. She never did.
I gotta say this was an emotionally heavy chapter, but man if it isn't my favorite so far
Also this chapter is perfect for two words: BIG MACINTOSH!
Me during everything leading up to Big Mac's talk
Me during/after Big Mac's talk
Seriously he was brilliant and perfect and this fic has actually made me look back at him as a character and make me want to kick the crap out of me for not seeing how epic he is, so thank you for that I couldn't stop grinning during his entire scene
This is the best chapter yet!
20 comments? That's it? I think this is a brilliant fan fiction!
Every time someone said "Crazy." All I could hear was Yami (From Yu-Gi-Oh! Abdridged) saying it in his voice. "That's crazy!"
858087 Oh great.... now I'm reading it like that... Funny though
859452 But Kev...... That's crazy! :{D
I see right through your soul, Luna...
I know this is your way of getting Twilight to forget her infactuation with you. Ain't right.
Also, been waiting for Twi to lash at Appey (Yes, I called her Appey).
Deal with it.
Love dis awesomeness.
= Official Worst Character in This Fic
I loved this chapter, up until the point where he came in. Applejack is the most sensible character in the story so far. I really hope Twilight gets what's coming to her.
78450 You say that like it's not the most awesome thing ever.
"So you're tellin' me that you two... and you two... AND you two?" I died again. Applejack manages to put Two and Two together to make 6. I believe the theme for this chapter was "That Awkward Moment When X" Think about it.
That awkward moment when:
>Rarity knows exactly where the love bites came from
>Braeburn shows up, a couple of days later, all broken up about it
>He defeats Twilight, in her own Dojo, with the power of literature, by reading the letter that she wrote, out loud
>Spike thinks she's being raped, busts through the door
>Applejack discovers tat she's forever bound to die alone, without gettin' any from anypony.
>Rainbow Dash is confirmed for stitches, (on account of bein' one of them Snitches!)
>In order for Twilight to enter a relationship with her first choice, she has to love somepony else, then break their heart. She's good at that.
>Rarity discovers her inner gayness, after all of her friends do. Applejack confirmed for future Cougar/sexual predator
898038 >Talking smack about the MAC
>has an ugly-ass Nicki Manaj icon
Yeah, your opinion matters to us other readers, alright.
601726 Canon. You don't seem to understand it. How's that for an interesting note?
1185080 Golden Snitches?
has an ugly-ass Nicki Manaj icon. that's Nicki Manaj?
My feels! He punched out all my feels!
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Don't be silly. Mac can't be voiced by Morgan Freeman.
He's too busy voicing Twilight Sparkle.
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Don't be silly. Mac can't be voiced by Morgan Freeman.
He's too busy voicing Twilight Sparkle.
Don't be silly. Mac can't be voiced by Morgan Freeman.
He's too busy voicing Twilight Sparkle.
Man when you deliver, you deliver the hardest, most uncomfortable, brutal, most well written stories on this site.
These chapters are tough but they are worth it
I love what you did with Big Mac in this story! Everyone needs a friend that's calm, cool, collected, and wise. And, of course, me being the guy I am, I loved that part all the better! Awesome job man. If I wasn't hooked before, I definitely am now.
Rarity isn't a fillyfooler, she just so happens to have two friends with benefits that just so happen to be mares.
Luna... what the buck.
Are you trying to destroy Twilight? Honestly...
this whole chapter is a clusterfuck
This is perhaps one of the GREATEST chapters of MLP fanfiction on this site. Fantastic read good sir.
AAAHH!! isee wat u doin luna!! u gon get twilight in a serious relationship and shell fall in love and wont be interested in u!!!!!!!
LOL! Big Mac laughing off all that drama and tension!
2068449 Why not both? I mean RD and AJ have the same VA as does Pinkie and Flutters. Plus, I can imagine Morgan Freeman saying both "Dear Princess Celestia..." and "Eeyup".
What?! No mule aside joke? I am dissapoint!
I SAID HUG, MOTHERBUCKERS! YOU WILL FEEL THE POWER OF FRIENDSHIP!
Man, with all this drama and chaos, you'd think Discord would be out and drawn to them like moths to a flame!
I must say, this chapter was good, but not the best. In fact, Twilight is a total slut and nuttjob as she doesn't listen to Applejack. Applejack is 101% right at all costs. Luna is a dirt in a hole and doesn't truly love Twilight. Or at least, that's what it seems. That damn princess is nothing special, I hate her and that fudging Twilight Sparkle.
The ending was very touching though. I nearly cried because family means so much to me, friends are in the center. Family comes before friends.
And now for the question that nobody is asking and may have been answered but I missed it...
Did Pinkie really go after Braeburn (and did she succeed) or was that here way of trying to help FLuttershy with Big Mac (essentially trying to be Flutters wingmare)?
Wow, it's always the quiet ones, isn't it? I'm rather astounded by the wisdom that Big Mac showed in this chapter. The fights in this chapter were awesome as well.
And I gather nopony's been rude enough to tell you that suddenly taking up casual wear is not very subtle? I bet Dashie would, if she weren't the reason for your sudden love of clothing. Dashie's got no tact.
You're not going to find a good idea that gets you out of this conversation, but you'll find plenty worse than teleporting away. Are you sure you don't want to? I mean, you know all about love now, right? Talking to Braeburn won't be educational, and what else was he ever good for?
Well, you learned to be a huge bitch. I forget, was that the goal?
You're Tia's star student; you wouldn't have screwed up an assignment from any princess. So that must have been the goal.
Twilight . . . you need to stop. Just everything. Everything you've been doing. I've tried to be nice. Even once I gave up on saying nothing, I've been pulling my punches. Because you're best pony, and that should buy you some slack, right? And surely you were going to straighten up and fly right on your own. You just needed a little time to adjust to your new wings (metaphorically speaking, for the moment).
But you didn't. I don't like what you've become, and I'm losing faith that you can correct your own course. I'm worried I'm going to need to start talking to you like you're Rarity. Do you want that? Do you want to be worst pony? That can be arranged. The rankings aren't set in stone.
Because you were a moron.
And I don't know that I can trust a moron to learn from experience.
Not a chance. Not Pinkie. She couldn't be the party pony we know and love if she were so blind.
I let you run away with Twilight. That was a mistake. I should have been keeping a closer eye on you, before it was too late. I'm not letting you do the same to Pinkie without a fight.
Consider my eyebrow raised. It's buried so deep in subtext that it might not even be there at all, and it's liberally slathered with bitterness, but that just might be an expression of regret as to how that night went. And that could perhaps be construed as a step in the direction of an apology.
I keep my expectations low when it comes to Rarity. That way she can actually manage to pleasantly surprise me once in a blue moon.
I vote the story now be about these guys. I've had enough of those bickering mares for a while.
Pinkie and 'Shy can still be in the story, if they want.
The Element of Honesty.
. . . Did I really just realize for the first time that all-caps italics don't really look like italics to me? Is that normal?
You know what? This is fine. Twilight Sparkle is still best pony. She's just not in this story. Crazy Bob (that was his name, right?) got tired of impersonating Batman, and now he's come to Equestria to imitate Twilight. So there's no problem at all.
Not falling for it.
Oh, no. "Tongue lashing" implies a large number of words. And you wish he was going to give you a lengthy lecture. The fewer words there are, the stronger each one is. And you are not going to like the few words he uses.
Too bad she's not here.
I can't believe I can't find a video of just the quote I want on Youtube.
But be warned: she has the magic power to levitate objects, read books, control lightning, and write fanfics, and when she gets angry she loses control of all her powers. You might want to obey her.
Will you now. Will you really.
This time, I've got a complaint that I've been saving. I need to conserve my complaints if I want to aim to keep this up until the end of the story without repeating myself (though I'm going to have to allow pretty similar complaints at some point). For the past few chapters, I've had another complaint I could make, and this one I knew would keep. But now, it has fully ripened. It has gone from being an irritant to being a problem. Now is the opportune moment. For that matter, now you already know what I'm going to say, if you've been paying attention.
I don't like your characterization. The complaint was going to be just that I didn't like how you were
betrayingportraying (actual Freudian slip, preserved for posterity) Twilight, but now Pinkie gets to join in too. But it's still mostly Twilight, or perhaps I should say Crazy Bob. Because this isn't Twilight. Not anymore.Incidentally, I'm assuming this is why I wasn't a big fan of the last chapter. I have no attachment to any ship of Crazy Bob.
I am a little disappointed in Gardez's taste.
Best chapter so far. It's so wonderful to be getting the deep complexities of sex and love from ponyfic for once. Big Mac's role surprised me; Luna's didn't. I'm very intrigued to see (slowly) where this goes.
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Congratulations. You've made an insulting and obtusely condescending comment about a well-loved story and made yourself look like a dick.
Would you like a cookie?
To Borg, after reading your post, I laughed so hard
(Click on it the text lol..... Do it!!)
Ahem...
You know what, Applejack? Go fuck yourself. Seriously. Fluttershy is SOOO off-limits.
Alright, here's my guess as to what's going on. Possible assumption-based spoilers ahead...
Luna doesn't love Twilight- That's my first guess. In the end, this whole 'Romance Education' thing is her way of both teaching Twilight how love actually works and letting her off without saying 'no' upfront. This way, she can be sure to explain to Twilight why and how she doesn't love her back, and in the process even shed a little light on how Twilight's feelings may not be love in the first place.
Thus why Luna is demanding Twilight get experience in a long-term relationship. She wants her to see what love actually is, so not only does she know what to prepare for, but what to identify, meaning Twilight may be able to get to the 'no Luna love for me' conclusion without it being explained to her directly. In a way, Applejack was right in saying Luna's really playing with Twilight, but what she thinks is the reason is a lot more sinister than what the truth probably is.
The reason I say this is because of Twilight's outright denial of the sheer concept that Luna may not share her feelings. When a protagonist starts saying things along the lines of, 'that can't be true', that immediately puts forward the common 'main character misinterpreting a situation' trope.
You've written Big Mac realy likable. To be honnest, I don't see him in that type of light very often. I thought him here to a believable plotkey. His affinity for family makes his assumtions and predictions regarding breaburn and AJ seem grounded, and his canon dependibility, much like AJ, make his encouter with Twilight seem believable.
On an other note, i went intough this chapter wanting resolve for most of the conflicts currently in play. Particularly Br-Twi, Rar-Dash and AJ-Twi were the relations that i deemd most in need of further exploration. This chapter exeeded expectations. I am delighted to inform you i am looking forward for the next chapter, which i will probably read now.
As of yet, this story is begining to shape as one of my favorits. This is a particular feat, as i am normaly not as enthralled by explicit stories. /10