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Lunatics... by Luna, that line was gold!
Oh god.... I think I was crying through most of that. I'm so glad that they made up instead of landing at rock-bottom. I hate the shipfics where things are going great, there's actually a (non sexual) plot, and then the author decides that one of them is going to screw something up, or die, or maybe ditch their counterpart for some Ursa Minor with a cape and . This, though? it started as a LunaTwi, then became something better. A CheeriTwi. And I love that you got me to cry in happiness for that great scene. Bravo, bravo!
AAAAAAH STOP DROPPING HINTS.
Oh god, all these hints. "CheeriTwi," SuperBigMac? The next (last) chapter is BOUND to leave you with a "WHAT A TWIST" ending. Watch, as OMFG, it wasn't obvious before this chapter, but now...
I read a piece of this everyday, and I don't know how I got through my days before it.
“GET OUT OF MY LIBRARY!”
1. You are a great writer, loved this story.
2. I'm glad everything worked out for the best, I almost cried when I thought cherrilee was not going to take her back.
3. This is the one of the first clopfic where I've seen people 69, the only other time I've seen it, they were humanized, and it did not last very long
Everything about this is absolutely amazing. Everything.
God damn, how can someone write this good ? Have you written a book ? Write a book. Right now . Become famous . I'll buy it, for crying out loud .
I was so happy for twilight. Still thinking of braeburn. It's so sad I can tell my mom she always mages me to go read a book.
I was so happy for twilight. Still thinking of braeburn. It's so sad I can tell my mom she always nags
me to go read a book.
this was a twi-lun-rar-dash-burn-cheer fic...........sooo many ships! in ONE story!? You sir, have esploded my mind
Dude you are a genius man! I was sad, then pissed, then happy, then arosued. You SEROUSLY need to write a book. I would buy it in a heartbeat. The characterization of twilight and the rest are just spot on. Kudos. The only story that I have read on here that even comes close to your writing talent was study buddies by samsara. Keep writing dude. It can really take you somewhere
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Wow... I'm almost speechless... This was... WOW...
VERY VERY well written!
Great! I'm so happy they made up.
I hope nothing bad will happen in two left chapters
My hatred for Luna hath Increased. Like seriously, she was just actin' all like a bitch. Bitch
Anyway. At the end there -This is something. This is real. This is love.- This came to mind.
No words or actions can express this story! NONE
this is.... oh fuck... epic just epic I FUKKEN LOVE IT!
I don't know whether I hate or love Luna. I just love Twilight's "are you insane?!" reaction when Luna drops the charades.
This is ... I love this story.
Really short review this time, I actually remember parts of this chapter, found the "meant break up scene" to be quite touching, the meeting and all the talking flowed nice, and I remembered most of the parts of the squirting scene hehe
Dunno if it was mentioned later in the forum, but I found out later that anyone can learn how to do it, it just takes training for non-naturals
This is the fic ever. And I love it.
As I just read it again, I must say, the "original" ending is better for me, it just seams more real.
Have a moustache
the fic should of ended just before the final clop. would of been a perfect timing, there was already enough clop ya know?
God I hate this story. So much.
919404 Then why do you keep reading and commenting?
ok, not bad. Luna's a bitch but she's a bitch for sort of the right reasons. I suppose I saw it coming about 3 or 4 chapters back but I was too busy reading the story to comment on it. I never thought of her as that... harsh before this fic, still don't really but it worked well for this fic even though I was expecting something else (then again, that is the fun in reading these. No one has exactly the same view on things as me so the insight makes things interesting.) It looks like I still have a few chapters to go but they might just be bonus material; so far though, good story.
Ha! Called it on Luna! Also, manly tears were shed when Twilight and Cheerilee were talking in the library doorway. Powerful scene, excellent writing.
Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!
I had to pause in my reading here to say:
Oh HELL no.
(Also, damn! Good job making me completely forget about Luna until now!)
You. Author.
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I would actually hate you right now if not for the fact that feeling things is exactly what I hope to get out of reading fiction.
...
Well. I wasn't wrong.
But I wasn't expecting it to get turned around like that either.
So:
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M. Bison: YES!!! YEEEESSSSS!!!!!!! Not much more to say, except that this story is probably perfection.
So many people believe that a relationship loses something after the buzz, the high, the "light" is gone. But that literally could not be more wrong. And yes, I used literally correctly.
When two people, or three, or four, or ... when people first fall in love (typically after they've had sex, but not always) they have a "high" stage. The woman's brain is flooded with primarily Oxytocin, and some Estrogen, and a smattering a miscellaneous chemicals. The man's is flooded with Vasopressin (less than the woman's Oxytocin) and a myriad of other chemicals. This is the "high". The purpose of this high is to literally alter the fundamental state of a person's self. It alters what one thinks about when they think about themselves. When someone after this stage (typically several, although up to seven to eight months) thinks about "me" the image that comes to mind will include their partner. The part of their brain labeled "loved one(s)" will literally activate when they try to define themselves. That, that is love. Having your very identity described by the one you love. And the fact that we do not know this as a people, that this is not the most cherished and lauded fact in all of the experience of love ... that is a deep, deep tragedy. More people need to read things like this chapter, so that we know: even when the high is gone, when there are no more butterflies, especially then, you are in love.
"We did it. She found me. I found her."
I was literaly crying, like, out loud; bawling.
You're a great Author.
Sex or not (which was still amazing anyway), this story was beautiful. No, wait. This story is beautiful. The only thing I can think to do, that I think feels right, is to thank you for writing it. Thank you very much. I'll be recommending it to several people very soon.
Now if you'll excuse me, I have to devolve into a blubbering mess of emotions.
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I can't help but read that as "Get off my lawn!"
Seriously, I was half expecting Twilight to go into full-on Psycho Mode and (try to) toss Luna out with her magic. Possibly along with a sizable portion of the room.
I can't use words to describe this properly. It doesn't do it justice. All I can say is that this is so fucking awesomesamus. And that's underestimating highly. I love this so much! Thank you for writing this and posting here. Thank you!
919404 Your Avatar is Nicki Manaj. You're not allowed to hate things.
1058054You too? Am I the only one who got a reverse Envy Adams vibe from Luna, throughout the fic?
Also, "Aw, jeez! Not again!" he cries." I absolutely lost it here.
troll luna...
also, this was sweet.
Wow, and I thought she was being a bitch before.
Luna's Xanatos Gambit? Dayum.
The funny thing is that Celestia AND Cheerilee have the same VA. Luna! Stop making making meta jokes!
Wow, now that was a very exciting chapter. I was half expecting Dash to watch. Also, I feel like I would have been extremely upset if Twi had gone with Luna and given up on Cheerilee. Simply marvelous, that is what this story is.
Enlisting all your friends. That's good. A grand scale usually helps.
I understand that we are talking about your sister, here, AJ, but you can't let nepotism blind you. You can't just go easy on the CMC like that, when Twilight's love life is on the line.
Well . . . I hardly think NMM winning would have strengthened Discord's seal, so we'd best not forget him. Who knows what would happen with both of those free simultaneously. But I don't think it would be eternal night; that's far too static for Discord.
On the other hoof, with those two running loose in Equestria, I suspect Chrysalis would have steered well clear, so she's probably not an issue. And I don't think Sombra could have done any more damage, so I guess he doesn't matter either.
Now, you are ready. Or it's another test. I can't scrute Luna from so little.
You're just having some idiotic dream. (We're working with Luna here; that isn't inconceivable.)
And yet, you cannot make out.
She may have a point . . .
I mean, consider: You became deeply infatuated with Tia's sister, yet could not explain why. Your first time with a mare was with a white unicorn. And when you fell truly in love, it was with a teacher. Are you sure you're not just chasing your foolish dreams of Tia, as best you can?
You do realize that's exactly how evolution intended things to work, right? Not that you're following evolution's designs, but that's not the point.
That sounds . . . implausible. Unless Cheerilee's very good at keeping secrets . . .
You know, most of my mind still doesn't know what I'm doing here. My frontal lobe's all "okay, guys, we're doing well; we're getting steadily closer to the goal of reading In the Garden of Good and Evil." And the rest of my brain totally doesn't care, since it's been made eminently clear that they don't get a vote, so what do the reasons matter to them? Only the facts of when and how they must work matter.
"Without us?" Pinkie Pie nods, closing her eyes. "You'd be a broken shell of a mare, alone and bitter, and Equestria would be cloaked in eternal night
is that referencing "inner Demons" a fan fic in this group
also how is this story still going this is the happy ever after moment but i still have atleast 3 more chapters
OH MY GOD YUS! I had faith they would get back together! : twilightsmile :
If they broke up....... : pinkamena : Heheheheheh.........
Such a sweet ending <3
9,5/10
Its a well constructed resolve to the conflict. I did think that the scene with Luna was a bit... Unexpexted. I was almost waiting for a consipracy, since you've hinted at bigger play by letting Twilight notice that Luna knew of Cheerilee's letter. But i think this concludes the story well. Only the epiloge to go.
~Stjonal
LUNA YOU'RE SUCH A ... well... LUNATIC!!!! WHY ON EARTH WOULD YOU DO THAT??!!!!?!?!?!? but the ending was adorable, so its okay. WAIT THAT'S NOT THE ENS WHAT