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dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Derpy_Hooves.png Why is this suddenly featured? This fic is over a year old. It's not even that good. I guess people like character assassination and derp plots. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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Oh, Natural Glitch, will you ever tire of being that guy who dislikes something that most others like just for attention? No? Good, because change scares me.
Heh. Your Luna is mean, and kind of funny. Is she jealous? I miss the awkward-regretful Luna from earlier chapters, though. I love your flying-as-awesome scene, too.
this fic gets a bonus chapter and gets featured again. dafuq?
Fuck to the yeah.
593334 Clearly, because there's nothing wrong with this fic at all, and it's the epitome of literature and anyone who disagrees just wants attention (what kind of sense does that make? It's not like I get paid or something. Jealous of what? That I don't have a magnum opus that stupefy's the characters for the sake of a plot that doesn't make sense to begin with and is so far from the source characterization it might as well be changelings doing all the roles?) because that's the only possible explanation. I mean, a lot of people like Justin Beiber, so I guess he's good and everyone who doesn't like him must be a jealous hater, right?
Why is this featured just because it get's a bonus chapter?
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trolololololol
Not bad, not bad. Excellent, even. But jesus christ this fic is ancient, give it a rest. The ending we got was good enough, like I said before.
Although adorable Twilestia is always nice.
593491 Do you mean me, or yourself? I'm being entirely honest here. I don't see how having a different opinion is considered trolling. "You're free to have an opinion. Unless, of course, it's different, then you don't get to have an opinion."
I even agree with your second comment.
This is the final nail in the coffin of the featured box, I think.
Hopefully knighty can pull a Frankenstein.
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I think they changed the featured system to allow continued stories. A good choice.
Fantastic chapter. Just picked this up again after a few months. You show a lot of character depth and complexity in Celestia and Twilight. Rivaling that of Eternal (hopefully saying that isn't sacrilegious), albeit less subtle.
593290 Silence you. Twilestia rules.
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ah, the infamous holier-than-thou armchair critic
593549 Quite literally, if you think about it.
oh hey...i kind of forgot this existed. Welp found it again i guess?
593554 You win this round.
593552 Uh... okay then? I'm infamous? Just because I don't like this fic? That's allowed, right? I just wanted to know how is featured once again. I'm guessing that it's because they changed the rules again or something. Oh, and the answer to most of my criticism is "creative liberties" and "this is just a clop."
Oh, and I looked up the term "Armchair Critic." Yeah, I guess that fit's me pretty well. But, so is every critic ever, so I don't see how it get's it own category. People review games (even indie games), but they can't make one better, right?
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There is actually a post on the main page literally minutes old explaining that the change to the featured box.
593623 Oh... well then.
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This is getting awkward.
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So, how was your day?
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Diablo 3 comes out in.... four hours and forty minutes. Couldn't focus at all today.
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You're well within your rights to dislike this story, or any story. I'll never dispute that. But if you dislike something, you say your piece and you move on to find something you do like. You don't stick around and keep commenting on the story you dislike, making the same tired arguments over and over and over again, hovering over the site with the story favourited just so you can swoop in and comment the moment a new chapter appears just so everyone knows that yeah, you hate this story alright!
That is, you don't do that unless that's the only attention you can possibly garner for yourself, because you haven't got a creative bone in your body and could never do anything that could match this "terrible" story, because you can't create something for yourself so you will tear everyone else down and make people watch you do it. You're just a troll, and yes, I've committed the cardinal sin of feeding you, but sometimes people just need to be called on their bull.
170K FRICKIN WORDS!?!?!? OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH THAT IS SO UNBELIEVABLE!!!!! And impressive clop
I give this clopfic 20 yays
170K FRICKING WORDS!?!?!? OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH THAT IS SO UNBELIEVABLE!!!!!! NICE WORK!
I give the clop part 20 yays
593646 Huh. Well, then. I only wanted to know why this was featured again, but someone told me already. I had no idea that people were so emotionally invested into this. My comment looked pretty harmless to me. I mean; it's like I'm a mouse in a lion's den (I love that analogy), so I don't see why little old me would cause a stir from such a simple fleeting comment. I even like SleeplessBrony, so I don't see the problem. Well, except maybe wasting comments about nothing.
Well, except maybe this:
Way to go, Sleepless! You're the first to get the feature box twice! What are you going to do now?! (please say Disney Land!)
I teared up at the 'Celestia-forever-alone' bit, not gonna lie. My thoughts on reading your journal were that perhaps you hadn't planned originally on having any TwilightxCelestia pairing. But having read your whole story, I'm kind of sad you haven't written a completely separate story (canon with this one but in it's own right) for the two. This particular chapter... the way you have handled Twilight and Celestia together. I could read chapters like these all day.
I just wanna throw a big thank-you your way. Your story is the first fanfic (from MLP) I ever read. I had put off reading fanfiction from MLP for so long because I knew there would be a lot of really really awful writing and I didn't want to weed through it all just to find a good story or two. Well your story wasn't just a good one-- it was a great one.
You're the one who made me realize that I'd be totally willing to tread through the hundreds of bad fics just to find even one with the superbly accurate characterization and MLP-esque story-telling skills you have shown us. Your story shares the place of my all-time favorite novel/stories of all time (that being tied with AstheticB's Ponies Make War).
So thanks to you, good sir.
593641 Wait, what?! What am I still doing here?! What are you still doing here?! We've got dungeons to crawl! (just kidding, my PC chugs. It will never get to play anything awesome)
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Everyone's trolling. Nah, I was just being a dick. And have you ever met a Richard you didn't hate? I haven't.
But yeah, enough is enough. The fic was fine as is. This is kind of... Crazy. Still excellent, but why not write an entirely new fic at this point? Still amazing Twilestia though.
593772 This completely doesn't have to do with anything, but your avatar always makes me chuckle.
lol, new chapter makes it featured again. but in seriousness, lovin this alt ending. the suspense building up is KILLING me tho
I just don't know why,but Luna made me laugh in this xD
And don't get me started on Twilight's inner thoughs x'DDD
And Celly
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Welcome to Good Burger Home of the Good Burger.
this is good
You have can have your opinion, just know you're wrong.
other than that, its a read. I see nothing wrong with it.
So SB, was it originally just going to end with this scene or did you change the ending a bit to extend it another chapter?
Either way, back to the feature box with you!
Awaiting the conclusion
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(Up the inside of her what? Up the inside of her what?)
Why is this featured at 8 months old?
Trolluna is so amazing. Well done.
TwiLestia done well. Though Twilight is on the rebound so kinda a bit off putting. But she has control over it.
Next chapter is going to be good I think...
I just love it whenever you write anything. It's like you can barely stop yourself from writing gold. I bet even your tax statements sound heavenly.
Oh Celestia above. That horrible moment in a great chapter where it all ends...
Your Twilestia rivals Varanus' and devices. I really like how Twilights mind is all over the place, which it kinda should be. Your characterization of Celestia is spot on. Luna is kind of a cutthroat bitch. The flight scene was amazing and well described. (I had to look up a few words to better understand their motions) Annnnnd that is all.
To future commenters : if you're gonna voice hate comments on a popular story (this one happens to be extraordinary, I dunno how you can even hate it outside of hating clop), don't come back to reply to every person who tells you you're wrong. There are 1000 people who disagree with you, we don't care about hearing your opinion one thousand times.
"This is so strange, isn't it Celly?" Luna grins wickedly. "I seem to remember it was always me stealing lovers from between your sheets. My, how things have changed."
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Also, can't wait for the next chapter!
You know what I love? When you express an opinion contrary to what's the most popular stance and are called out as a troll for it. Stay classy, readers. But yeah, NaturalGlitch does have a point: almost everybody in the story acts quite OOC for the sake of it being a fapfiction, which is a shame; I personally think the author is a good writer, he just messed up the characterization for everybody (especially Twilight).
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My guess that's because Luna messed her up a lot.
And yeah,i's a good thing she has control over it.
I find it quite interesting that the complaints people seem to levy against this story is that it does not do the characters justice. The problem, of course, is that you cannot imagine them in circumstances other than those portrayed in the show. No shipping or clopfic would match that criterion. Ever. It won't happen.
Perhaps folks forget that one of the main things with reading is using your imagination. Remove the idea of the circumstances being 'uncanon' for the moment. Take them as they are. The events happen, they're a plot-device (excuse the pun). Now consider how each character would act and react, what their body language, and speech, would be in each circumstance. If you accept that the events that occur in this story are used as a writing device (as many of the same are in the show itself) you will realize that SB's characterization of the ponies is spot on. More so than any writer I've encountered other than the ones who write the show itself.
I'm not saying this to just defend a fic I like. I'm saying it because I genuinely believe it to be true, and I have a sneaking suspicion that most of the criticism that this story is somehow 'uncharacteristic' to be based on the fact that these ponies are put into situations where they are in relationships, and yes, have sex. Ignore that Twilight would never have sex with Rainbow Dash in the show. That kind of thing is a real world issue and the writing for something like that is tied up in tons and tons of red tape and regulations, and given the targeted demographic, is just ethically inappropriate. What matters is that in a world where such circumstances exist, the way these characters are portrayed is more than in sync with the scripting of one of the writers of the show.
I'm glad you wanted to shed out some more chapters for this ship. I think they are cute.
This was the first clop fic I read and it remains as the best.
I like the way you characterize the characters. Way more adult themed and not children in adult situations. Besides, it's not like this story would make sense if all the ponies were "in character".
This might have been better as a one-shot in the RR universe. I just can't see this as an Alternate. Cheerilee was just too well characterized!
I look forward to more from you!
And here I was, hoping 'I love you' would be said :L
I'm utterly, even with my ridiculous and unfounded knowledge of words, unable to explain how much I love this story. And then you give me Twilestia!?
AND THEN
And then, you go directly towards where I want you to be, and make it more than two chapters?
Marry Me? Straightly?
(Yes, I know - we'll work that bit out later)
I'd like to thank you for never responding to the trolls. It never gets recognized, because who would recognize something that didn't happen, but rarely does such a popular author not respond to harsh words at all, and it's refreshing to not get caught up in the drama that people want to stir up. Also, feel free to delete those comments, no one will know and it will make everpony's lives better.