What the hell did I expect, I've always been a train wreck - Mandopony
1000 years. No... More than that.
How long? ... How many thousand years was I lost?
My name is... I believe it is Dark Siren.
How many centuries have passed since I spoke to anypony?
How many centuries have passed since I felt any warmth?
How many centuries have passed since I went into this darkness?
A thunderclap.
"What was that!?"
"An attack!?"
The cold sensation is gone.
'Better open your eyes'
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I like we're this is going please continue and don't let the down thumbs get to you
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I write for fun, not for likes.
I don't care who dislikes this.
So don't worry, that won't make me stop writing.
I like it I do keep going
im liking the story so far
well siren lives up to her name thats for sure
MORE!!!!!
also "shrugg" is only supposed to have one "g".
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Thanks for pointing that out, and I'm happy that you like the story so far.
3388019 oh i do, and no problem
so i am starting to think you are some sorta typeing speed person ( fail ) so how many chapters are left for the day? (please say a tonne more)
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It's getting pretty late at my place so no, I'm finished for today.
I try to get atleast one chapter done tomorrow.
We'll have to see and wait for it, maybe I get something done, maybe not
3388823 meh take your time, rushing stories never ends well. due to plot holes and stuff
you... you killed her, how could you? you are one brave motherbucker.
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As I said.... It was necessary for the progress.... please don't hate me!
3401696 i dont hate you. Just cant wait to see where this leads though
Oops! Found some mistakes!
Sorry about that!
This story was epic, not Homestuck epic, but epic.
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It's not even finished yet
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hmmmmm, i didnt like this chapter as much as the others, im not sure why. i guess it is cause it is weird as in the descriptions of what is happening, or maybe just the it was just how it didnt seem like it was following one idea, like one paragraph it would seem like it is a self realization then next paragraph it turns brutal the vice virsa,
alright i think i under stand why he knocked luna out, she was going all nightmare moon and siren stopped it. To ephisis it you could write "her eyes were shining with the shadow of her old self, as loneyness and hate started worming around her" something like that maybe?
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It's not loneliness and it's not Nightmare Moon. I know that they switch around pretty fast, but that's the inner conflict thing and all that, and why everything happened will be explained next chapter so don't worry, I plan on answer some of the questions that are up right now.
Okay I should have taken care of the few mistakes that could be found
Tell me if you found some more,
and I'm sorry for any mistake that might be there, I have been distracted a few times writing this, supid family 
I like the idea of a super shy Shining Armor!
Whoops! Chapter 22? Something, somewhere went terribly wrong!
So okay we all know I'm stupid
I'm sorry.....
Or not
Okay I looked over the chapter and edited so far everything that caught my eye.
Please tell me if you find anything else that needs to be corrected.
This story is awesome!
I love it
Don mind the whole killing thing, I mean it's just one of these ficswhere it's okay to kill of cannon characters.
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Dude that's morbid!
.... But I guess you're right! 
Well, this was strange.
... I love it!
Anyone else hungry? •-•
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You shouldn't eat a dark mad god, it's unhealthy
3613291 nah, just throw it in a stew and boil the organs. Add some barbecue sauce and serve in skull bowls with bone cutlery. Save the eyeballs for desert, and make some blood flavored ice cream to go with.
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Sounds good to me
gaah, so gooooood
I thought the title was 'Hated (and then the name of another god scrambled)
And in that moment siren chose her path... She would follow her dream through untold trials.... And buy an ice cream cone. My brain sorta derped and thought it would be funny if she gets a cutie mark of an ice cream cone in the middle of killing someone. I'm weird aren't i?
That sequel better wrap up things for siren or else imma be mad.
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That's sad...
But if you think so.... okay.