During the war, back on earth, Avengers decided to help the war. The war was mainly about Americans and Russians. Tony thought that he does not need to stay in the Avengers. Avengers who were supposed to protect the planet was destroying the planet. So, Tony decided to go to the other universes and help them out from rising evils. And it has been more than 14 years of doing so. He helped out Asguard but it was too late. But instead, he got a blessed gift from Odin. He gave him their ancestor's Artifact that was never been revealed, and passed away. He grew more powerful every time, and started to travel almost every multi-verse he can reach. But after he take down so many enemies, he wanted to stop. No... retire. He grew old. He went back home to have vacations. But... Something has gone wrong....
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This is quite hilarious. You have a track.
tracking now
*tracks*
You have another track. As you mentioned at the start of the chapter, there are quite a few grammatical errors. I suggest a proof-reader, which I wouldn't mind being. PM me if you're interested.
very interesting just needs a bit of editing (i do understand what you mean to say though)
Tracking time
Also, your grammar is pretty good :) Looking forwards to future chaps
Like your cover image as to how you mixed 3D models with that of drawn pictures
I'm quite looking forward to our Tony's adventure
Go in full force!
As for being a foriegner, you're doing great
! Just at the end ya forgot a little. STILL, pretty awesome
"Don't tell me..."
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
Y I NO MAKE A STORY LIKE TAHT
Bar the gramatical errors (Which are understandable) your stories very humorous, can't wait to see where it goes!
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Sure. I would love to do that.
162714 can you make the next chapter soon?please!I AM GOING TO MAKE 2000 ACCOUNT TO FOLLOW YOU AND DO EVERYTHING FOR YOU.
I am your faithful student from now on.
although i don't know what my name will be
plus 1 loyal follower
Okay, another foreigner author, yay.
This is very good, the only problems I saw was the lack of a few spaces on the text.
Five star and tracking.
Iron Man, Robert Downey Jr, ponies and adventure = SOLD!!! 5/5 and tracking. I need moar.
I don't know why but here's a gif.
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Peace Out.
trCKED
by the nine i love this fic
by the nine i love this fic
Pretty good.Most fanfics with bad grammer i dont read.But this has better grammer than most iv read.A hint:Spiderses.I hope you make more soon.Because this is the very first Iron Man crossover iv ever come across on this site.TRACKED!!!!!Oh and btw.A simple MOAR is in order.MOOOOOOAAAAAARRRRRRRRRR
Gief moar
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*snort
So much laugh were had
I hope my proof-reading and editing helped, PM me if you want any more help.
Jarvis had been infected by a brony virus that Tony specially made for computers
infected by a brony virus that Tony
brony virus
Get me that virus. Now.
I will pay good, hard american dolars for it.
Brony stark is new super hero of equesria
Tony Stark is now best brony.
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This is kinda how I feel after reading this fic, only with more manly bravado. I love this fic, because it's well written, charming, funny and full of a lot of character. Also kudos to you on making Rainbow the first pony Tony meets, b/c in terms of personality they're very similar.
Peace Out.
Way to make RD cry, dumbass.
Still this is pretty amazing. And I would like to see what happens next.
Aye think zzat uu all poniz ar awezome.... (from anold)
I am working a new story. But I can't tell you what it is.
glad to see an update on this story. Good work so far, i'm hoping that this will be updated more regularly.
also...
first
I decided to post a little grammar error aside from my normal post anyway here it is "And her pet gummy gave mo respond" it should be "And her pet gummy gave no response" anyway nice chapter this story is pretty good aside from the grammar errors; you should get yourself a pre reader. Keep up the great work
175043 come on you have to make more ! NOT A NEW STORY,KEEP ON WITH THIS ONE PLEASE!!!COME ON!
The only thing I could think of was "Spike...you break those chains. Don't let the equine get you down and and escape to the north to freedom."
Good chapter though.
Dude, you should of PM'ed me again for a pre-read. I'm always happy to help.
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at once.
Dude don't worry. I' m actually writing 3 stories
Twilight seemed to be extremely out of character.
That is the only problem I really have with this chapter.
175480 Sorry I'll try this time. since I'm in a different country, Time line is different. so when it's morning in America, It's sunset in Korea.
CLIFFHANGER
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Dude, I'm in England. Less of a time difference.
178041 ho, alright then. I am working on chapter 4 and 5 right now, and I will send you those pretty soon.
All worship Celestia's flank!!!
you'll get an idea if you watch my.... teaser trailer thing.... Not really a trailer but short film
Optimus prime and Celestia
SLAVE!
This is so epic...JARVIS is going to become the Terminator up in here!
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not really actually, but I am writing a story about Princess Celestia turning in to Terminator.
But, yes. Jarvis is going to invade Ponyvill, but he will not attack ponies because He is a Brony, too
meh, could be better
So why have I not yet received this for pre-reading?
I'm gonna be the first to say it: There actually is magic rom Iron Man's universe. He's worked with Thor, Doctor Strange, fought Loki and Mandarin, and there are a few other examples I could throw in, but meh.
Still, this is pretty good so far.
I was in rush. I guess. I'll update my story as soon as possible>>226146
I normally don't pay attention to grammar but you need to go over your stories atleast twice to fix errors...but overall AWESOME STORY!