This story is a sequel to The Revival of a Heart
The Alliance has failed. The Prophesy has failed. The Essences of Concord have failed. With Prince Ramth Sethiop's betrayal, the Demon's awakening was all but secured.
Ash lives on however. Though his friend's actions haunt his very soul, there are others that can help him mend his wounds.
Adapting to life on four furry hooved legs isn't easy however and neither is integrating himself into Equestrian culture. Ash will face dangers he never would have imagined: sugar overdoses, proper horn care, a trio of fillies with hypnotic abilities searching for their talents, Winter Wrap Up, and scandalous notes in the shape of cartoonish hearts.
Life was easier when most problems could be solved with a simple fireball.
A sequel to The Revival of a Heart.
Art by MageBlanc
I like his panic attack over being naked actually.
keep it up!
Story is still good, but like the first one sometimes you make small mistakes like misuse of tenses(Accidential, like in the pre-last chapter of first one)
Also... Well, Choosing coverarts like this one is likely to make people wary of your story. Perhaps something of better quality would be better.
Especially since I can still see white around Fluttershy.
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Yeah, well, practice makes better. Hopefully I'm improving and I hope these errors aren't making reading the story a challenge.
Also, new art that I stole from deviantart...one of these days, I'll pick up the pen myself...
That was sweet...
3047897 Glad you thought so. I'd love to have illustration.
...Ash... Pony up and ask
out...
...Spiders creep me the fu*k out too..
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Spiders make the best phobias! Right next to erotophobia, erythrophobia, and kakorrhaphiophobia, all of which Ash may or may not have. In other words, don't hold your breath, it could be a while before he finds the courage. Heck, I might have to have Fluttershy make the first move....
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Let me guess, during his adventures he got stuck in a MASSIVE spiders web with a HUMUNGISE spider with HUGE, DRIPPING fangs?
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I made a very short mention in the first story...
Interpret that as you will.
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Whoops musta missed that...
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So he also apparently hates trees. Sorry, but I don't think it'll work out
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HE WILL LOVE HER!
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... I see what you did there...
(Dr.Who)
Lol, "Cutie Mark Extraterrestrial Extractors"