Celestia's week has not been fun. First, her younger sister decides she's in no condition to rule and steals her job, then Discord disappears on her when she needs him most, and now she's stained her favorite bed sheets. Could this week get any worse?
But hey, at least that means the pregnancy's almost over. Soon, she'll be cradling her newborn baby, covering him or her with kisses and nuzzles as Luna, Twilight, and Discord watch beside her, waiting for their turn to hold. Everything'll go smoothly, her personal doctors will make sure of it. Childbirth's a breeze when you're a princess.
Right?
Written for the kilala97 Fun Fact contest.
Cover art by kilala97.
Chapters (1)
I enjoyed this a lot :)
That was fun!
Love the idea that the Princesses don't have personal doctors...although Celestia really should have at least called for the world's best obstetrician to be stationed in the palace the minute she learned she was pregnant.
This was awesome. Thanks for writing this.
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No problem, and thanks for the fave.
I love the chapter title. Nice XD
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Aren't alliterations always appreciated?
so... you gonna do others of this 'verse?
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I've written additional stories that take place in the kilala97 universe and have several others planned, or do you mean more crazy pregnancy stories?
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yes. I mean, the spike/rarity pregnancies are hilarious just from the pictures... and you could do them justice in a story if this one is anything to go by.
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There's nothing planned. I've always felt that those pictures spoke for themselves.
I love you so much for writing this. Luna's character was aced perfectly, Celestia's labor speech had me in hysterics and your words were written very eloquently and placed nicely. The pacing was like a dance, up, down and all around, just like a good Discelestia fanfic should be. You kept the pairing mentioned in a fairly nice manner, and that ending made me melt into a puddle. Five out of five, and my Royal Stamp of Approval.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was a lot of fun to write. I'll be keeping that stamp close to heart
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Looking forward to your entry.
I loved it, i mean you may want to reread it due to quite a few little spelling and grammatical errors, however none were really immersion breaking.
Also this
Made my day.
5710988 Also, you get an extra point for that fabulous alliteration. And hopefully, if I have time, I'll enter. I'm still working out the kinks, but I have plenty of time to procrastinate... right?
THIS IS AWESOME!
to better ponify the term I would recommend "open forelegs and a sisterly embrace". I also noticed a little error, please get to it when you can. I think you meant to say "she refused to accept as deserved." I found a few other errors, but these two were the first I really noticed.
A quick little amendment to this, here's another of the errors I noticed
I believe you meant to say "But leave the cart"
Don't feel too bad both are simple mistakes, the first I see a lot of, people writing about ponies and using the arm terms. They're ponies, that means they have forelegs where we have arms. Try to be mindful of terms in the future, I really enjoyed the story.
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Thanks for catching those. I wasn't too sure if I wanted to say "forelegs" since the phrasing of "open forelegs" doesn't sound right.
I almost didn't read it thanks to the error.
Owed
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Thanks for catching that.
And this kids, is why Illusion is an only child
Nice job with this. I loved it!
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Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the fave.
Sweet baby of Celestia, I love a good labor scene
Hilarious!
Good fun.
This was funny and hilarious, I couldn't stop laughing
When the doctor came, I couldn't help but feel there needed to be a Rick and Moray reference, maybe even a crossover xD. That was really cute, like, super duper cute and I'm very happy I read this.
That was adorable and well written!! :D
Nice fic with nice plot! Some parts were really funny with Discord not "slithering like a snake" and "popping up like a spring."
Overall, nice story, good grammar most of the time; great/cute plot, awesome ships/contest entry, pregnancy and fic/chapter titles. LOL. Also, Discord deserves the pregnancy screams, LOL. He was really nice to Celly though, so I do say "poor him." This is an awesome, cute fic - I wish it was canon! XD
Celestia trying to take down Discord with her was the best. Earn yourself a fave man
Hello! I read and reviewed this and I feel a bit sad that it didn't quite click for me. I don't mean I thought it was bad -- certainly not! But maybe my unfamiliarity with the whole kilala97 thing hurt it a little for my personal taste. Solidly written though and the alien doctor was very Discordish.