Amber has turned eighteen, meaning her life in the orphanage is now over, it's time for her to move on. But she can't being herself to leave, because even as she packed her bag and shipped out her belongings, she realized that there was something that she forgot to bring with her. The two ponies who have been the only family she has ever had, Hot Head, and Lucky.
I love this sooooooooo much I cry every time
Oh, one thing though
Surprise Fletcher! XD
5308123 fixed.....
It's Hot Head. Not Hot Shot.
5308534 The whole time I was writing this I tried not to make that mistake....and I did it anyway...anyway, fixed.
The train Amber missed at the station was The Feel Express, final destination Emotionville, she gave me her ticket...
Also: “When why did you come back?” - you meant then didn't you?
5308553 Doesn't look fixed to me
How old are the other two?
5309847 Based on what Kilala wrote, they'd be 15 in this story.
5309859
Alright. Thanks
5309859 One word. Beautiful.
Nice job!
I thought its hot head not hot shot
5333794 It is, I just slipped up on his name a couple times...though I thought I'd fixed them all until now...
I..............I just...............................This reminds me of my last day of elementary...............Gosh
Funny how a single letter can change something so much.
That aside, I really liked this chapter. I really like seeing these characters expanded upon.